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The first impressions of the story were so bad that I find it hard to continue. The character so far has been inconsistent. He wished for three things, ABSOLUTE LUCK, healthy body immune of illness or disease, and UNSHAKEABLE WILLPOWER. Next chapter he spawns next to honkai chickens is chased and almost killed. Now this wouldn't be so bad, luck works in different ways and it led him to one of the main characters of the setting. But what's ridiculous is for someone with UNSHAKEABLE WILLPOWER, he's an absolute wuss. Here's exact quotes: "Noooooo ... stay away ... stay away please..." "Nooooo!!!" Ryusuke screamed as he covered his face with his arms and closed his eyes already anticipating the worst Not exactly unshakeable willpower. Worst of all the next chapter he all of a sudden turns in Gilgamesh and starts calling everyone mongrels. The author has absolutely no idea what he's doing. The story also starts within a 'flashback' or future so to speak where a lot of things have already transpired and then all of a sudden it switches back to the past and continues from there? Why not just start from here altogether. Nothing interesting even happened in the 'prologue' so I don't see why it's a necessity. Stories beginning is a mess.
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Honkai Fic? 5 star, fortunately nothing I found so far to reduce its star rating. Soo, 5 Start !!!!!
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it was all going nicely at the start and was even improving in quality in my opinnion but then when the latest chapters came i was really disappointed cause i think the author was going to try out something risky only to fail in a way in the end, so now im just waiting for more chapters hoping that he fixes this mistake and show everyone that everything was all apart of his plan "even if it wasnt" good work author keep it up im rooting for you.
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As I'm writing this review I am currently suffering from a cliffhanger that our dear author made. I am greatly excited for a new chapter. Now for my review. Some people may not like this as we all have different taste but that is by no means that this fanfic is bad. No, it's amazing. In fact if your looking for a HI3 fanfic where some characters who are fated to have die live. Then this is for you. Keep up the good work author!
Мне понравилось, ТК люблю вселенную Хонкай, и жду продолжение ведь мало нормальных произведений по Хонкеке. Болею за автора, чтоб было вдохновение у него.
For me, the fic at the speed it is already very good, now I just have to let a lot of chapters accumulate and then read them all at once and then wait to accumulate more
I would like to say this fanfic is very good among all fanfics i read about honkai impact. Including chinese ones. Please good author dont drop this like most authors do after some time. And if you can please update it more bcs like i said this is brilliant story so far. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very interesting but unfortunately it is missing, not because the story is bad but because the chapters don't come out so when they take a long time I don't even know what story I'm watching
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Muy bueno capítulo sigue así me encanta sería bueno que kallen se enamore del prota 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I mean it's good and all but the author desperately needs a editor and some stuff don't make sense and I gotta search for that one dude in the comments to correct it for me
Instant five stars because of Kyuushou, the Houkai Jesus. Nothing can go wrong with the Lord and savior in the story. Hope she can spoil Sirin as she did in GGZ, though. Cuz little Sirin needs more love.
... *reads TRAGEDY tag*... i already have way more tragedy in my life than i can handle... what tragedy are we talking about?
the story is very interesting, despite not having played Honkai Impact, I know a little about the lore, basically everyone suffers in this game lol Something I would like to ask the author, is if yae sakura will be a love interest of the MC, because if it is, it will be very strange considering the yuri of the initial capitulus, even if it is not an NTR in the MC's view (since he still doesn't love her), for the reader who knows she will be in the harem will still be NTR
truly an amazing story I just love it I can't wait to see the next chapters [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It has been good journey but webnovel is no more good bye everyone. See ya when a miracle happen. Later Happy Reading To ya all And have a wonderful time
As of writing this I am 15 Chapters into this fic and seriously recommend it. If you are looking for an Mc that isn't all powerful, but also isn't weak, then this is the fanfic is a great read. The story starts off pretty good, the Grammer overall wasn't the best but it's nothing that will actually standout and bother the reader with, and that's only the first few chapters. As it goes on the Writing quality, let alone Grammer, Improves by a lot. The story begins to develop by introducing our mc, what he can do, what his hobbies are, and some insight into his mindset and goals. It has only been 15 Chapters and a lot of development is happening. The mc will meet more characters along the way and interact with them. I am looking forward to this, but everything in moderation. From what I know the author uploads a chapter every few days on a regular, I just wish they where longer. From what I see the author does a great job with the world. It's background is good, but we haven't seen all of it yet. I'm anticipating the way the author is going to handle Stigmata, Valkyries, Weapons, Upgrades, and Missions (Hopefully we can see the mc get to participate in one of the in-game event stories in the future.) Keep up the great work author-san!
It’s good though there’s some cringe line and the interaction seem a little bit forced that i dislike but overall it’s good. Nonetheless i hope he can interact with other characters and so.
