The Battle Cries

Good job, this story potential, no regressor, no system, no level. Just like old fantasy medieval. keep it work man, keep it update. I still waiting. Gratzz..

LV 2

Aidan_Grey

The writing quality is superb, with a seamless flow that keeps the reader engaged from start to finish. and also i like there is no system or regression on the story keep it up

I really like the way you tell the story, very honest and detailed. Especially during the battle, it was very...very brutal for me. Please keep updating. I'm waiting for surprises from your story. I'll support you.

LV 3

Theothegiant

Interesting story tho it takes a while to start, the first chapter was mostly world explanation and that's something you might want to keep short in the beginning and explain the rest through dialogue and hints or having the mc figure out, most people will just scroll past all of it or drop the book entirely so keep that in mind, other than that the descriptions are good and your choice of words were far from repetitive.

You'll need a bit of patience with this novel – the story takes its time, but I'm intrigued. I bet the character development will turn out to be quite engaging. Best of luck to the author – keep those words flowing! Oh, and I almost forgot, there are a few grammar errors, but they don't really bother me.

LV 1

antiRomance

The writing, the storyline is slow-paced, but interesting to follow. Each character is interesting to watch develop. The worldbuilding is good. The grammar is a little lacking, but it is understandable.keep going bro.

Good stories, i like ur detail story telling, the battle is good. I hope in the future have a lots war. I'll add ur story to my first collection.