Reviews of Online In Another World by DelzGB - Webnovel

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Joe_flow

The novel is already off to a great start. Novels in this genre typically have bad starts, and are often repetitive, but it is something I find myself repeatedly coming back to. Using the Webnovel rating system (World-building, Character design, Writing quality) everything is top tier so far. The mc is very realistic. I can also find myself sympathizing with him and his situation. The decisions he makes are very reasonable, and at most I agree or understand the logic behind them. The side characters also seem realistic( I also like how involved they are) which is ironic considering the fact that is a vr story. I believe that this is a story that can really supply me with what I look for in this genre.

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Scarlet_Feather

There are a few things you should know about online. One of the big things is the similarities to the show Mushoku tensei. Most of the stuff that it shares is only surface level things, and it is also only in the beginning of the story. After the first ark, more or less, Online starts to pave it’s own way, becoming it’s own story. The characters were the opposite of what I expected. I assumed they were going to lean more into having npc types of behavior. I was unmistakably wrong about this assumption which is ironic considering the fact that this is a vr story. Even up to the current chapters I’m sharing the thoughts of the main character. Is it actually real or is it just a game? Thoughts like these keep me on the edge of my seat whilst reading Online. The world building is simply phenomenal, which is a trend in Delz’s work. Every thing is described in vivid detail while at the same time not going overboard( this could sometimes halt the reading process)(for me at least). The pacing is slow, but stable and the whole story itself appears to be a slow burn. Last, but not least the action scenes. The fights and anything related to action is very detailed. After reading the action, visualizing it using my imagination is super simple. Another thing I like is how the fighting styles and magic in Online kind of reflect the characters utilizing them. I can definitely say that no part of the novel so far has been boring or lackluster. I’m amazed at how good it’s been so far and I’m ready to see how it progresses in the future

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rapoya76

The start of the story is quite interesting. This author has a great imagination and presents the story in a stable way. I just hope the quality remains good and this is not dropped.

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Fizonel

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that_crazy_bastard

Just wanna ask is this all virtual reality or real reincarnation cause I wann know it's all beautiful or just fake because if it's fake it's gonna hurt my heart

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_Tea_Lover_

Very good novel, my only complaints (40 chapters in) are that the novel will very often switch between first point of view and third, and, even after spending over 10 years in that world, he's still being confused that the things in the "game" he's in would never be put into a game in his original world, although perhaps this has something to do with his previous life and/or the character development the author has planned.

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DragonAmongMen6942

Pretty Good story if you ignore MCs intelligence in starting chapters. .

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TinyBookDragon

I was interested to read about the world the MC chose and the potential of eventually going to the others. The grammar is excellent, the characters are well done and the world seems like it will be interesting. However, the MC runs into so many 'major events' that it feels slightly unrealistic. And this is all just on the way to the main Adventurers Guild location to sign up. Each 'event' lasts so many chapters that I just start skimming or skipping some entirely out of boredom. This will be a story where I wait for a build-up of chapters so that I can skim 50 of them just to get past one fight/arc.

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Oswaldjosue

very good is this author Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm

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Monke232

Re-review because last time my dog died so I was a bit harsh. Basically a love child between Mushoku Tensei and Cultivation Online, except the MC has a completely unique, but still realistic, personality. There’s really nothing to complain about unless you’re biased like me and don’t think wind is cool.

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Daoistqp

I dont know what the author has planned but it would be pretty cool if he tries to make another novel with the same concept of the world but a different mc that chooses another world. Recommended read btw

2yr
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Sagow
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Warning: Small spoiler ahead. Read until chapter 63. The MC is a kind-hearted idiot. He is a complete simp. A girl tried to kill but the MC refused to hurt her because she is a "girl". Then immediately took her out on a date because she was hungry, completely ignoring that she attempted to kill him for some money. I dropped this novel because personally, I hate these types of MC. But if you like these types of MC then this is a GOOD story. The writing quality is good, I didn't see any mistakes. The world is interesting with good characters that feel real and alive.

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crazy_wizard

My Mushoku Tensei chad enjoyers go forth and conquer, this one will definitely suit your tastes. It has a similar but different feel to it, and the world building is simply amazing.

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Scysir
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Everything about this that I've read has been wonderful. The whole story reminds me of mushoku tensei a lot, in a good way. The aging doesn't seemed too forced or too dragged out. The chapters are not short what so ever (at least from what I have reached) it will keep you reading for a while.

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Thesilverderp

Harem or no author? B------------------------------------------------------------------------->~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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ryanisbreathing

[note to self] I'm just not fond of the premise I guess, so can't commit myself to read it. I was looking to read something more MMO-like. But this novel, the game is a one-way ticket. As if uploading your consciousness into the computer/game.

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hydraspare

1. The writing quality is really good. The author makes almost no mistakes in the writing. Most of the time its only small typos and I barely saw any in the 60 chapters I read. The author also fixes them so all I can say is that the writing quality is good. 2. I don’t know about the writing consistency but it seems to be going well. 3. The story development is also good. Story is progressing at a great pace. Not too fast nor too slow. The twists are executed quite well and the story has a goal, I am clearly looking forward for more. 4. The character designs are quite unique and each of them have a unique personality. The MC and his family are quite a funny bunch. 5. For the world background, its still developing so I cannot say for sure but as of now we know the important information and some more, the world also seems to be quite thought of and we know of things that aren’t happening directly to the MC. In my opinion this story is a read well worth. Anywayy, now the system part of the story. As of chapter 55, the system only appeared once. I like the fact that it isn’t the focal point of the story because in most cases, the system ends up dictating every action of the MC which ends up making the story quite boring in my opinion. Finally, the introduction to the VRMMORPG world was a first and I believe that it was a breath pf fresh air compared to most other books lf this type. Tldr : Just read the book.

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darkgoddess1

If you read mushoku tensei you'll like this one. there's a lot twist and turns that differentiate from the work but the fundamentals are pretty much alike and the references are all there. Wich is good and I love it. keep it up. The grammar is good. The story takes a slow pace and the development takes its own time... Also there's a lot of possible ramifications each time I read a chapter and that only shows how well thought and written it was made. Congrats. Hope it doesn't follow too much from the original story because it'll be a bit boring though.

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DaoistKLskQX

does this have lemon scenes?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Korstar26

Not all that into writing reviews, but this is one of the few times I have felt the need to do so honestly. I am loving this novel quite a bit. I only have one request..... Do not abandon this anytime soon please. too many novels 8 have read and truly enjoyed just for them to stop updating out of the blue.

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Cain26
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Honest review The story so far is pretty decent it’s nothing extremely new but it’s not badly done either. I am interested in to seeing what is happening next and the only real downside that I see a little bit in the story so far is this a couple of typos or miss translation

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Arimas_left_nut

It’s been hard trying to find some quality work on this site. So far the book seems pretty good. I need more chapters before I can give it a full fledged review, but I can say it’s definitely worth giving it a read.

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Aegir12

writing quality is great, no complaints there and don't really see grammar mistakes, not any noticeable ones anyway updates are quick story is great, learning with Emilio is fun character design is good, a lot of descriptions are included in the story world is still building up but I like it so far

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Vmprknight

a very unique take on vr and at the same time transmigration. MC is as the title says a "degenerate" but honestly ive seen much more weird mcs than this, he's just a bit pervy I like the parents, its rare to actually have the parents of the mc play a part in the story, but its refreshing

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TheKabow

alright, starting off with the important stuff before the story itself: grammar and quality overall: pretty much perfect. i can speak for most of us when I say finding stories with good grammar on here is difficult, so its always greatly welcome to find one that does. for the story, it's definitely still in the early stages, but its got me curious for more

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WowistZ

Well-written and engrossing so far. It'd only be fair for me to redo this review later down the line when there's more content, but for now, I can safely say this is a certified banger.

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LeadKnight76

[img=update][img=update][img=update] need more, but thats saying a good thing ! anyway good start so far, has me hooked already this start does feel a little slow so i guess watch out for that if thats something that bugs you

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NakamuraGT

story: good so far, interesting premise characters: best part about it grammar/quality: great, nothing to complain about there updates: seems to be coming out daily

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Joe_flow

The novel is already off to a great start. Novels in this genre typically have bad starts, and are often repetitive, but it is something I find myself repeatedly coming back to. Using the Webnovel rating system (World-building, Character design, Writing quality) everything is top tier so far. The mc is very realistic. I can also find myself sympathizing with him and his situation. The decisions he makes are very reasonable, and at most I agree or understand the logic behind them. The side characters also seem realistic( I also like how involved they are) which is ironic considering the fact that is a vr story. I believe that this is a story that can really supply me with what I look for in this genre.

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Scarlet_Feather

There are a few things you should know about online. One of the big things is the similarities to the show Mushoku tensei. Most of the stuff that it shares is only surface level things, and it is also only in the beginning of the story. After the first ark, more or less, Online starts to pave it’s own way, becoming it’s own story. The characters were the opposite of what I expected. I assumed they were going to lean more into having npc types of behavior. I was unmistakably wrong about this assumption which is ironic considering the fact that this is a vr story. Even up to the current chapters I’m sharing the thoughts of the main character. Is it actually real or is it just a game? Thoughts like these keep me on the edge of my seat whilst reading Online. The world building is simply phenomenal, which is a trend in Delz’s work. Every thing is described in vivid detail while at the same time not going overboard( this could sometimes halt the reading process)(for me at least). The pacing is slow, but stable and the whole story itself appears to be a slow burn. Last, but not least the action scenes. The fights and anything related to action is very detailed. After reading the action, visualizing it using my imagination is super simple. Another thing I like is how the fighting styles and magic in Online kind of reflect the characters utilizing them. I can definitely say that no part of the novel so far has been boring or lackluster. I’m amazed at how good it’s been so far and I’m ready to see how it progresses in the future

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rapoya76

The start of the story is quite interesting. This author has a great imagination and presents the story in a stable way. I just hope the quality remains good and this is not dropped.

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Kaniu
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rexehay839

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Fizonel

⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⠎⠀⠀⡞⡷⡄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⢧⠘⡍⢳⡀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡞⠀⠀⢠⡇⡇⠹⡄⠀⣀⡠⠤⠴⠒⠒⠒⠒⠒⠒⠒⠢⠤⠤⣀⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡔⡆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⢇⠹⡄⢧⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡜⠀⠀⠀⠈⣷⡇⠀⣻⠉⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠉⠒⠤⢄⡀⠀⠀⠀⣼⢡⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠘⡀⠱⡈⡇⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠅⠀⠀⢀⣴⣿⡇⢠⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠑⠢⣼⢹⣼⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⢳⡸⡄ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠇⠄⠀⡰⠋⠘⢿⣿⡾⢀⡤⠒⠚⠉⠉⠉⠉⠑⠒⠒⠒⠤⠤⠤⠀⣀⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⡏⣿⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⢇⢳ ⠀⠀⠘⡄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡼⠸⠀⡼⠁⣠⠔⠳⡉⠀⡜⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠉⠒⠦⣄⡀⠀⠀⡇⣧⡟⣹⠦⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠸⡈ ⠀⠀⠀⠸⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⠇⡄⣜⡠⠊⠁⠀⠀⠑⠞⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠉⢳⠀⢻⡿⢡⡟⠀⠙⢄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠠⡀⢹⠀⠀⢧ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⢱⠀⠀⠀⠀⡸⢀⠛⠋⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣾⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢇⠀⢀⢤⣀⠀⠀⠈⢳⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠃⢸⠀⠀⠘ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢣⢀⡠⠖⡇⠸⠀⠀⠀⡀⠀⠀⠀⢀⢞⣼⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠘⠊⠁⠀⠈⠳⢄⠀⠀⢱⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⢸⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⠞⠉⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⢀⣾⠋⡼⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡟⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⢦⡀⢳⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⡶⠃⠀⢀⠄⣰⡇⠀⠀⠀⢠⠇⠀⢀⡾⠁⠀⡇⠀⡏⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣠⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣇⠀⠀⠀⢦⠀⠀⠀⠀⠙⠦⣷⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⢠⠇⠀⣰⣣⠔⢹⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⡜⠀⠀⠀⡇⢠⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣿⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠹⡄⠀⠂⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⣸⠀⢠⢻⠃⠀⣸⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⡼⢥⡀⠀⠀⢣⢸⢻⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⡿⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⣇⢳⠀⠀⠀⡇⢠⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⡇⠀⡎⡏⠀⠀⣿⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⢰⠁⠀⠙⢶⣄⣸⠸⢻⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⡄⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⢰⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠈⢿⡆⠀⠀⢻⠘⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣰⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⡇⢰⢣⠁⠀⢸⠻⠀⠀⠀⠀⣿⠆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠉⢻⣿⣬⣇⠀⠀⠀⠀⣇⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⣾⠏⡇⢤⠀⠀⠀⠀⣇⡠⠬⢷⠀⠀⢸⡆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠇⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⢳⢸⢸⠀⠀⢸⡆⠀⠀⠀⠀⡿⢖⣒⣶⣤⣄⡓⠾⣯⣙⠺⣀⠀⠀⠀⣿⠀⣿⠀⠀⠀⢠⠏⢀⡁⣼⠀⠀⢠⣿⠁⠀⠀⠈⡆⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⡿⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⢸⣸⣸⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠙⠛⠛⠻⠿⣿⣿⣝⡳⣿⣧⠀⠀⡿⡄⡧⡆⠀⠀⣸⣏⣛⡇⣿⠀⢀⣾⡏⠀⠀⠀⠀⢱⠀⢠⠃⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡏⠑⣆⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀ ⠀⠀⠀⡇⢻⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠉⠙⠚⠏⢧⠀⡇⢇⢱⢱⡀⠀⣇⠤⠒⣿⢻⢀⣎⣈⣠⣤⣤⣤⣄⣈⣇⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣸⠋⠳⣼⠀⢐⠇⠀⠀⠀ ⠳⣄⠀⢱⠈⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠉⