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Great bro! Obviously it has it’s own flaws. Because nothing is perfect. The novel starts off great with explaining everything what going on in a good way. ( I wouldn’t say perfect) Keep working hard like this and you will definitely achieve something in life. (And just my advice! Work on a noevl at a time. Don’t work on multiple projects)
This novel is amazing! It has a very good world building and character design. The descriptions of the characters and the action + gore is very interesting to read! The story is overall very good! Can’t wait for more updates! 😊
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Your writing is very elegant, though I think this work is a bit wordy, which makes it hard to stay immersed in the story. I don't mean that it's boring. On contrary, the story is pretty well defined. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Great bro! Obviously it has it’s own flaws. Because nothing is perfect. The novel starts off great with explaining everything what going on in a good way. ( I wouldn’t say perfect) Keep working hard like this and you will definitely achieve something in life. (And just my advice! Work on a noevl at a time. Don’t work on multiple projects)
This novel is amazing! It has a very good world building and character design. The descriptions of the characters and the action + gore is very interesting to read! The story is overall very good! Can’t wait for more updates! 😊
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Your writing is very elegant, though I think this work is a bit wordy, which makes it hard to stay immersed in the story. I don't mean that it's boring. On contrary, the story is pretty well defined. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.