need more please I like this fanfic of honkai impact that you made wahahah need more author. keep up the good work author[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Interesting I liked everything so far It would be even more interesting in the future hopefully author didn't flop this one lol Can't wait
while i appreciate the amounts of lore of hi3 author have a very bad habit of repeating info and adding literally unnecessary details. for example in sakuta samsara he put a little scene of kallenXsakura yuri tome. while i am pkay with yuri that part was completely unnecessary for the story and characters themselves . As for repeating, he literally repeat facts about kallen and sakuras meeteng and story more than 3 times. Like he explained how they meet at least 3 times in different chapters. And its even can be present in ONE PARAGRAPH. Explain 1 thing at 1/3 of paragraph, 2/3 goes to something related to that and 3/3 goest into repeating information from 1st third. It just getting ridiculous
The first impressions of the story were so bad that I find it hard to continue. The character so far has been inconsistent. He wished for three things, ABSOLUTE LUCK, healthy body immune of illness or disease, and UNSHAKEABLE WILLPOWER. Next chapter he spawns next to honkai chickens is chased and almost killed. Now this wouldn't be so bad, luck works in different ways and it led him to one of the main characters of the setting. But what's ridiculous is for someone with UNSHAKEABLE WILLPOWER, he's an absolute wuss. Here's exact quotes: "Noooooo ... stay away ... stay away please..." "Nooooo!!!" Ryusuke screamed as he covered his face with his arms and closed his eyes already anticipating the worst Not exactly unshakeable willpower. Worst of all the next chapter he all of a sudden turns in Gilgamesh and starts calling everyone mongrels. The author has absolutely no idea what he's doing. The story also starts within a 'flashback' or future so to speak where a lot of things have already transpired and then all of a sudden it switches back to the past and continues from there? Why not just start from here altogether. Nothing interesting even happened in the 'prologue' so I don't see why it's a necessity. Stories beginning is a mess.
The author is finally back, Hope you don't drop this novel, [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Honkai Fic? 5 star, fortunately nothing I found so far to reduce its star rating. Soo, 5 Start !!!!!
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it was all going nicely at the start and was even improving in quality in my opinnion but then when the latest chapters came i was really disappointed cause i think the author was going to try out something risky only to fail in a way in the end, so now im just waiting for more chapters hoping that he fixes this mistake and show everyone that everything was all apart of his plan "even if it wasnt" good work author keep it up im rooting for you.
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As I'm writing this review I am currently suffering from a cliffhanger that our dear author made. I am greatly excited for a new chapter. Now for my review. Some people may not like this as we all have different taste but that is by no means that this fanfic is bad. No, it's amazing. In fact if your looking for a HI3 fanfic where some characters who are fated to have die live. Then this is for you. Keep up the good work author!
Мне понравилось, ТК люблю вселенную Хонкай, и жду продолжение ведь мало нормальных произведений по Хонкеке. Болею за автора, чтоб было вдохновение у него.
For me, the fic at the speed it is already very good, now I just have to let a lot of chapters accumulate and then read them all at once and then wait to accumulate more
I would like to say this fanfic is very good among all fanfics i read about honkai impact. Including chinese ones. Please good author dont drop this like most authors do after some time. And if you can please update it more bcs like i said this is brilliant story so far. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Very interesting but unfortunately it is missing, not because the story is bad but because the chapters don't come out so when they take a long time I don't even know what story I'm watching
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Muy bueno capítulo sigue así me encanta sería bueno que kallen se enamore del prota 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👏👏👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I mean it's good and all but the author desperately needs a editor and some stuff don't make sense and I gotta search for that one dude in the comments to correct it for me
Instant five stars because of Kyuushou, the Houkai Jesus. Nothing can go wrong with the Lord and savior in the story. Hope she can spoil Sirin as she did in GGZ, though. Cuz little Sirin needs more love.
... *reads TRAGEDY tag*... i already have way more tragedy in my life than i can handle... what tragedy are we talking about?
the story is very interesting, despite not having played Honkai Impact, I know a little about the lore, basically everyone suffers in this game lol Something I would like to ask the author, is if yae sakura will be a love interest of the MC, because if it is, it will be very strange considering the yuri of the initial capitulus, even if it is not an NTR in the MC's view (since he still doesn't love her), for the reader who knows she will be in the harem will still be NTR
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It has been good journey but webnovel is no more good bye everyone. See ya when a miracle happen. Later Happy Reading To ya all And have a wonderful time
As of writing this I am 15 Chapters into this fic and seriously recommend it. If you are looking for an Mc that isn't all powerful, but also isn't weak, then this is the fanfic is a great read. The story starts off pretty good, the Grammer overall wasn't the best but it's nothing that will actually standout and bother the reader with, and that's only the first few chapters. As it goes on the Writing quality, let alone Grammer, Improves by a lot. The story begins to develop by introducing our mc, what he can do, what his hobbies are, and some insight into his mindset and goals. It has only been 15 Chapters and a lot of development is happening. The mc will meet more characters along the way and interact with them. I am looking forward to this, but everything in moderation. From what I know the author uploads a chapter every few days on a regular, I just wish they where longer. From what I see the author does a great job with the world. It's background is good, but we haven't seen all of it yet. I'm anticipating the way the author is going to handle Stigmata, Valkyries, Weapons, Upgrades, and Missions (Hopefully we can see the mc get to participate in one of the in-game event stories in the future.) Keep up the great work author-san!
It’s good though there’s some cringe line and the interaction seem a little bit forced that i dislike but overall it’s good. Nonetheless i hope he can interact with other characters and so.
need more please I like this fanfic of honkai impact that you made wahahah need more author. keep up the good work author[img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]
Interesting I liked everything so far It would be even more interesting in the future hopefully author didn't flop this one lol Can't wait
while i appreciate the amounts of lore of hi3 author have a very bad habit of repeating info and adding literally unnecessary details. for example in sakuta samsara he put a little scene of kallenXsakura yuri tome. while i am pkay with yuri that part was completely unnecessary for the story and characters themselves . As for repeating, he literally repeat facts about kallen and sakuras meeteng and story more than 3 times. Like he explained how they meet at least 3 times in different chapters. And its even can be present in ONE PARAGRAPH. Explain 1 thing at 1/3 of paragraph, 2/3 goes to something related to that and 3/3 goest into repeating information from 1st third. It just getting ridiculous