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moon_senpai

Hey, the shameless author is here! Again giving my own novel a five-star rating! So this is my second novel and I hope you all will enjoy reading it, if you do enjoy then don't forget to add a review and share your experience. Also, take this review as a Q and A and ask me anything related to the novel in the comments of this review.

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Sunny21ur

I just want to live a peaceful life here, blah blah blah, so go to your village and live a peaceful life there, that the author, that MS are both hypocritical, even some scavengers have more ambitions than this ms, the author constantly writes that he has reasons for this.I don't understand why MC's hide their power?I understand if your life depends on it, but that's not the point, you will be given more resources to develop your strength, you will be respected and will not be treated like an empty place, this is really idiotic, well, I read 40 chapters, and my patience broke because... end[img=In your face]

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Jagoda_Anusiewicz

I don’t have much to say apart from I’ve read about 20 chapters and I didn’t see even a mention of this world being the novel of his most hated novelist

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DaoistUU3J24

I can’t stop reding this novel it so enjoyable

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Hopefullthinker269

1. forgot logic because i think it does not exist in this story.2. No proper power scale.3. People around MC are dumb.

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Secret_Reader69

I'm new to reading novels so I don't really know how to describe the novel in the review. But long story short this novel was engaging for the most part. Some times it does feels like it's getting stretched with the long monologues of the mc but the good parts of the novel make up for that. Lastly, just like other people, I will say that don't judge this novel from the starting chapters since it may seem generic and cringe. For me, I got super invested in the story around 70ish chapters in.

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Mahmod_Ana

Are you dropping this novel ? I hope not it’s good novel very enjoyable but theirs not enough chapter of it are you taking a break or something ? I check your novel everyday yet no new chapters😞

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BobbyBrowne

I genuinely find it extremely difficult to come up with anything unique or enjoyable about this novel. Every single character is either one dimensional or just unlikable. Mc's dad is just a doting father who gets shrugged off every scene he's in, Mc himself is just some psychopathic loser whose actions make no sense whatsoever. He likes torturing people for some reason which has still not been explained at ch 60 and he has just remained so unbelievably unlikable. Why is he hiding his power I literally can't fathom it there is not a single valid reason to do so if he wants to actually get strong. There is so much more to talk about but bottom line, any metric you can think of rating this novel with does not go over 3/5

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Tiago_Maia_1922

i hope that the novel doesn't have a harem it would be much better single female lead that it's zero x req.

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Gspar_a

discord link is expired.i also highly recommend reading this one

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Mahmod_Ana

I like the novel i read it until the last chapter but i felt disappointed because I realize that 332+ chapters were wast i didn’t feel that i read 300+ you can tell the same sotry in 100 chapters but you wasted a lot of chapters for nothing and it took way to long for simple thing to acer, some of those chapters where enjoyable but took tooo long like where the girl go ? you know about “the flame of rage that seek revenge!” that event took so long but in the end we never heard about girl again, theirs no way she will still be alive after ‘that’ you probably forgot about her this novel over 300 chapters but only few of them were important the worst part that the small talk or MC after thought in those chapters continue no information about the world background or anything useful to the story just few useful line only here and there thorough the whole 300 chapters!!! truly wast of chapters, if it wast 2000 chapters kind of novel with fast upload to the chapter that want be issue but it’s not....

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Shivam_Thakur_1883

6 year after reincarnation as nobel(age =15) he doesn't know his city name or country name or any other noble family name.. worst thing some nobel young master forced his sister to marry and his family distruction and mc planned to deal with them but the point is he didn't even know their name or their family name (he didn't even ask anyone) and he doesn't even know that he is in noble even with that villain family and his sisters are major characters of story and more worse thing is he keep denying the possibility and never even try to find out and also he never call his parents mother or father cause he thinks it is weird(even after 6 years)... this much bs is just from first 20 chapter and I read comments that it gets worse ... still 4 star for trying but sorry this novel is boring with very illogical thing happening and mc is stuupid with useless information but no actuall information which we needed....

