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this is one of my favorite novel right now. if you, like me , are too used to villain protagonist or dark fantasy like botds , this one is the light you're looking for. good world background, good character development and good story? WHAT MORE COULD I ASK?
Story is unique and have a solid base................................................................................................................................
(I'm on episode 323.) Ignoring the love part, I really like Mc's intelligence and attitude. I also like that the future situation of the people he helps is explained partially with spoilers. I can't wait for the dancing street kids to grow up. I had high expectations for the love-hate story due to the comments, but I liked it better this way. Despite Mc's weaknesses, it is very nice that he compensates for his shortcomings with quick strategies during the war and The author's narrative gets better as the number of fight scenes increases. If you are hesitant about reading, I recommend you start immediately.
The story is still alright in beginning, but as we move past 300 chapters, many plot holes begin to emerge. There is a central mystery that mc noel's family is executed, and FMC Anna had a big role in it. Anna reincarnates then, with future memories. so she tries to co-operate with Noel, whose family was killed because of her. Anna apologies quite a lot, and some secrets are revealed, after which both begins to trust one another. story was still alright till then, and it took 150 chapters to reach here. but after that author has to expand the world somehow, and his logic fails many times. The problem is, author tries to portray mc as quite clever, but honestly the plans of mc and FMC are idiotic, still they get saved every time bcz of plot. there is a villain organisation whose goal is to help demons, and we never understand why so many stupid people are there who whole heartedly join organization. At 600+ chapter, we get to know that this villain organisation targets mc's country only for some reason, and royals support the villain organisation to crush their opponents. honestly mc should leave the nation at that point only, as in other nations he would be valued and there will be no villain oerganisation. Basically, as chapter count increase, plot holes increase
As one of the best webnovel out there, This one definitely needs more attention.
it was a great start but in the later chapters it starts to get boring and is more tell then show
can anyone please tell if they have become allies now and of course with clearing hatred without any manipulation I want any spoiler you have of it as i can't read anymore it's so frustrating to read when even with hatred it like it's non existent please help me clarify something so i can continue reading it's good but i don't have the courage to venture into unknown thanks in advance
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
I love this novel the characters are so good and interesting i like Noel and Anna there interaction are so good the story are going interesting 😁
wahhhhh!!! I really really love this novel ,this is my only way of thanking the writer .thank youuu for writing this beautiful story. overall i would rate it a 1000000/10 hahhaha^^ if there is someone who is looking for a sign to read this ,well here it is please read and support this story .many hearts for the writer ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
ngl this gas asf literally favorite novel rn love how its going and currently gonna stack til 1k chapters hope author doing good
This novel does so many things right be it story development, character depth, and even the power system.Everything seems like it was carefully crafted you see the characters as humans, they're not perfect and they are flawed, which allows the story to be much more engaging and entertaining.The dichotomy and romance between the two main characters is very entertaining to watch unfold.My only gripe with this novel is that it doesn't have the [Slow Burn romance] tag that it deserves.
Amazing book, please give it a chance it isn’ like your average system or rebirth novel.
This novel manages to provide an interesting twist by incorporating two major genres of reincarnation and a system together. At the very beginning the novelty of it manages to carry the interest in the novel, however by the time the novelty has worn off the plot is already interesting enough to keep you hooked.
why does the author keeps portraying Anna like some sort of stupid girl which the MC plays back and forth after they are both supposed to be MCs and she is supposed to have more advantage after all she can prepare better but all she does is act like a female in an harem....l
great book, the author has also written a lot of my personal favorites but this one is my personal best. great job author keep up the good work
I have only read upto chapter 4 but I am expecting great things from this novel. Also from the romance tag , will something happen like Noel and Anna each try to kill each other but slowly slowly start to fall in love...?
Leaving a review after chap 475 It is pretty good and for those who don't want to read till here, don't start it if you can't read a slow and a bit of a bad start. Yep, the story's start is interesting but also boring, I'll say there are different things that keep happening as the story advances while their character development is good, the world building and background is getting better slowly but surely. It is a good story and it ain't forced romance or anything nor is it stockholm syndrome, he hates her for a good part of the story plus i would advice you to read it if you can manage for the first 100 or so chapters as the story peaks from 100-150 or so. The writing is also pretty good if the author is non-native english speaker but the chapters are a little short if you ask me and a little bit of update instability as i guess author-san is writing their other books as well.
