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Captivating first chapter that introduced the MC in a dire state. I was kept on my toes as I wondered whether she would survive or not. Thankfully she did survive in a mysterious way and she planned to find out what happened to her. The intensity of the first chapter was watered down in the following chapters. Focus and character personality seem to change somewhat. Proper editing would do the story wonders as minor typing and wording mistakes often takes the joy away from reading. Other than that, a job well done 👍
This deserves all the attention it gets and more!! This is amazing and everything is written perfectly and fleshed out nicelyy- how the characters react with eachother is also very nicely done
I love what u did there . .it's not rushed and not slow. this is a nice book. And grammar is just top notch. I will say that the only down side might be the updating stability .... drop more pls
From the Blurb alone I already became intrigued by this wonderful masterpiece . The writer did a great job to come up with such wonderful novel. Each chapter is interesting that you would find yourself glue to the novel. This is a must read, and please kindly update author 🥺🥺
This is really one hck of novels... honestly, it keep hanging there to find out, what next. The pace is great & how it intristically mde you want more & more. kudo's to author... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] keep it up.
This is a great story, i really like the way the characters are used to tell the story and they don't seem 1 sided or plain boring. Lots of chapters so far to binge, but I look forward to more to come.
Liking this novel so far! The beginning chapter is really well done, and I am glad the author doesn't leave the readers hanging for character names in following chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next!
The synopsis of the book is amazing, it was worth reading. I love the words and characters, can't wait for more uupdates. Good luck on your contest.
the sypnosis of this book is amazing and prologue us enough to get any science fiction fans hooked though the journey of fl is filled with thorns but she gains some amazing experience in it.
When I first heard about the story, I thought the main character would be genderless. Because the incident at the beginning was explained in a clear and concise way, I had a good idea of the basic plot. This is important because many authors tend to dump information immediately in the hope that the reader will immediately understand what they want. The world is interesting and rife with intrigue, and the exchanges between the characters are well-developed, allowing me to relax while I'm reading it. It's just a matter of personal preference, but I tend to enjoy stories with more of a meandering progression of events, so perhaps that's why I found the rapid transitions between settings to be a little disconcerting. Also, a lot of things happened all at once. You can decide for yourself if this book is worth your time by giving it a chance.
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what an action packed adventure! author does a great job describing superpowers and they handle the dark mood with light moments really well. Although it's romance - they balance that with enough action to keep the chapters and story engaging.
It is a nice story l must sayy.... The writting quality is very good... And the story as well is nice... Keep it up author ....l wish u a very successful future.
Sypnosis is eye-catching. The novel is intriguing. I recommend this novel so much 🙂 Waiting for more chapters here Good work author!!
The first chapter was magical. I wanted to know if the MC would die but she didn't and the rest was just epic. It was like I was watching a movie where I was kept in suspense. I could imagine everything in my head. Signs of this novel being a big hit
This novel was amazing. A fresh breath indeed away from all one genre. I like the FL, She wasn't all cold, despite so much suffering. She has her sides too, intresting ones. You are brilliant author to write this story.....keep the hard work going on...
Bravo author!!! What a great start..it's pretty so interesting The character development, the plot the world background are so interesting looking forward for more and more
This book is very interesting bravo😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. It helps me with boredom. I'd recommend this story for both readers and writers. Read this story and get stuck in it please.
The writing quality of this novel is good. the first chapter was grappling although it was just an intro about the injured Mc. Showing yourself as an injured Robert I found it unique as I haven't seen anyone doing so. Good work author, please keep up the spirit
It is a good novel and it was my first time reading sci-fic... so I kind of had a good time reading due to the starting of the chapter. It was a amazing start and just few problems with change of narration otherwise it was all good.
Wowww! Finally found such a unique novel after a while , the story progression is amazing and want you to read as many chapters you can in one go, the update speed is fast and author did an amazing job with this novel😊😊😊😊
great story with a great premise! Hoping to see even more wonderful work from this author! The background is solid and the updating is stable.
For the very first time I am reading this kind of novel and e it, it has me hooked. Story development, background, characters, everything is perfectly written. Great job author 👍🏻👍🏻
I really liked story. It keeps me hooked and the development is smooth and interesting. You can work a bit on punctuation. I think the story has great potential.
Personally, the inconsistent spacing between punctuation and the tense switching was a bittt distracting. If you could do an edit and try to fix some of those little things, I think it would make your story an overall much smoother read. On the other hand, I think the world background is really cool, and you definitely try to have cliffhangers at the end of your chapters, so good luck!
The turns of events and plots are quite balanced. Moving forward to story and the description helps to visualize the whole detail. Very interesting Sci Fi novel. I absolutely recommend other reader to read this one.
A great read! Although I do like it when a bunch of info is thrown into my face when reading sci-fi, I do like the simplicity of yours. Characters seem to be greatly build, and so does the plot. Keep up the good work!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I actually like how the first chapter is third-person and the second chapter in first-person perspective, it felt like a trailer. The author did an amazing job with the details, it gave me a vivid imagination of what was going on. Unlike other sci-fi, this was really simple and I am saying it in the best way possible. I didn't have to scratch my head trying to understand what was going on- The author kept growing better as they wrote more and more so keep writing!! [img=recommend]
This story has a lot of potencial. I think that world buliding helps make the world feel alive and real. Keep up the good work and i'm excited to see the growth of your world and you as an author. :)
Such an intriguing start. The book is crafted well in such a way it is easy to read. The flow is perfect. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Before anything, Author why did you write tge first chapter in third-person and the second chapter in first-person prespective? 😅 Anyways, the story is finely written, typos here and there but nothing too much of a problem. The mc seems somewhat cocky and arrogant type to me, can’t say i hate or love that, since she was (only my guess) bullied due to her special circumstances. Anyways, Nice work author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]
Captivating first chapter that introduced the MC in a dire state. I was kept on my toes as I wondered whether she would survive or not. Thankfully she did survive in a mysterious way and she planned to find out what happened to her. The intensity of the first chapter was watered down in the following chapters. Focus and character personality seem to change somewhat. Proper editing would do the story wonders as minor typing and wording mistakes often takes the joy away from reading. Other than that, a job well done 👍
This deserves all the attention it gets and more!! This is amazing and everything is written perfectly and fleshed out nicelyy- how the characters react with eachother is also very nicely done
I love what u did there . .it's not rushed and not slow. this is a nice book. And grammar is just top notch. I will say that the only down side might be the updating stability .... drop more pls
From the Blurb alone I already became intrigued by this wonderful masterpiece . The writer did a great job to come up with such wonderful novel. Each chapter is interesting that you would find yourself glue to the novel. This is a must read, and please kindly update author 🥺🥺
This is really one hck of novels... honestly, it keep hanging there to find out, what next. The pace is great & how it intristically mde you want more & more. kudo's to author... [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update] keep it up.
This is a great story, i really like the way the characters are used to tell the story and they don't seem 1 sided or plain boring. Lots of chapters so far to binge, but I look forward to more to come.
Liking this novel so far! The beginning chapter is really well done, and I am glad the author doesn't leave the readers hanging for character names in following chapters. Can't wait to see what happens next!
The synopsis of the book is amazing, it was worth reading. I love the words and characters, can't wait for more uupdates. Good luck on your contest.
the sypnosis of this book is amazing and prologue us enough to get any science fiction fans hooked though the journey of fl is filled with thorns but she gains some amazing experience in it.
When I first heard about the story, I thought the main character would be genderless. Because the incident at the beginning was explained in a clear and concise way, I had a good idea of the basic plot. This is important because many authors tend to dump information immediately in the hope that the reader will immediately understand what they want. The world is interesting and rife with intrigue, and the exchanges between the characters are well-developed, allowing me to relax while I'm reading it. It's just a matter of personal preference, but I tend to enjoy stories with more of a meandering progression of events, so perhaps that's why I found the rapid transitions between settings to be a little disconcerting. Also, a lot of things happened all at once. You can decide for yourself if this book is worth your time by giving it a chance.