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Throwaway12345

Straight up insulting. Another story that is dragged down by the main character. He reincarnates and fails to be genre savvy instead spending wasting their time (and ours) by hiding their power. They join an academy to learn magic and then intentionally flub things to not be noticed. I enjoy this genre and adjacent ones however every enjoyable aspect of the genre is lost by the main character's stupidity. Their attempts at avoiding cliches introduced the ones that waste the reader's time and money the most. Pointlessly hiding power drags out the story instead of diving into the parts that make stories like this enjoyable. Social interactions, world building, the power system, and playing into the MC being genre savvy are what normally make stories like this enjoyable. This story fails on all of these points. Time skipped five years instead of any interaction that proves the MC cares for their parents/family. I don't have an issue with revealing the reincarnation but it isn't exactly in line with the way the MC is presented. A princess is attacked manipulated and taken advantage of and it is all brushed off. Forcing a garbage plotline to occur accurately when events went off rails literally years prior makes no sense. The MC is written as an author of the novel genre they are in, proofread the initial work, failed to identify it despite their sister being a major character with a very obvious name, and flips between eight grader syndrome and cold calculated mastermind. The character acts against the information given about them every time they aren't monologuing. Forced myself to read through most of the free chapters. I kept hoping the MC would actually do something to make the story interesting. They did not.

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Incognito_98

At first it was going nice, mc was progressing steadily and all but his thought process in the academy arc was messed up. Trying to get his sister to pretend to date the original novel’s mc. Couldn’t continue, stopped at 60ish chapters.

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Carbon_6597

It starts off pretty alright in terms of concept but for me and a lot of people it soon turns into a bunch of cliches with MC acting weak. MC not being believed. MC saying he wants a peaceful life. and some of these feel forced which makes it even worse. On a positive note there is no super long drawn out revenge for the MC to get.

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Gabrielwaterune

The story is ok i guess the only problem is the MC is a chunni and no very smart 😕. If you like that kind of MC is very well done.

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BATTLE4GLORY

decided to drop cause of the MC tell her sister about the reincarnation stuff

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DaoisttcWzwY

start was pretty good, but the transmigrator (Zero) is absolutly twisted. i srs dont like his character. at the beginning he was kinda cool but the the more you read the more manipulating he becomes. Still isnt a bad novel just not my cup of tea

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Bubble_Bunny_Happy

The story is really good actually however the grammar can just be downright awful sometimes and the fight scenes are incredibly boring after a while bcuz they take several chapters and the names just randomly seem to get mixed up sometimes. Overall pretty good but authors POV is better for people who notice grammar mistakes and mald / get angry. Nice book still!

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LILAying_onBed

Since author and one of the reviewer suggested to read at least until chapter 50, I did so before I write this review. Well overall this novel is around 3.5 ⭐ rating at best for me. A lot of the readers complaint about MC flawed and weird way of thinking while the author always tried to rationalized why MC did that eventho it obviously doesn't make sense. Spoiler alert things that I kind of a turn off to me in this novel: 1. MC told someone he was a transmigrator/reincarnator and the original soul of his current body actually died. He can hide it but he stupidly chose to reveal it. And the way author described it made it more annoying and looked forced since it was so sudden. He exposed this secret after FIVE years living in that world. 2. I don't remember MC's real age before he transmigrated but MC acted and sounds like a high schooler with a severe chunnibyou syndrome. 3. MC is the typical 'trying to stay low-key and average kind of character but failed miserably'. This troupe had been overused and the way author wrote it made it worst. I don't dislike this kind of troupe but the way it was written made people hate it 4. MC just realized he transmigrated into a novel world in chapter 50+. Kinda late I think. 5. After reading until chapter 50+, I also realized MC is a bad actor and also bad at explaining things to people and tends to overthinking things which was annoying. Author liked to write MC's monologue in long paragraphs. I might add more on the review when I read more chapters in the future because I still want to give this novel a chance.