Wasted potential. Although by name you might think that there are 2 protagonists, in fact 65% of the chapters are about Male Lead, 30% about Male and Female Leads together and only 5% about Female Lead. And the hidden gem is in that 30% tandem part. When they try to play mind games against each other. When they undergo personal growth. That part is more than Ok. 5/5. Alas, 2/3 chapters of novel is spent on ML solo battles, training and adventures. And they're just not interesting, because ML is a typical protagonist. A system with quests. Revenge. The second personality. Training. A monstrous talent. Helps everyone in trouble. We've seen it all more than once and it's incredibly boring. 2/5. In general, the work could have been much better if, instead of Action, the author had spent more time on Psychological aspect of work
i gotta say i like the idea and the novel, although author messes up sometimes in the earlier chapters like mistaking the gender of the character. i liked noel and the power system, story wasn't bad as well. though anna on the other hand. i gotta say author if you aimed to make the most unlikeable character you succeeded spectacularly i haven't even felt this kind of rage towards orihime and sakura, and she seriously had to die and manipulate her archenemy for 80 chapters just to realize she is a horrible person smh i wouldn't even be mad if noel keeps hating her afterwards
Just caught up to the story at chapter 458, and it has yet to disappoint me. It's difficult to find novels of this quality at WebNovel. Grammer can still .r slightly improved, but the story itself is top notch. Keep up the good work author, and don't rush the story. The gradual character development of Noel and Anna, along with the improvement in their relationship is definitely a big part of why this novel is so good.
My favorite character here is Anna Stargaze😍 I really like her character growth, and I hope that she will continuously grow stronger, so Noel wouldn’t be able to surpass her hahahah. And I think the system is really a cheat😤 Cuz it gives power boost with missions while reincarnation gives you knowledge about the future in your previous life that might change with your actions in the current world. And please don’t let Anna fall for Noel easily. It would be better if Noel will fall for her first😏 I’d like to see how Noel and Anna’s relationship progress further in the future.
Spoiler Review after reading 400 Chapters of this novel. So let's get this out of the way, I like this novel. When I first read this novel I wasn't exactly sure how I felt about it. Usually novels with the title "System" are a hit or miss for me but I liked the concept of what the synopsis gave me so I ended up giving it a try and I'm happy to admit that this novel is kind of a gem on here. Be honest here. The novels on Webnovel are usually from people who are first time readers, somewhat experienced writers and the rare good veterans who know what their doing now. This novel is in the middle. The Writing Quality is a 4/5, the only reason I didn't max it is because the author keeps getting his He/She mixed up. Honestly with how well the author writes it wouldn't surprise me if I'm getting trolled or not. Story Development is Great. I'll be honest here and say I don't like the Female lead Anna. From her standpoint she reminds me of those insufferable cocky overpowered Korean protagonists. I mentioned Korean Protagonists because the 75% of the time they have a reincarnated person they usually have those traits. Noel on the other hand is the real jewel. I'll just leave it at that. I give Character Design a 3 because honestly there's nothing that stands out to me to remember these characters besides one has a System and the other is a Regressor. All in all I'd recommend this book. Yes the novel is kind of a bumpy ride at the beginning but I'm happy that it smoothens out and keeps going upward. I don't regret trying this novel and if it ever got published to a real book I'd definitely buy it. (Of course I hope they'd fix the he/she problem though.)
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Its alright tbh i didn't like the start so much but after a while it gets good
Whenever I read this story, I always get attracted to it, this story is extremely creative cuz of the two MCs, and the author managed to grasp that opportunity properly, It indeed has the most potential from all the stories from the Author!
There is absolutely no logic in here, so the family of the mc is exterminated vy the royal family and the stargaze family with a direct implication from anna stargaze the " love interest ", the two met after the girl came back from the future to steal all the opportunities from the mc, and like in the arc of days since they've the mc goes from killing from sight, to her food is really good and she smells nice, i should do what she says and help her. This is bullshi* his family was killed recently yet he somehow is fine with helping the killer. I don't care if in the future we find that she wasn't completely at fault (we even have a memory of the girl where she begs her father to kill all of them and to not leg go of the mc) how can a normal human being do such a thing? if it was my family i wold have no problems in killing entire cities just to harm their killer, yet he helps her? why he dosen't try to stab her in the back while they fight enemies? why he helps her in stealing his opportunities? How can he be such a beta? And at last why does this novel have more than a million views yet only 29 reviews, all of which good?
