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I feel that this type of leveling system is really interesting. The subtle way that the author shows how the Mc living in a skill system world without too much distractment, it was only during the sleeping period that the system updates. Very interesting.
Love the pace of the story and how he explains everything and not just a info dump first chapter. Author really knows how to set the pace of his story.
I have only just started reading and already I hope to see the character develop more with his system and read what he will do with it I hope you don't leave the system out too much.
Writing Quality five star Stability of Updates five star Story Development five star Character Design five star World Background five star .
Highly recommended!!! This novel is expertly written. There's nothing to complain about, and everything to praise. It's hard to put down. It's like a classic fantasy. Try it out.
Hi Fallen Ghost! I have to say that I am amazed with the storytelling style. Each chapter was packed with action and narration. While one would expect the narration to be mere fillers, it actually contains in-depth details about this world of magicak kingdom where the story takes place. Lindley the protagonist was a very cheerful and modestly happy guy at the beginning but things quickly took a dark turn right at the first chapter. The story pace was amazing and engaging. The grammar and structures are impeccable. Readers who like magical medieval stories with magical beasts and leveling and system should definitely stop by! Extremely well-written story, wonderful job!
The novel is written with extreme in-depth details, fully describing the characters appearances and their emotions. The writing itself is also exceptionally clean and pretty. The plot is good and the author works perfectly to bring out its true beauty! Well done author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]
A System Story! So far, it's just been a few chapters but the hook and twist are well written. Makes me want to read more, and it is enjoyable to read. The MC is very well developed as well. Hopefully this book will grow on me as the author releases more in the future [img=recommend]
This has been very impressive so far. Just when I think I know what will happen, the author takes a twist which pulls me further into the story. The concept is well thought out and the story jumps quickly to the action, making the plot move at an enjoyable pace. The MC is relatable so far. Overall, you should check this story out. You will not be disappointed!
Author here. Thanks for checking out my work, and I hope you're enjoying it. Please, continue to support my work with your votes, powerstonesvand tickets. God bless you all.
Hi Fallen_Ghost, congrats on winning Bronze in the recent WPC! Please contact me on discord to get your coin code prize. My discord ID is hongwen#2938.
Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I feel that this type of leveling system is really interesting. The subtle way that the author shows how the Mc living in a skill system world without too much distractment, it was only during the sleeping period that the system updates. Very interesting.
Love the pace of the story and how he explains everything and not just a info dump first chapter. Author really knows how to set the pace of his story.
I have only just started reading and already I hope to see the character develop more with his system and read what he will do with it I hope you don't leave the system out too much.
Writing Quality five star Stability of Updates five star Story Development five star Character Design five star World Background five star .
Highly recommended!!! This novel is expertly written. There's nothing to complain about, and everything to praise. It's hard to put down. It's like a classic fantasy. Try it out.
Hi Fallen Ghost! I have to say that I am amazed with the storytelling style. Each chapter was packed with action and narration. While one would expect the narration to be mere fillers, it actually contains in-depth details about this world of magicak kingdom where the story takes place. Lindley the protagonist was a very cheerful and modestly happy guy at the beginning but things quickly took a dark turn right at the first chapter. The story pace was amazing and engaging. The grammar and structures are impeccable. Readers who like magical medieval stories with magical beasts and leveling and system should definitely stop by! Extremely well-written story, wonderful job!
The novel is written with extreme in-depth details, fully describing the characters appearances and their emotions. The writing itself is also exceptionally clean and pretty. The plot is good and the author works perfectly to bring out its true beauty! Well done author, keep working hard! [img=recommend]
A System Story! So far, it's just been a few chapters but the hook and twist are well written. Makes me want to read more, and it is enjoyable to read. The MC is very well developed as well. Hopefully this book will grow on me as the author releases more in the future [img=recommend]
This has been very impressive so far. Just when I think I know what will happen, the author takes a twist which pulls me further into the story. The concept is well thought out and the story jumps quickly to the action, making the plot move at an enjoyable pace. The MC is relatable so far. Overall, you should check this story out. You will not be disappointed!
Author here. Thanks for checking out my work, and I hope you're enjoying it. Please, continue to support my work with your votes, powerstonesvand tickets. God bless you all.
Hi Fallen_Ghost, congrats on winning Bronze in the recent WPC! Please contact me on discord to get your coin code prize. My discord ID is hongwen#2938.