HUNTER : The Man at The Top Of The Food Chain

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SaikiKusu

There are a few good HxH fanfics out there. This had the potential to be a good hxh fanfiction. The mc cheat is op, but at least the mc had to pay a reasonable price to use it. I can't say much about the MC's personality based on these few chapters, but from what I've seen, he's funny to watch. The plot appears to be following the anime's standard plot (just my guess from what I saw) The dialogue is excellent. There are only a few grammar errors, which is something to be respected these days. The author's writing style is good; he knows when to tell and when to show. The chapter's shape is appealing to the eye. well i have said what i have seen so far. i can only say: more chapters please

LV 11

Abaddon1

Everything so far is good. All I hope is that he dosen't become too overpowered too fast. ........................................................

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Lackada1sical

Evaluation: Above Average (Potential Gem). WQ: With less to no mistake grammatical errors and a well thought/structured storyline, plus long chapters. 5/5 SD: This is a semi canon-compliant with an average to fast pace development without affecting the story & MC progression. 5/5 CD: MC is a SI/OC-reincarnator which utilizes his previous earth life experiences & foreknowledge of HxHVerse to go with the plot & avoid certain schemes of HxHVerse. MC isnt OP as (Basic/Gacha System w/o quest or stores) he needs to train/practice hard for every knowledge/experiences he gains in his system. MC has a chaotic-neutral persona which is apt for HxHVerse. 5/5 US: The release of chapters isn't upto speed as author-san prioritizes quality over quantity. 4/5 WB: As the story is still in the development phase we haven't noticed any other branch of NeN or part of the HxHVerse explored (currently finished at hunter exam). 4/5 My Opinion: Continue what you are doing as it seems you have developed your own writing style & don't be pressured too much as you are doing a good job keeping us on our feet. Don't be discouraged by the reviews but take it as a challenge to do better. Kudos to author-san and well wishes! xD

LV 5

ScarletFaire

I recommend this book because it's unique the quality of the store is amazing and the characters design and the updating stability and the world is amazing

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harla_quin

I really liked this sad that the author decided to leave it but whatever. Can anyone recommend some ajin fan fics I've only been able to find like 4 on webnovel with more than 5 chapters.

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MKN276

It does a great effort to disrespect HxH and discard the original Nen system for something that is almost a stereotypical portrayal of chinese fantasy. Pros: OC name actually fits. Cons: Discarded Nen system. MC motivation does depend on breaking the 4th wall. USE OF GRAPHIC WRITTEN ELEMENT to portray emotion in place of actual description. Puff! I just did instant powerup thing because I'm in a hurry for some reason that is not explained. It's just bad and I really hope those positive reviews are from author's friends.

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Kintaro498

Not a perfect story but I'm just in love with the MC! I can't help but cheer for him and laugh when he laughs! In fact Author is really good at making a character feel real, Gon act like Gon, and do things Gon would do and say, a lot of Authors in fanfiction struggle to give a character the same essence they had in the original media, but not here. And above anything else this fanfic is a really FUN experience, can't wait to read more 😁

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DaoistoSXxRV

It's interesting being a gourmet hunter is really a interesting choice that gives a lot of development possibilities to the story and i like the love interest

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True_Excalibur

This has the potential to be an excellent story. So far I have enjoyed the novel. The characters have a proper personality and the plot, even though based on the anime, has slight changes to make it very engaging. I especially like that the MC is becoming a Gourmet Hunter.