First thing First , this novel author is the best one , in writing words , phrases making character development etc .. also it's not that i am being biased over here just read his another novel you will understand why imma telling that , just read and you will consider it's part of you 🤭
Review (325 chapters) An absolute hidden gem that leaves the readee wanting more and more. Binged in two days and currently at a loss for what to do now since i ran out of chapters. Not going to do an in depth review today but i can strongly give this a top 10. will answer questions any potential reader has for a couple of days. Consistent Male/Female Mc Growth both physically and Psychologically No harem/no real relationship as of yet but it is budding, good romance without being real romance. relationship quality is 10/10 with nothing forced Definitely no cliché’s and feels extremely fresh I dont usually care for dual pov but amazingly done here MC’s arent OP but stronger than their peers due to their circumstances, no powerlevel jumps in fights like alot of novels where mc magically defeats someone 10x stronger and older than him bc the young mc somehow has more experience World background is well done and plenty of room for exploration Writing quality is great but sometimes mixes up who is talking between the mc’s but rare and easily noticable so nothing major System/reincarnation is top notch here Character Emotions are also top notch and i can still explicitly remember the womens emotions ans physical reactions during the bandit extermination 10/10 Good mysteries going on that leave alot of questions and answers to be discovered •Has potention to be one of the best novels on this site and many others when completed. I previously stated top 10 easily but thats just because i cant make up my mind if it takes top 5 right now due to alot of the story left untold as of right now. Note to Author- Amazing work, I am in love with your story and hope you can keep the pace and fully finish it without breaking away to other projects because i believe THIS will be not only your masterpiece, but a true masterpiece on this site with limitless potential. -Syph
Very good novel, imo even with the best potential among the novels from the author. Stable update like always, excellent grammar with very rare and minor errors. The Setting is also very unique imo, story will live or die depending on the dynamic of the 2 mc‘s and their character growth, which is very good at the moment. At the start u might dislike Anna‘s character but after chapter 85 or so she will start changing for the better. Definitely give it a try, it might become the authors best novel imo Newest chapter is 128 as of writing this review.
this is one of my favorite novel right now. if you, like me , are too used to villain protagonist or dark fantasy like botds , this one is the light you're looking for. good world background, good character development and good story? WHAT MORE COULD I ASK?
Story is unique and have a solid base................................................................................................................................
(I'm on episode 323.) Ignoring the love part, I really like Mc's intelligence and attitude. I also like that the future situation of the people he helps is explained partially with spoilers. I can't wait for the dancing street kids to grow up. I had high expectations for the love-hate story due to the comments, but I liked it better this way. Despite Mc's weaknesses, it is very nice that he compensates for his shortcomings with quick strategies during the war and The author's narrative gets better as the number of fight scenes increases. If you are hesitant about reading, I recommend you start immediately.
The story is still alright in beginning, but as we move past 300 chapters, many plot holes begin to emerge. There is a central mystery that mc noel's family is executed, and FMC Anna had a big role in it. Anna reincarnates then, with future memories. so she tries to co-operate with Noel, whose family was killed because of her. Anna apologies quite a lot, and some secrets are revealed, after which both begins to trust one another. story was still alright till then, and it took 150 chapters to reach here. but after that author has to expand the world somehow, and his logic fails many times. The problem is, author tries to portray mc as quite clever, but honestly the plans of mc and FMC are idiotic, still they get saved every time bcz of plot. there is a villain organisation whose goal is to help demons, and we never understand why so many stupid people are there who whole heartedly join organization. At 600+ chapter, we get to know that this villain organisation targets mc's country only for some reason, and royals support the villain organisation to crush their opponents. honestly mc should leave the nation at that point only, as in other nations he would be valued and there will be no villain oerganisation. Basically, as chapter count increase, plot holes increase
As one of the best webnovel out there, This one definitely needs more attention.
