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so he was transmigrated in a wormhole to star wars... transmigrated means he took over a body in the star wars universe IE some dies or something.... the are no predators in the star wars universe so how did he "transmigrate" into one... just say he was trans ported through the worm hole. 🪱 not going to read it because you put a predator in the sw universe and makes no sense but I thought I woukd help you clear the description up since it makes no sense. just going to star it off the introduction which doesn't make expect much fro. the story itself.
Really glad to finally have a relly yautja story. Theres almost none on this site and the little they have the mc’s r all pu**ys. But this is a badas* mc from what I see so far and hope to get more chapters.
I really love the idea and so far it’s been good. Writing quality certainly isn’t the best but it’s not bad. The biggest complaint so far for me is the lack of interactions, the main character hasn’t done much other than hide and hunt different creatures which makes the story a little boring and repetitive. To the author, you are going to need to get a plot other than hunting creatures or else this won’t progress well.
Reveal Spoiler so he was transmigrated in a wormhole to star wars... transmigrated means he took over a body in the star wars universe IE some dies or something.... the are no predators in the star wars universe so how did he "transmigrate" into one... just say he was trans ported through the worm hole. 🪱 not going to read it because you put a predator in the sw universe and makes no sense but I thought I woukd help you clear the description up since it makes no sense. just going to star it off the introduction which doesn't make expect much fro. the story itself.
Really glad to finally have a relly yautja story. Theres almost none on this site and the little they have the mc’s r all pu**ys. But this is a badas* mc from what I see so far and hope to get more chapters.
I really love the idea and so far it’s been good. Writing quality certainly isn’t the best but it’s not bad. The biggest complaint so far for me is the lack of interactions, the main character hasn’t done much other than hide and hunt different creatures which makes the story a little boring and repetitive. To the author, you are going to need to get a plot other than hunting creatures or else this won’t progress well.
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