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Robby119

its amazing how the world background, character design, and story developement till chapter 193, but i prefer there's plot that will change Zero character to accept living in a new world and slowly begin genuinely care for someone other than his 3 family member i think. his gloomy past life is too much affecting him like enjoying others people pain and suffering even though its his plan that make them in situation like that but he is just justifying his act, using other's people decisions/human nature. i know author want to make Zero act unlike the other MC that like to intervene and meddle in other problem but i think zero character its to gloomy

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Bibongsensei

ahmm.. Can anyone tell me about the synopsis cause in the first paragraph says "What does it feel like to find yourself inside the novel of an author you hated? How will you survive in a world that's filled with cliché? Well, something similar happened here." there's two characters here, the one who reincarnated in author's novel(lets call him no.1)and the author(let's call him no.2). Right? And the next paragraph says "Once there was an unpopular fantasy novel author. However, for certain reasons, he died a pathetic death." means the author died(no.2) right? and the 3rd paragraph says "Later he found out that the world he reincarnated in was the same as the novel of an author he hated the most. The only person he never wanted to talk to again…he was reincarnated inside that very person’s novel." And this the confusing who is he??? the author(no.2)???or no.1 ??... i mean both of them dies right?? it's confusing me so much that I can't even start reading because im trying to guess it before reading this novel .sorry im not really good at english and grammar. here my advance 5 ⭐

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himitsu_desuu

i would say that this story is mid at best. some parts are just downright weird and are way too convenient for the mc.

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ysian
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20 chapters in, honest review Facts first: MC is op right from the start, is staying low-key, is very smart. Good points: The writing is not cringe (very little) He was training for 5 years to become from C to B for his stats.(character building) His sister seems to find something odd with zero since his sickness and mc took his place. Potential good development plot. Bad points: I don't really like the 'Status system' in the magical world. MC parents straight up just ask him his stats and did not use tools to ascertain his potential. Then there's the timeskip from his isekai date to 5 years later. It skipped on so much family interaction that could have happened (specially since MC said he became emotionally attached to them like real family) Potential writing on MC coping with the isekai skipped. For all these iskais, i can't help but think these MCs liked the isekai world better and wanted it. Anothet bad plot was the story building to the tournament arc which was basically none. The tournament was just dumped in there and the info that the kingdom's princess would come is also dumped in. Furthermore, this tournament is called 'the best warrior of the decade' but it is conducted in some small city and MCs parents said that Anya was the strongest in the city with average E rank stats. Not much sense. This arc can only be called lazy. For all the supposed grandeur, MC was able to sign in his own sister as a contestant without her knowledge (though he did tell his sister he had a plan). This just shows that the security for the tournament very very low. Again not much sense. Then another thing dumped in there is MC suddenly becomes a smart schemer who sees everyone as a 'piece'. Just like that, no development prior. Mind you he was a normal average guy in his previous life Lastly, the fact that he was able to set an explosive (dunno how he could even know how) under the princess platform is just idiotic. Royalty of a kingdom and any B rank magician can just slide in and harm her life. Where is the security, royal knights. Moreover, after she was saved by Anya (for the plan) ,she comes to MC mansion on the same day! So no going into hiding after an assassination attempt. Following logic, there should be an investigation to find to attackers. But she just travel across the city to MC house wih only 4 guards. No logic. I don't know if the plot building gets better and im not gonna stick around to find out. Just my opinion.

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Cj_Ali
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Does that mc have the memories of the body he stole or took over cause you did n’t explain that

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GodLevelVillan

bro nothing to say hands off to you one of the best novels I have read I mostly like harem novels but I Don know why this one got me hooked up Readers you should give it a try

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GodLevelVillan

it's good you should try reading it once but I think the author should give more bloody scenes then it is fun the rest is good and all but I am a fan of killing and stuff so I would like that more

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maxphantom

too many Novels extra and authors pov copy are floating around webnovel. At least that is the first impression this gives. but i will rate this again after reading this. 5 star in advanced cause it aint easy to write a quality novel. i myself quit midway.