it was a great start but in the later chapters it starts to get boring and is more tell then show
can anyone please tell if they have become allies now and of course with clearing hatred without any manipulation I want any spoiler you have of it as i can't read anymore it's so frustrating to read when even with hatred it like it's non existent please help me clarify something so i can continue reading it's good but i don't have the courage to venture into unknown thanks in advance
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
I love this novel the characters are so good and interesting i like Noel and Anna there interaction are so good the story are going interesting 😁
wahhhhh!!! I really really love this novel ,this is my only way of thanking the writer .thank youuu for writing this beautiful story. overall i would rate it a 1000000/10 hahhaha^^ if there is someone who is looking for a sign to read this ,well here it is please read and support this story .many hearts for the writer ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
ngl this gas asf literally favorite novel rn love how its going and currently gonna stack til 1k chapters hope author doing good
This novel does so many things right be it story development, character depth, and even the power system.Everything seems like it was carefully crafted you see the characters as humans, they're not perfect and they are flawed, which allows the story to be much more engaging and entertaining.The dichotomy and romance between the two main characters is very entertaining to watch unfold.My only gripe with this novel is that it doesn't have the [Slow Burn romance] tag that it deserves.
Amazing book, please give it a chance it isn’ like your average system or rebirth novel.
This novel manages to provide an interesting twist by incorporating two major genres of reincarnation and a system together. At the very beginning the novelty of it manages to carry the interest in the novel, however by the time the novelty has worn off the plot is already interesting enough to keep you hooked.
why does the author keeps portraying Anna like some sort of stupid girl which the MC plays back and forth after they are both supposed to be MCs and she is supposed to have more advantage after all she can prepare better but all she does is act like a female in an harem....l
great book, the author has also written a lot of my personal favorites but this one is my personal best. great job author keep up the good work
I have only read upto chapter 4 but I am expecting great things from this novel. Also from the romance tag , will something happen like Noel and Anna each try to kill each other but slowly slowly start to fall in love...?
Leaving a review after chap 475 It is pretty good and for those who don't want to read till here, don't start it if you can't read a slow and a bit of a bad start. Yep, the story's start is interesting but also boring, I'll say there are different things that keep happening as the story advances while their character development is good, the world building and background is getting better slowly but surely. It is a good story and it ain't forced romance or anything nor is it stockholm syndrome, he hates her for a good part of the story plus i would advice you to read it if you can manage for the first 100 or so chapters as the story peaks from 100-150 or so. The writing is also pretty good if the author is non-native english speaker but the chapters are a little short if you ask me and a little bit of update instability as i guess author-san is writing their other books as well.
Wasted potential. Although by name you might think that there are 2 protagonists, in fact 65% of the chapters are about Male Lead, 30% about Male and Female Leads together and only 5% about Female Lead. And the hidden gem is in that 30% tandem part. When they try to play mind games against each other. When they undergo personal growth. That part is more than Ok. 5/5. Alas, 2/3 chapters of novel is spent on ML solo battles, training and adventures. And they're just not interesting, because ML is a typical protagonist. A system with quests. Revenge. The second personality. Training. A monstrous talent. Helps everyone in trouble. We've seen it all more than once and it's incredibly boring. 2/5. In general, the work could have been much better if, instead of Action, the author had spent more time on Psychological aspect of work
i gotta say i like the idea and the novel, although author messes up sometimes in the earlier chapters like mistaking the gender of the character. i liked noel and the power system, story wasn't bad as well. though anna on the other hand. i gotta say author if you aimed to make the most unlikeable character you succeeded spectacularly i haven't even felt this kind of rage towards orihime and sakura, and she seriously had to die and manipulate her archenemy for 80 chapters just to realize she is a horrible person smh i wouldn't even be mad if noel keeps hating her afterwards
Just caught up to the story at chapter 458, and it has yet to disappoint me. It's difficult to find novels of this quality at WebNovel. Grammer can still .r slightly improved, but the story itself is top notch. Keep up the good work author, and don't rush the story. The gradual character development of Noel and Anna, along with the improvement in their relationship is definitely a big part of why this novel is so good.
My favorite character here is Anna Stargaze😍 I really like her character growth, and I hope that she will continuously grow stronger, so Noel wouldn’t be able to surpass her hahahah. And I think the system is really a cheat😤 Cuz it gives power boost with missions while reincarnation gives you knowledge about the future in your previous life that might change with your actions in the current world. And please don’t let Anna fall for Noel easily. It would be better if Noel will fall for her first😏 I’d like to see how Noel and Anna’s relationship progress further in the future.
