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Absolutely captivating story. Really love the seamless merging of all the different areas of marvel into one cohesive story that didn't start all over the place. Well done my guy, well... DONE!!😎😎😎😎😎
I didn’t get very far… dont get me wrong, the story premise is relativly fresh. The writing is decent, and the pacing is alright. What I really didn’t like was brodude naming his MC Rudeus… yeah, brodude literally named his MC after the 30 something year old pedo from Jobless Reincarnation. Also, miss me with that “he’s twelve now though so it’s okay if he pervs on twelve year old girls” my guy, he’s literally just a fat middle aged guy pretending to be a kid, his inner voice, his inner reflection it’s literally just still his old body. Just admit that you’re a groomer and turn yourself into your local the police department. *Deep breath* okay rant over. If you can over look that small issue then you wouldn’t mind this book.
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It's a great story for turning the brain off for a few hours every day. Sometimes, the writing style frustrates me because the more intelligent characters were just sounding like the mc's simplistic take on life. I imagined him to be a character like Cid from Eminence in Shadow, who is a very flippant character in a very serious world. I wish that could have been showcased properly. I'm sure the author will have all the chances in the world to make those adjustments in the future. Good luck!
um dos melhores que já li aqui, prendeu completamente minha atenção, estou ansioso pelo segundo volume.
One of the better fanfic read so far. New things tried but some remained same but still noice.
(First time writing a review) The story was good, I liked it. Writing quality was good, a few mistakes here and there but most of them were just grammatical ones. A few of the jokes were hit and miss but a few did make me chuckle. Not much to say about update stability since I read the book after it was completed so yay me for not having to wait for the next chapter lol. Story development was good. MC is likeable but his name is Rudeus Fireheart which might put some people off because mushoku tensei exists. World background is good because well it’s Marvel. BUT it’s not just any marvel, it’s comics universe marvel, it’s not 616 but it’s not the MCU either which I am very greatful for. There’s a lot of marvel fanfics out there that are all based in the MCU with some x-men elements and they all start just before tony starks kidnapping as well which I don’t mind but it makes the first 15-20 chapters predictable where the mc follows the plot whilst in the background making moves. Thankfully this fanfic doesn’t fall into that category which made me like it all the more. Reason I gave world background 5 stars is that the Author knows his stuff about marvel comics so all the characters are written true to how they would act in the comics. Except maybe cyclops, his character was way more intense and obsessive than in the comics but I don’t like cyclops at all so I didn’t mind it but I can see some would. 100% give it a read. It’s one of my favourite marvel fanfics alongside Mavel: I’m a Symbiote. Can’t wait to start reading Book 2.
Overall, a dam good story. The writing could have been a bit better and the story a bit more fleshed out, but it was amazing book that was very entertaining. 9/10 do recommend.
😍I don't care it was my type of story so here's a 5🥰(although I am late at giving it😂)
En realidad es una historia entretenida y casual no se puede esperar nada demasiado serio y es una historia perfecta para pasar el tiempo. me la leí en 2 días y aunque hay momentos que aburren también hay momentos en los que estuve muy entretenido le doy un 5 de 10
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It's a great Marvel fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍😍 It have a great story/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I think you must tell when an event happens.. Like, I know MC/Rudeus start in 1996 then you don't tell when he fight Apocalypse, get Genosha, etc.. Maybe show it at the start of chapter, like "August 31, 2000.....".. I don't mind the harem (it's usual for gods 😁😂).. And your lemon is quite good too.. I think you should interact with all marvel character, not just X-Men.. Maybe you should make Selene and Vanessa the goddess next.. They serve you the longest and so loyal.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍
The writing was great . the story was excellent , but could have had better fight scenes . The harem relationship was handled well in my eyes . Overall great , but could have been better .
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point 4.7 and when I saw the harem + 18+ genre appear, I already guessed why the point could be 4.7 hahahahahahahahah 😂[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Do. Not. Separate. This story into different books. Worst mistake in my life ever.
another good marvel fic with some negatives ofcourse, but a good one nonetheless..... it's definitely one of my favorites.
I am 80 plus chapters in and I am absolutely hooked on this novel Keep up the good work
4/2/2/5/5. Interesting story that I couldn't get past chapter 8 of due to yuri being brought in. For that I docked 3 stars for both story dev and character design. The English is surprisingly good for someone whose first language isn't english. This does make me worry about author's other fic and if there is gonna be qu*er garbage in that too
Pretty good everything, with the exception of character design. I literally think we don't even know the MC's hair color. I think we would empathize more if we knew more details about them and in this way let our imagination fly more.
Nice read so far. You might probably use Grammarly or something like that. Focus on environment details as I have seen some inconsistencies that don't go well with the way you are trying to describe. But a good read so far.
It was good at first...then it the weakness in the writing starts to show..I mean I get it he wants to show how powerful mc is but the scenarios just don't make sense half the time. It's a good read to be honest but not everyone's cup of tea. And please don't make him act like a cringey idiot..he reminds me of myself too much.