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your_demons

Definitely worth a read. I have read the other book of the author and I'd say this novel improves in many aspects. Though still, it's not the best out there and have its flaws. But anyway, if you ignore some mistakes the novel as whole is good (saying this after reading upto the latest ch 100)

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Zkzkz_Lskzk

After reading all the chapters so far I can say that I like this novel, okay it's not new with the concept of "ohh I know this story, it's the novel that read, or write, like Author's POV or Novel's Extra and others.... but I like it, the story is interesting, the mystery about the mc's past is intriguing and I want to know the rest and hope that the novel will continue. is only based on my personal opinion, I know nothing about writing or world Background or what you want. Spoiler Warning!!! Question for the author : the passage where the mc saves Ellyn from the 3 jealous girls by trapping them and blackmails Ellyn with her past reminds me of ayanokoji in Classroom of the elite, I don't know if the author does it on purpose or It was done unconsciously but being a fan of the novel it made me laugh.

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shining_night

Uhh, I'm not used to this review thing but I'm doing it since the author asked for it and I like this story. Remember, what I'm writing here is based on my personal opinion and the things I like about this novel. The writing quality is good, better than average and than many other novel I have read on this site. The story is well, interesting. The core concept of this novel is the same as TAPOV and The novels extra but the way it plays it out is different and I like it. Though, the pacing is a bit slow but that didnt pose a problem to me. Now the MC, well, I quite like this MC. He is smart plus a sadist, what more you want? He also sometimes makes mistakes according to his personality but I think it gives his character more depth rather than being a cardboard cutout MC. I have caught up to the latest ch (84) and his past is not revealed yet, which makes the actions he takes more suspicious. The world building....it isn't really showed much since the focus is on characters until now but what's shown is not bad I think. I just hope the author doesn't ruin it afterward. In the end, I'll say give this novel a try and see for yourself it it suits your taste or not.

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moon_senpai

Hey, the shameless author is here! Again giving my own novel a five-star rating! So this is my second novel and I hope you all will enjoy reading it, if you do enjoy then don't forget to add a review and share your experience. Also, take this review as a Q and A and ask me anything related to the novel in the comments of this review.

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Sunny21ur

I just want to live a peaceful life here, blah blah blah, so go to your village and live a peaceful life there, that the author, that MS are both hypocritical, even some scavengers have more ambitions than this ms, the author constantly writes that he has reasons for this.I don't understand why MC's hide their power?I understand if your life depends on it, but that's not the point, you will be given more resources to develop your strength, you will be respected and will not be treated like an empty place, this is really idiotic, well, I read 40 chapters, and my patience broke because... end[img=In your face]

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Jagoda_Anusiewicz

I don’t have much to say apart from I’ve read about 20 chapters and I didn’t see even a mention of this world being the novel of his most hated novelist

8mth
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DaoistUU3J24

I can’t stop reding this novel it so enjoyable

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Hopefullthinker269

1. forgot logic because i think it does not exist in this story.2. No proper power scale.3. People around MC are dumb.

12mth
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Secret_Reader69

I'm new to reading novels so I don't really know how to describe the novel in the review. But long story short this novel was engaging for the most part. Some times it does feels like it's getting stretched with the long monologues of the mc but the good parts of the novel make up for that. Lastly, just like other people, I will say that don't judge this novel from the starting chapters since it may seem generic and cringe. For me, I got super invested in the story around 70ish chapters in.

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Mahmod_Ana

Are you dropping this novel ? I hope not it’s good novel very enjoyable but theirs not enough chapter of it are you taking a break or something ? I check your novel everyday yet no new chapters😞

1yr
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BobbyBrowne

I genuinely find it extremely difficult to come up with anything unique or enjoyable about this novel. Every single character is either one dimensional or just unlikable. Mc's dad is just a doting father who gets shrugged off every scene he's in, Mc himself is just some psychopathic loser whose actions make no sense whatsoever. He likes torturing people for some reason which has still not been explained at ch 60 and he has just remained so unbelievably unlikable. Why is he hiding his power I literally can't fathom it there is not a single valid reason to do so if he wants to actually get strong. There is so much more to talk about but bottom line, any metric you can think of rating this novel with does not go over 3/5

1yr
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Tiago_Maia_1922

i hope that the novel doesn't have a harem it would be much better single female lead that it's zero x req.