Spoiler Review after reading 400 Chapters of this novel. So let's get this out of the way, I like this novel. When I first read this novel I wasn't exactly sure how I felt about it. Usually novels with the title "System" are a hit or miss for me but I liked the concept of what the synopsis gave me so I ended up giving it a try and I'm happy to admit that this novel is kind of a gem on here. Be honest here. The novels on Webnovel are usually from people who are first time readers, somewhat experienced writers and the rare good veterans who know what their doing now. This novel is in the middle. The Writing Quality is a 4/5, the only reason I didn't max it is because the author keeps getting his He/She mixed up. Honestly with how well the author writes it wouldn't surprise me if I'm getting trolled or not. Story Development is Great. I'll be honest here and say I don't like the Female lead Anna. From her standpoint she reminds me of those insufferable cocky overpowered Korean protagonists. I mentioned Korean Protagonists because the 75% of the time they have a reincarnated person they usually have those traits. Noel on the other hand is the real jewel. I'll just leave it at that. I give Character Design a 3 because honestly there's nothing that stands out to me to remember these characters besides one has a System and the other is a Regressor. All in all I'd recommend this book. Yes the novel is kind of a bumpy ride at the beginning but I'm happy that it smoothens out and keeps going upward. I don't regret trying this novel and if it ever got published to a real book I'd definitely buy it. (Of course I hope they'd fix the he/she problem though.)
Reveal Spoiler Its alright tbh i didn't like the start so much but after a while it gets good
Whenever I read this story, I always get attracted to it, this story is extremely creative cuz of the two MCs, and the author managed to grasp that opportunity properly, It indeed has the most potential from all the stories from the Author!
There is absolutely no logic in here, so the family of the mc is exterminated vy the royal family and the stargaze family with a direct implication from anna stargaze the " love interest ", the two met after the girl came back from the future to steal all the opportunities from the mc, and like in the arc of days since they've the mc goes from killing from sight, to her food is really good and she smells nice, i should do what she says and help her. This is bullshi* his family was killed recently yet he somehow is fine with helping the killer. I don't care if in the future we find that she wasn't completely at fault (we even have a memory of the girl where she begs her father to kill all of them and to not leg go of the mc) how can a normal human being do such a thing? if it was my family i wold have no problems in killing entire cities just to harm their killer, yet he helps her? why he dosen't try to stab her in the back while they fight enemies? why he helps her in stealing his opportunities? How can he be such a beta? And at last why does this novel have more than a million views yet only 29 reviews, all of which good?
First thing First , this novel author is the best one , in writing words , phrases making character development etc .. also it's not that i am being biased over here just read his another novel you will understand why imma telling that , just read and you will consider it's part of you 🤭
Review (325 chapters) An absolute hidden gem that leaves the readee wanting more and more. Binged in two days and currently at a loss for what to do now since i ran out of chapters. Not going to do an in depth review today but i can strongly give this a top 10. will answer questions any potential reader has for a couple of days. Consistent Male/Female Mc Growth both physically and Psychologically No harem/no real relationship as of yet but it is budding, good romance without being real romance. relationship quality is 10/10 with nothing forced Definitely no cliché’s and feels extremely fresh I dont usually care for dual pov but amazingly done here MC’s arent OP but stronger than their peers due to their circumstances, no powerlevel jumps in fights like alot of novels where mc magically defeats someone 10x stronger and older than him bc the young mc somehow has more experience World background is well done and plenty of room for exploration Writing quality is great but sometimes mixes up who is talking between the mc’s but rare and easily noticable so nothing major System/reincarnation is top notch here Character Emotions are also top notch and i can still explicitly remember the womens emotions ans physical reactions during the bandit extermination 10/10 Good mysteries going on that leave alot of questions and answers to be discovered •Has potention to be one of the best novels on this site and many others when completed. I previously stated top 10 easily but thats just because i cant make up my mind if it takes top 5 right now due to alot of the story left untold as of right now. Note to Author- Amazing work, I am in love with your story and hope you can keep the pace and fully finish it without breaking away to other projects because i believe THIS will be not only your masterpiece, but a true masterpiece on this site with limitless potential. -Syph
Very good novel, imo even with the best potential among the novels from the author. Stable update like always, excellent grammar with very rare and minor errors. The Setting is also very unique imo, story will live or die depending on the dynamic of the 2 mc‘s and their character growth, which is very good at the moment. At the start u might dislike Anna‘s character but after chapter 85 or so she will start changing for the better. Definitely give it a try, it might become the authors best novel imo Newest chapter is 128 as of writing this review.