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I really like this novel... an interesting plot where everyone except the protagonist has a system but he reverts back in time. I find this novel comparable to the best ones on this site. One suggestion would be to focus more on character development of characters other than the protagonist. But since it's still early, lots can be done. Looking forward to where it goes
MC is a Mary Sue with bipolar disorder, MC doesn't have a system but can do everything anyone ever did with systems help and training for years. the story feels like MC was teenager when because he wears his emotions on his sleeve, can't think or do things through without putting himself in awkward or forced situations. it's a good story if you just feel the flow but full of cringe if you try to rationalize it
well I just mc personality that's all let's see weather you are going to delete this review or not
A good book I recommend....................................👈..............................................................................................
Haven’t read it but gave it a five star cause I like the idea but mostly I just wanted to say that it kinda reminds me of the novel series system vs regressor just based on the title and description which is all I know about it so far
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️♥️❤️❤️♥️♥️❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️♥️❤️❤️❤️( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥.
Yhe its feels fored Unnatural every interaction is obviously made for the sake of plot The story is unique but the delivery of the story is not at the part where we could see its good.
The world building is not that great nor is the character design ........... Well I guess I expected too much from it.... Needless to say it was a letdown...
seems interesting . Let's see --------------- -----------+++--------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------
seems interesting.... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ahh another Apocalypse story to read before my bedtime, kewehehe. Anyway, since it's from Ethel, you can safely read this book without having to worry about writing quality. Although I haven't read too many chapters yet, I can say that the world is amazingly crafted and characters feel alive. I love these kinds of plots where MC, who previously loved FMC, slowly falls out of her love so I may be biased but I am absolutely loving the dynamic between MC and the FMC. Maybe I'll do another review after catching up to it, till then, here's 10 star.
I really like it . Although I don't understand power level in different apocalypse , well I will see in the future. FMC don't love him in his first life, I would like to see her falling in love with MC and then mc uses her to gain more power then MC then left her.
All I can say is : I am lovin' it..... ....................... ...................... ..................... .................... ..................
All right. This Review serves multiple purposes. The first purpose is the 5 Star that I am giving myself. Cough cough The Next is the Basic Question and Answers that people might need to know before getting in the story. Q:Harem or no Harem? A: Harem. Mostly because of 2-3 Female leads. It doesn't mean that every other girl will fall in love with him. Just that a selected few would be. Who are they? Well, read to find out. Q: What kind of person is the Protagonist? A: He has his own dark past and a life that was always on an edge. So he is smart, calculating, cautious and strong. He has other qualities too and he likes to stay quiet and act more than babble. Q: What kind of people are the side characters? Especially the female leads? A: They are unique and have their own special qualities. They won't be there just to fill the role of the lead but will have their own impact on the story. Q: What is the story all about? A: It's about revenge. It's about changing Fate and Destiny. It's about trying to find life in a world full of chaos. It's about trying to fit in, despite being abnormal. And there is much much more to it than just protagonists saving the day. Q: Is there anything special about the story? A: Well, I don't know what 'special' we are talking about but here are a few key things that are different from the stories. MC lacks a System while the rest of the world has it. MC is a smart and not brainless character who can't read the mood. Side Characters play very important roles in the story. Perhaps too important at times. The World is defined and Dynamic. That is, the world building is there and according to the arcs and events, the world may change to varying degrees. ...... All right. The third purpose is still the same as the second one, that is, a question and answer review. You can ask any other question you want to ask and I may happily give a reply to it. In conclusion the last thing about this review is that, I thank you for picking up the story and hope so you may like it. I tried my best to make the story more enjoyable and if you have any problem of any sort you may comment or leave a review. May you have a happy day.
I really like this novel... an interesting plot where everyone except the protagonist has a system but he reverts back in time. I find this novel comparable to the best ones on this site. One suggestion would be to focus more on character development of characters other than the protagonist. But since it's still early, lots can be done. Looking forward to where it goes
MC is a Mary Sue with bipolar disorder, MC doesn't have a system but can do everything anyone ever did with systems help and training for years. the story feels like MC was teenager when because he wears his emotions on his sleeve, can't think or do things through without putting himself in awkward or forced situations. it's a good story if you just feel the flow but full of cringe if you try to rationalize it
well I just mc personality that's all let's see weather you are going to delete this review or not
A good book I recommend....................................👈..............................................................................................
Haven’t read it but gave it a five star cause I like the idea but mostly I just wanted to say that it kinda reminds me of the novel series system vs regressor just based on the title and description which is all I know about it so far
❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️♥️❤️❤️♥️♥️❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️❤️♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️♥️♥️♥️♥️❤️❤️❤️❤️♥️❤️❤️❤️( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥( ˘ ³˘)♥.
Yhe its feels fored Unnatural every interaction is obviously made for the sake of plot The story is unique but the delivery of the story is not at the part where we could see its good.
The world building is not that great nor is the character design ........... Well I guess I expected too much from it.... Needless to say it was a letdown...
seems interesting . Let's see --------------- -----------+++--------------------- ---------------------------------------------------------
seems interesting.... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Ahh another Apocalypse story to read before my bedtime, kewehehe. Anyway, since it's from Ethel, you can safely read this book without having to worry about writing quality. Although I haven't read too many chapters yet, I can say that the world is amazingly crafted and characters feel alive. I love these kinds of plots where MC, who previously loved FMC, slowly falls out of her love so I may be biased but I am absolutely loving the dynamic between MC and the FMC. Maybe I'll do another review after catching up to it, till then, here's 10 star.
I really like it . Although I don't understand power level in different apocalypse , well I will see in the future. FMC don't love him in his first life, I would like to see her falling in love with MC and then mc uses her to gain more power then MC then left her.
All I can say is : I am lovin' it..... ....................... ...................... ..................... .................... ..................
All right. This Review serves multiple purposes. The first purpose is the 5 Star that I am giving myself. Cough cough The Next is the Basic Question and Answers that people might need to know before getting in the story. Q:Harem or no Harem? A: Harem. Mostly because of 2-3 Female leads. It doesn't mean that every other girl will fall in love with him. Just that a selected few would be. Who are they? Well, read to find out. Q: What kind of person is the Protagonist? A: He has his own dark past and a life that was always on an edge. So he is smart, calculating, cautious and strong. He has other qualities too and he likes to stay quiet and act more than babble. Q: What kind of people are the side characters? Especially the female leads? A: They are unique and have their own special qualities. They won't be there just to fill the role of the lead but will have their own impact on the story. Q: What is the story all about? A: It's about revenge. It's about changing Fate and Destiny. It's about trying to find life in a world full of chaos. It's about trying to fit in, despite being abnormal. And there is much much more to it than just protagonists saving the day. Q: Is there anything special about the story? A: Well, I don't know what 'special' we are talking about but here are a few key things that are different from the stories. MC lacks a System while the rest of the world has it. MC is a smart and not brainless character who can't read the mood. Side Characters play very important roles in the story. Perhaps too important at times. The World is defined and Dynamic. That is, the world building is there and according to the arcs and events, the world may change to varying degrees. ...... All right. The third purpose is still the same as the second one, that is, a question and answer review. You can ask any other question you want to ask and I may happily give a reply to it. In conclusion the last thing about this review is that, I thank you for picking up the story and hope so you may like it. I tried my best to make the story more enjoyable and if you have any problem of any sort you may comment or leave a review. May you have a happy day.