1yr
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Gspar_a

discord link is expired.i also highly recommend reading this one

1yr
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Mahmod_Ana

I like the novel i read it until the last chapter but i felt disappointed because I realize that 332+ chapters were wast i didn’t feel that i read 300+ you can tell the same sotry in 100 chapters but you wasted a lot of chapters for nothing and it took way to long for simple thing to acer, some of those chapters where enjoyable but took tooo long like where the girl go ? you know about “the flame of rage that seek revenge!” that event took so long but in the end we never heard about girl again, theirs no way she will still be alive after ‘that’ you probably forgot about her this novel over 300 chapters but only few of them were important the worst part that the small talk or MC after thought in those chapters continue no information about the world background or anything useful to the story just few useful line only here and there thorough the whole 300 chapters!!! truly wast of chapters, if it wast 2000 chapters kind of novel with fast upload to the chapter that want be issue but it’s not....

1yr
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Shivam_Thakur_1883

6 year after reincarnation as nobel(age =15) he doesn't know his city name or country name or any other noble family name.. worst thing some nobel young master forced his sister to marry and his family distruction and mc planned to deal with them but the point is he didn't even know their name or their family name (he didn't even ask anyone) and he doesn't even know that he is in noble even with that villain family and his sisters are major characters of story and more worse thing is he keep denying the possibility and never even try to find out and also he never call his parents mother or father cause he thinks it is weird(even after 6 years)... this much bs is just from first 20 chapter and I read comments that it gets worse ... still 4 star for trying but sorry this novel is boring with very illogical thing happening and mc is stuupid with useless information but no actuall information which we needed....

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Throwaway12345

Straight up insulting. Another story that is dragged down by the main character. He reincarnates and fails to be genre savvy instead spending wasting their time (and ours) by hiding their power. They join an academy to learn magic and then intentionally flub things to not be noticed. I enjoy this genre and adjacent ones however every enjoyable aspect of the genre is lost by the main character's stupidity. Their attempts at avoiding cliches introduced the ones that waste the reader's time and money the most. Pointlessly hiding power drags out the story instead of diving into the parts that make stories like this enjoyable. Social interactions, world building, the power system, and playing into the MC being genre savvy are what normally make stories like this enjoyable. This story fails on all of these points. Time skipped five years instead of any interaction that proves the MC cares for their parents/family. I don't have an issue with revealing the reincarnation but it isn't exactly in line with the way the MC is presented. A princess is attacked manipulated and taken advantage of and it is all brushed off. Forcing a garbage plotline to occur accurately when events went off rails literally years prior makes no sense. The MC is written as an author of the novel genre they are in, proofread the initial work, failed to identify it despite their sister being a major character with a very obvious name, and flips between eight grader syndrome and cold calculated mastermind. The character acts against the information given about them every time they aren't monologuing. Forced myself to read through most of the free chapters. I kept hoping the MC would actually do something to make the story interesting. They did not.

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Incognito_98

At first it was going nice, mc was progressing steadily and all but his thought process in the academy arc was messed up. Trying to get his sister to pretend to date the original novel’s mc. Couldn’t continue, stopped at 60ish chapters.

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Carbon_6597

It starts off pretty alright in terms of concept but for me and a lot of people it soon turns into a bunch of cliches with MC acting weak. MC not being believed. MC saying he wants a peaceful life. and some of these feel forced which makes it even worse. On a positive note there is no super long drawn out revenge for the MC to get.

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Gabrielwaterune

The story is ok i guess the only problem is the MC is a chunni and no very smart 😕. If you like that kind of MC is very well done.

