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IdiotIdiotic IDK what to tell me what I want you so bad I don't have a great night with my smartphone
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the story is pretty good but I think there's a lot of loophole , timeskip. ouh and there's a lot of author pov
Saya akan menulis ulasan dalam bahasa indonesia karna saya tidak begitu pandai dalam berbahasa inggris keseluruhan cerita sangat baik dan aku menyukainya jadi penulis dapat melanjutkan lagi ceritanya sebagaimana mestinya tidak perlu memikirkan tentang hal hal buruk pembaca lain yang memberikan ulasan buruk padamu idemu mu menarik penyampainmu juga menarik aku menunggu kelanjutan chapternya. Terimakasih penulis atas chapter chapternya.
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cerita multiverse tpi isinya seperti permainan anak anak nakal, dari awal mc reinkarnasi aja udah mudah ditebak bahwa ceritannya selebihnya sangat membosankan, ditambah mc seperti orang idiot, kurasa anda hanya membuang-buang waktu dengan menulis novel yang aneh ini, persetan denganmu penulis !!
I'm dropping it, the mc is just the licking dog of nie lie , he tells nie lie all his secrets , plus the mc has brain problem , in his last life he had a crash , but she got married so he died of regret of old age , and god granted him endless (as long as ROB could do) wishes but he askes a system only to guide him to his crash , he didn't even asked for a stronger cultivation technique than nie lie , he could cultivate from the age of 1 but he didn't cuz he couldn't gain nie lie's trust ..
This story is wish fulfillment with a OC MC that has too many golden fingers that from the start he is to OP I couldn't get past past the first 10 chapters because the OC MC was so stupid and the author decided to randomly have him do something that should have immediately attracted the attention of everyone in a large area but brushed it and the original events that happened at that time off like they didn't matter and just kept going with the story.
NIE LI FANBOY.................................................................................... Hahagdnevauzvtdka zumdgsusvs snhsusmVsk dusnzgz ah z a. Sua s syznz uzmzbzga .......................... .
Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc............................,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,m,
basically mc is simp for pokemon and nei li and i think his wife is also pokemon reincarneted(arceus chap 94 just my guess) i have not read more than 3 chaps if u want u can read just my opinion .the only good thing is stabilty of updates for now atleast
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This is a Todag fanfic which requires ur body nd soul turned off to process. Only those with cultivation of nascent soul nd strong spiritual sense can comprehend this good luck.
I couldn't read more then 3 chapters I don't know if it will turn better but the mc and the development is everything I could hate about fanfic the author force the mc to follow ne lie ok but the mc also choose to do nothing for 12 years even though he have all he need to be strong 12 to garbage
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dont like the mc (author) seems to be a nie li fan who i hate very much...so dont like the novel ...............................................
I don't like the fact that the mc had access to his powers and cultivation technique for more than a decade but didn't even try trainning it...
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This is a great fanfic that incorporates a lot of elements from different fandoms in a multiverse madness. There are a few inconsistencies that are easy to ignore and even say that are part of the AU, but there is one huge problem in this novel. More specifically, the obsession with pokemons is a downside here, as the autor is abusing it too much, and even introduces pokemons in worlds like TDG, Naruto, One Peace, and as of chapter 170+, in MHA too. It gives the impression of a boy that wants to spread puppies to everyone, without minding the eventual consequences.
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Given 4.8 stars by me so keep going but why do i feel like you just overlooked some chapters as the old one is more than 190+ chapters but this one?!!!! lets try our best 👍👍👍
not my cup of tea, but the story is pretty good, so just read on. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I find it ridiculous to ask for the Sharingan or the Rinnegan in the cultivation worlds because they are of no use. There are a hundred times better ones than heavenly eyes, double eyes, or flaming demon eyes.
IdiotIdiotic IDK what to tell me what I want you so bad I don't have a great night with my smartphone
Ótima história 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁 😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
the story is pretty good but I think there's a lot of loophole , timeskip. ouh and there's a lot of author pov
Saya akan menulis ulasan dalam bahasa indonesia karna saya tidak begitu pandai dalam berbahasa inggris keseluruhan cerita sangat baik dan aku menyukainya jadi penulis dapat melanjutkan lagi ceritanya sebagaimana mestinya tidak perlu memikirkan tentang hal hal buruk pembaca lain yang memberikan ulasan buruk padamu idemu mu menarik penyampainmu juga menarik aku menunggu kelanjutan chapternya. Terimakasih penulis atas chapter chapternya.
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cerita multiverse tpi isinya seperti permainan anak anak nakal, dari awal mc reinkarnasi aja udah mudah ditebak bahwa ceritannya selebihnya sangat membosankan, ditambah mc seperti orang idiot, kurasa anda hanya membuang-buang waktu dengan menulis novel yang aneh ini, persetan denganmu penulis !!
I'm dropping it, the mc is just the licking dog of nie lie , he tells nie lie all his secrets , plus the mc has brain problem , in his last life he had a crash , but she got married so he died of regret of old age , and god granted him endless (as long as ROB could do) wishes but he askes a system only to guide him to his crash , he didn't even asked for a stronger cultivation technique than nie lie , he could cultivate from the age of 1 but he didn't cuz he couldn't gain nie lie's trust ..
This story is wish fulfillment with a OC MC that has too many golden fingers that from the start he is to OP I couldn't get past past the first 10 chapters because the OC MC was so stupid and the author decided to randomly have him do something that should have immediately attracted the attention of everyone in a large area but brushed it and the original events that happened at that time off like they didn't matter and just kept going with the story.
NIE LI FANBOY.................................................................................... Hahagdnevauzvtdka zumdgsusvs snhsusmVsk dusnzgz ah z a. Sua s syznz uzmzbzga .......................... .
Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc Beta mc............................,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,m,
basically mc is simp for pokemon and nei li and i think his wife is also pokemon reincarneted(arceus chap 94 just my guess) i have not read more than 3 chaps if u want u can read just my opinion .the only good thing is stabilty of updates for now atleast
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
This is a Todag fanfic which requires ur body nd soul turned off to process. Only those with cultivation of nascent soul nd strong spiritual sense can comprehend this good luck.
I couldn't read more then 3 chapters I don't know if it will turn better but the mc and the development is everything I could hate about fanfic the author force the mc to follow ne lie ok but the mc also choose to do nothing for 12 years even though he have all he need to be strong 12 to garbage
Reveal Spoiler dont like the mc (author) seems to be a nie li fan who i hate very much...so dont like the novel ...............................................
I don't like the fact that the mc had access to his powers and cultivation technique for more than a decade but didn't even try trainning it...
Reveal Spoiler This is a great fanfic that incorporates a lot of elements from different fandoms in a multiverse madness. There are a few inconsistencies that are easy to ignore and even say that are part of the AU, but there is one huge problem in this novel. More specifically, the obsession with pokemons is a downside here, as the autor is abusing it too much, and even introduces pokemons in worlds like TDG, Naruto, One Peace, and as of chapter 170+, in MHA too. It gives the impression of a boy that wants to spread puppies to everyone, without minding the eventual consequences.
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Given 4.8 stars by me so keep going but why do i feel like you just overlooked some chapters as the old one is more than 190+ chapters but this one?!!!! lets try our best 👍👍👍
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I find it ridiculous to ask for the Sharingan or the Rinnegan in the cultivation worlds because they are of no use. There are a hundred times better ones than heavenly eyes, double eyes, or flaming demon eyes.