Absolutely captivating story. Really love the seamless merging of all the different areas of marvel into one cohesive story that didn't start all over the place. Well done my guy, well... DONE!!😎😎😎😎😎
I didn’t get very far… dont get me wrong, the story premise is relativly fresh. The writing is decent, and the pacing is alright. What I really didn’t like was brodude naming his MC Rudeus… yeah, brodude literally named his MC after the 30 something year old pedo from Jobless Reincarnation. Also, miss me with that “he’s twelve now though so it’s okay if he pervs on twelve year old girls” my guy, he’s literally just a fat middle aged guy pretending to be a kid, his inner voice, his inner reflection it’s literally just still his old body. Just admit that you’re a groomer and turn yourself into your local the police department. *Deep breath* okay rant over. If you can over look that small issue then you wouldn’t mind this book.
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It's a great story for turning the brain off for a few hours every day. Sometimes, the writing style frustrates me because the more intelligent characters were just sounding like the mc's simplistic take on life. I imagined him to be a character like Cid from Eminence in Shadow, who is a very flippant character in a very serious world. I wish that could have been showcased properly. I'm sure the author will have all the chances in the world to make those adjustments in the future. Good luck!
um dos melhores que já li aqui, prendeu completamente minha atenção, estou ansioso pelo segundo volume.
One of the better fanfic read so far. New things tried but some remained same but still noice.
(First time writing a review) The story was good, I liked it. Writing quality was good, a few mistakes here and there but most of them were just grammatical ones. A few of the jokes were hit and miss but a few did make me chuckle. Not much to say about update stability since I read the book after it was completed so yay me for not having to wait for the next chapter lol. Story development was good. MC is likeable but his name is Rudeus Fireheart which might put some people off because mushoku tensei exists. World background is good because well it’s Marvel. BUT it’s not just any marvel, it’s comics universe marvel, it’s not 616 but it’s not the MCU either which I am very greatful for. There’s a lot of marvel fanfics out there that are all based in the MCU with some x-men elements and they all start just before tony starks kidnapping as well which I don’t mind but it makes the first 15-20 chapters predictable where the mc follows the plot whilst in the background making moves. Thankfully this fanfic doesn’t fall into that category which made me like it all the more. Reason I gave world background 5 stars is that the Author knows his stuff about marvel comics so all the characters are written true to how they would act in the comics. Except maybe cyclops, his character was way more intense and obsessive than in the comics but I don’t like cyclops at all so I didn’t mind it but I can see some would. 100% give it a read. It’s one of my favourite marvel fanfics alongside Mavel: I’m a Symbiote. Can’t wait to start reading Book 2.
Overall, a dam good story. The writing could have been a bit better and the story a bit more fleshed out, but it was amazing book that was very entertaining. 9/10 do recommend.
😍I don't care it was my type of story so here's a 5🥰(although I am late at giving it😂)
En realidad es una historia entretenida y casual no se puede esperar nada demasiado serio y es una historia perfecta para pasar el tiempo. me la leí en 2 días y aunque hay momentos que aburren también hay momentos en los que estuve muy entretenido le doy un 5 de 10
Reveal Spoiler It's a great Marvel fanfiction!! I like it!!! 😍😍 It have a great story/plot and good english/translation.. The grammar is good too.. I think you must tell when an event happens.. Like, I know MC/Rudeus start in 1996 then you don't tell when he fight Apocalypse, get Genosha, etc.. Maybe show it at the start of chapter, like "August 31, 2000.....".. I don't mind the harem (it's usual for gods 😁😂).. And your lemon is quite good too.. I think you should interact with all marvel character, not just X-Men.. Maybe you should make Selene and Vanessa the goddess next.. They serve you the longest and so loyal.. Can't wait to see next chapter.. Love your story author san.. Keep up the great job 😁👍😍😍
The writing was great . the story was excellent , but could have had better fight scenes . The harem relationship was handled well in my eyes . Overall great , but could have been better .
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point 4.7 and when I saw the harem + 18+ genre appear, I already guessed why the point could be 4.7 hahahahahahahahah 😂[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Do. Not. Separate. This story into different books. Worst mistake in my life ever.
another good marvel fic with some negatives ofcourse, but a good one nonetheless..... it's definitely one of my favorites.
I am 80 plus chapters in and I am absolutely hooked on this novel Keep up the good work
4/2/2/5/5. Interesting story that I couldn't get past chapter 8 of due to yuri being brought in. For that I docked 3 stars for both story dev and character design. The English is surprisingly good for someone whose first language isn't english. This does make me worry about author's other fic and if there is gonna be qu*er garbage in that too
Pretty good everything, with the exception of character design. I literally think we don't even know the MC's hair color. I think we would empathize more if we knew more details about them and in this way let our imagination fly more.
Nice read so far. You might probably use Grammarly or something like that. Focus on environment details as I have seen some inconsistencies that don't go well with the way you are trying to describe. But a good read so far.
It was good at first...then it the weakness in the writing starts to show..I mean I get it he wants to show how powerful mc is but the scenarios just don't make sense half the time. It's a good read to be honest but not everyone's cup of tea. And please don't make him act like a cringey idiot..he reminds me of myself too much.
good story looks like characters and everything