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BATTLE4GLORY

decided to drop cause of the MC tell her sister about the reincarnation stuff

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DaoisttcWzwY

start was pretty good, but the transmigrator (Zero) is absolutly twisted. i srs dont like his character. at the beginning he was kinda cool but the the more you read the more manipulating he becomes. Still isnt a bad novel just not my cup of tea

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Bubble_Bunny_Happy

The story is really good actually however the grammar can just be downright awful sometimes and the fight scenes are incredibly boring after a while bcuz they take several chapters and the names just randomly seem to get mixed up sometimes. Overall pretty good but authors POV is better for people who notice grammar mistakes and mald / get angry. Nice book still!

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LILAying_onBed

Since author and one of the reviewer suggested to read at least until chapter 50, I did so before I write this review. Well overall this novel is around 3.5 ⭐ rating at best for me. A lot of the readers complaint about MC flawed and weird way of thinking while the author always tried to rationalized why MC did that eventho it obviously doesn't make sense. Spoiler alert things that I kind of a turn off to me in this novel: 1. MC told someone he was a transmigrator/reincarnator and the original soul of his current body actually died. He can hide it but he stupidly chose to reveal it. And the way author described it made it more annoying and looked forced since it was so sudden. He exposed this secret after FIVE years living in that world. 2. I don't remember MC's real age before he transmigrated but MC acted and sounds like a high schooler with a severe chunnibyou syndrome. 3. MC is the typical 'trying to stay low-key and average kind of character but failed miserably'. This troupe had been overused and the way author wrote it made it worst. I don't dislike this kind of troupe but the way it was written made people hate it 4. MC just realized he transmigrated into a novel world in chapter 50+. Kinda late I think. 5. After reading until chapter 50+, I also realized MC is a bad actor and also bad at explaining things to people and tends to overthinking things which was annoying. Author liked to write MC's monologue in long paragraphs. I might add more on the review when I read more chapters in the future because I still want to give this novel a chance.

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Robby119

its amazing how the world background, character design, and story developement till chapter 193, but i prefer there's plot that will change Zero character to accept living in a new world and slowly begin genuinely care for someone other than his 3 family member i think. his gloomy past life is too much affecting him like enjoying others people pain and suffering even though its his plan that make them in situation like that but he is just justifying his act, using other's people decisions/human nature. i know author want to make Zero act unlike the other MC that like to intervene and meddle in other problem but i think zero character its to gloomy

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Bibongsensei

ahmm.. Can anyone tell me about the synopsis cause in the first paragraph says "What does it feel like to find yourself inside the novel of an author you hated? How will you survive in a world that's filled with cliché? Well, something similar happened here." there's two characters here, the one who reincarnated in author's novel(lets call him no.1)and the author(let's call him no.2). Right? And the next paragraph says "Once there was an unpopular fantasy novel author. However, for certain reasons, he died a pathetic death." means the author died(no.2) right? and the 3rd paragraph says "Later he found out that the world he reincarnated in was the same as the novel of an author he hated the most. The only person he never wanted to talk to again…he was reincarnated inside that very person’s novel." And this the confusing who is he??? the author(no.2)???or no.1 ??... i mean both of them dies right?? it's confusing me so much that I can't even start reading because im trying to guess it before reading this novel .sorry im not really good at english and grammar. here my advance 5 ⭐

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himitsu_desuu

i would say that this story is mid at best. some parts are just downright weird and are way too convenient for the mc.

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ysian
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20 chapters in, honest review Facts first: MC is op right from the start, is staying low-key, is very smart. Good points: The writing is not cringe (very little) He was training for 5 years to become from C to B for his stats.(character building) His sister seems to find something odd with zero since his sickness and mc took his place. Potential good development plot. Bad points: I don't really like the 'Status system' in the magical world. MC parents straight up just ask him his stats and did not use tools to ascertain his potential. Then there's the timeskip from his isekai date to 5 years later. It skipped on so much family interaction that could have happened (specially since MC said he became emotionally attached to them like real family) Potential writing on MC coping with the isekai skipped. For all these iskais, i can't help but think these MCs liked the isekai world better and wanted it. Anothet bad plot was the story building to the tournament arc which was basically none. The tournament was just dumped in there and the info that the kingdom's princess would come is also dumped in. Furthermore, this tournament is called 'the best warrior of the decade' but it is conducted in some small city and MCs parents said that Anya was the strongest in the city with average E rank stats. Not much sense. This arc can only be called lazy. For all the supposed grandeur, MC was able to sign in his own sister as a contestant without her knowledge (though he did tell his sister he had a plan). This just shows that the security for the tournament very very low. Again not much sense. Then another thing dumped in there is MC suddenly becomes a smart schemer who sees everyone as a 'piece'. Just like that, no development prior. Mind you he was a normal average guy in his previous life Lastly, the fact that he was able to set an explosive (dunno how he could even know how) under the princess platform is just idiotic. Royalty of a kingdom and any B rank magician can just slide in and harm her life. Where is the security, royal knights. Moreover, after she was saved by Anya (for the plan) ,she comes to MC mansion on the same day! So no going into hiding after an assassination attempt. Following logic, there should be an investigation to find to attackers. But she just travel across the city to MC house wih only 4 guards. No logic. I don't know if the plot building gets better and im not gonna stick around to find out. Just my opinion.

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Cj_Ali
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Does that mc have the memories of the body he stole or took over cause you did n’t explain that

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GodLevelVillan

bro nothing to say hands off to you one of the best novels I have read I mostly like harem novels but I Don know why this one got me hooked up Readers you should give it a try

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GodLevelVillan

it's good you should try reading it once but I think the author should give more bloody scenes then it is fun the rest is good and all but I am a fan of killing and stuff so I would like that more

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maxphantom

too many Novels extra and authors pov copy are floating around webnovel. At least that is the first impression this gives. but i will rate this again after reading this. 5 star in advanced cause it aint easy to write a quality novel. i myself quit midway.

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your_demons

Definitely worth a read. I have read the other book of the author and I'd say this novel improves in many aspects. Though still, it's not the best out there and have its flaws. But anyway, if you ignore some mistakes the novel as whole is good (saying this after reading upto the latest ch 100)

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Zkzkz_Lskzk

After reading all the chapters so far I can say that I like this novel, okay it's not new with the concept of "ohh I know this story, it's the novel that read, or write, like Author's POV or Novel's Extra and others.... but I like it, the story is interesting, the mystery about the mc's past is intriguing and I want to know the rest and hope that the novel will continue. is only based on my personal opinion, I know nothing about writing or world Background or what you want. Spoiler Warning!!! Question for the author : the passage where the mc saves Ellyn from the 3 jealous girls by trapping them and blackmails Ellyn with her past reminds me of ayanokoji in Classroom of the elite, I don't know if the author does it on purpose or It was done unconsciously but being a fan of the novel it made me laugh.

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shining_night

Uhh, I'm not used to this review thing but I'm doing it since the author asked for it and I like this story. Remember, what I'm writing here is based on my personal opinion and the things I like about this novel. The writing quality is good, better than average and than many other novel I have read on this site. The story is well, interesting. The core concept of this novel is the same as TAPOV and The novels extra but the way it plays it out is different and I like it. Though, the pacing is a bit slow but that didnt pose a problem to me. Now the MC, well, I quite like this MC. He is smart plus a sadist, what more you want? He also sometimes makes mistakes according to his personality but I think it gives his character more depth rather than being a cardboard cutout MC. I have caught up to the latest ch (84) and his past is not revealed yet, which makes the actions he takes more suspicious. The world building....it isn't really showed much since the focus is on characters until now but what's shown is not bad I think. I just hope the author doesn't ruin it afterward. In the end, I'll say give this novel a try and see for yourself it it suits your taste or not.

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