Leave Me Alone, Heroines!

LV 4

Lion_Singh

This novel has all the things we can expect and they are all perfectly balanced. First the plot of the novel is very good and story develop at a very nice rate, characters are good and we can imagine their personality through their interaction, so great work here as well. The world background is average (nothing new). And lastly the fmcs = yandere (This negates the small shortcomings and forced me to smash 5 stars)

LV 12

IamMountTai

Short Critical Review Read 105 chapters and dropped unfortunately. It has some good ideas, but I would have to say I'm disappointed. The problem is I can't take it seriously. While I know its a story full of yanderes, so I expect craziness, but the realism behind things in the story not just with the heroines are very unsatisfactory. One of the main reasons behind it is because the MC is a child. One that is under the age of 10 mind you. I have no complaints with him being a child, but the way people around him react aren't realistic enough most of the time in response to his presence. The author does try to show the character development of the mc multiple times in comparison to show his change from the past. But I feel the execution is lacking from my expectations and things that should be seen much later in the novel are seen quite early within the 100 chapters. (SPOILER) For instance, there was a scene in the novel where he confronts his ugly self which was seen in a random test because goddess was like yeah lets mess with him here. Instead of maybe some hyped built up test and this was like the final test where he struggles deeply because its a reflection of his psyche but instead we something resolved quite quickly and the acceptance was done in like a chapter. It's pretentious and cheap. I cannot take it seriously sorry. SPOILER~ I stopped at 104 for a reason. With the previous chapter of the heroine who was LITERIALLY IN HER 30S hardcore smother kissed a kid under 10 years old! While its ridiculous and we can just blame things on the goddess even tho things weren't done in a convincing matter prior to this....THE MC DOES NOT QUESTION THE MORALITY BEHIND IT NOR WAS IT MENTIONED AT ALL BY THE AUTHOR. The only reception close to that was "...That's sexual harassment of a young boy." In the next chapter, he contemplates about the incident as the matter between man and woman. Cool that's fine since you were actually an adult before, but like... HELLO MORALITY?!!! This is the perfect example as to why I just can't take things seriously at all. Serious story or not it doesn't matter, but the realism is very unsatisfactory. As a result, I'm dropping it unfortunately. It's a shame because there are some good ideas like the whole mc being able to go to Dia. I also quite liked Tania and she at least out of the 3 heroines introduced was the most believable even though it was still ridiculous. Writing quality- It's fine for a web novel standard. There are mistakes but it doesn't distract me from my reading and completely legible.

LV 1

00Mark

A kid mc? what's up with this new trend of writing kids with incarnated souls as the main characters? what's the appeal behind this trope? I would've liked to give this novel a chance but kid mcs are instadrops for me, can't deal with mcs being constantly underestimated because of their body or having their cultivation slow down because "muh body isn't developed, i can't breakthrough! muh foundation!"

LV 1

Deepanshu_Tyagi

I really don't like when they show or introduce Mc as cold hearted and calculating but when a heroine come he becomes a dimwit And thing is even the world is fantasy fiction but for me a 10year boy talking like an adult is a huge turnoff And first his hate for goddess but for not any defined reason was also a forced situation

LV 4

_Rico_

The novel is pretty good and it seems that the writer knows what he is writing. Mc is a mysterious one but is not shounen type of character(thank god). World background is nice. For me, the best part of novel is yandere heroines (imagine the chaos). I just hope that you do your characters justice as they have a lot of potential. Overall the novel is pretty good.

LV 4

Chibi_Zuobai

honestly i wpuldve done a more bettwr review but man im tirrd yada yda long story short thid shot is gorgeous 5/5 the uhh mc is someone most people will like umu anyways off to mr resding more stuff whkist hslf asleeo

LV 4

Zekril

It just i don't understand why do you have to reincarnate him in a child and act like a seasoned veteran already and the timeline of the first event is like 10 years apart. Why not just reincarnate him like 2 or 3 years before the first event of the story if he already have that experience it wasting to much time.

LV 13

XKoa

Story could have been a great adventure of a man who had to come to terms with his past life while dealing with a new world and yandare fml but it was instead weird perversion of the author who thought having the assassin be a CHILD for over 100 plus chapters was a good idea and then to charge that much money for it?? Really? It has so much potential but is ruined by him being a CHILD FOR 90% of the story! Why??? Who’s into this stuff?

LV 14

ACE_KinGz

I can't tell if this is OVERPOWERED OR WEAK TO STRONG tag only. Bcoz in every event .. his getting down so badly .. so disappointing !! Even his getting boost at dungeon event .. his still so weak .. and most of his enemy so strong ..

LV 11

LeXxxi

So when will he grow up or will he even grow up? i read ur book until 1 to 100 chapters. The reason I stopped, cuz the MC is still 8. thou im still unlocking chapters you post so, when will he grow up? 💯❤️💯❤️💯❤️💯❤️💯❤️💯❤️💯❤️💯

LV 12

Mastro_Destroyer

One of the best Novel on the app. I liked the protagonist. i saw that the Last chapter was published days ago. The Novel is dropped? I Hope not.

Hello I am the person below this message this is my 2nd acc since am using mom's phone and here is review am on 60 chp now and it's still satisfying and great I must say it is an ideal novel that one wishes to find but can't exactly describe in words a rare delicacy on showcasing yandere so perfectly and an interesting story unlike other dunbasses he gave up ib the og book and went on his own path not caring about storyline loved this part keep update it still great **inshort it's great anyone reading this can give it a try worth reading**

LV 12

GrInfo

MC is so annoying, he’s the king of assassins... I hate this trope when they aren’t even skilled assassins. He’s ungrateful, petty, and narrow minded. He’s also so arrogant. Can’t read a story with him. (The plot takes forever, and romance is iffy.)

LV 13

Unmasked63

Review at chapter 196: I've enjoyed this novel greatly and thought it deserved a review. The mc is very well done and the build up with the fml's around him is also near perfection. Keep up the great work author.

LV 4

Usman_Khan_3278

Author this book is very bad there are many plotholes and gramm punctuation mistakes.

LV 14

Guanam

Don’t waste your time and money..

LV 4

Naaupe

It has its high points, but the progression is very rushed and sometimes not very satisfying or seeming a bit ridiculous.

LV 2

HoS_Yatta02

I'll place a 5 star review here. Good luck with your novel Author ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

LV 1

D_Wolf

So first off the idea of using a child as the center of a yandare harem type story. It actually makes perfect sense with the insane goddess who puts him in all the situations. I actually liked the story up until around the second exam. It gets to the point where there are confusing situations thrown at me the reader one after another and the MC going through massive death traps in the 'hunter exam' that none of the competitors could possibly complete. Obviously he is taking a different exam thanks to his insane goddess, but I was actually hoping for more interaction with the heroines particularly in yandare mode. Not just the insane goddess.