Reveal Spoiler what an action packed adventure! author does a great job describing superpowers and they handle the dark mood with light moments really well. Although it's romance - they balance that with enough action to keep the chapters and story engaging.
It is a nice story l must sayy.... The writting quality is very good... And the story as well is nice... Keep it up author ....l wish u a very successful future.
Sypnosis is eye-catching. The novel is intriguing. I recommend this novel so much 🙂 Waiting for more chapters here Good work author!!
The first chapter was magical. I wanted to know if the MC would die but she didn't and the rest was just epic. It was like I was watching a movie where I was kept in suspense. I could imagine everything in my head. Signs of this novel being a big hit
This novel was amazing. A fresh breath indeed away from all one genre. I like the FL, She wasn't all cold, despite so much suffering. She has her sides too, intresting ones. You are brilliant author to write this story.....keep the hard work going on...
Bravo author!!! What a great start..it's pretty so interesting The character development, the plot the world background are so interesting looking forward for more and more
This book is very interesting bravo😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. It helps me with boredom. I'd recommend this story for both readers and writers. Read this story and get stuck in it please.
The writing quality of this novel is good. the first chapter was grappling although it was just an intro about the injured Mc. Showing yourself as an injured Robert I found it unique as I haven't seen anyone doing so. Good work author, please keep up the spirit
It is a good novel and it was my first time reading sci-fic... so I kind of had a good time reading due to the starting of the chapter. It was a amazing start and just few problems with change of narration otherwise it was all good.
Wowww! Finally found such a unique novel after a while , the story progression is amazing and want you to read as many chapters you can in one go, the update speed is fast and author did an amazing job with this novel😊😊😊😊
great story with a great premise! Hoping to see even more wonderful work from this author! The background is solid and the updating is stable.
For the very first time I am reading this kind of novel and e it, it has me hooked. Story development, background, characters, everything is perfectly written. Great job author 👍🏻👍🏻
I really liked story. It keeps me hooked and the development is smooth and interesting. You can work a bit on punctuation. I think the story has great potential.
Personally, the inconsistent spacing between punctuation and the tense switching was a bittt distracting. If you could do an edit and try to fix some of those little things, I think it would make your story an overall much smoother read. On the other hand, I think the world background is really cool, and you definitely try to have cliffhangers at the end of your chapters, so good luck!
The turns of events and plots are quite balanced. Moving forward to story and the description helps to visualize the whole detail. Very interesting Sci Fi novel. I absolutely recommend other reader to read this one.
A great read! Although I do like it when a bunch of info is thrown into my face when reading sci-fi, I do like the simplicity of yours. Characters seem to be greatly build, and so does the plot. Keep up the good work!! [img=recommend][img=recommend]
I actually like how the first chapter is third-person and the second chapter in first-person perspective, it felt like a trailer. The author did an amazing job with the details, it gave me a vivid imagination of what was going on. Unlike other sci-fi, this was really simple and I am saying it in the best way possible. I didn't have to scratch my head trying to understand what was going on- The author kept growing better as they wrote more and more so keep writing!! [img=recommend]
This story has a lot of potencial. I think that world buliding helps make the world feel alive and real. Keep up the good work and i'm excited to see the growth of your world and you as an author. :)
Such an intriguing start. The book is crafted well in such a way it is easy to read. The flow is perfect. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Before anything, Author why did you write tge first chapter in third-person and the second chapter in first-person prespective? 😅 Anyways, the story is finely written, typos here and there but nothing too much of a problem. The mc seems somewhat cocky and arrogant type to me, can’t say i hate or love that, since she was (only my guess) bullied due to her special circumstances. Anyways, Nice work author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]