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the story is interesting, the character design is so so the grammar is bad if the grammar is fixed then I would say this could be a good read
I tried to find a nicer way of talking about how bad this novel is but I couldn’t… - I don’t often say this but the translation quality is worse than MTL. - the prologue (if it could be called that) is cringe worthy.
the fanfiction in general is very nice but I have encountered several problems that can be solved over time ... you have to improve the quality of the writing and the development of the character then as fan fiction no and bad (written with Google translate)
the story is interesting, the character design is so so the grammar is bad if the grammar is fixed then I would say this could be a good read
I tried to find a nicer way of talking about how bad this novel is but I couldn’t… - I don’t often say this but the translation quality is worse than MTL. - the prologue (if it could be called that) is cringe worthy.
the fanfiction in general is very nice but I have encountered several problems that can be solved over time ... you have to improve the quality of the writing and the development of the character then as fan fiction no and bad (written with Google translate)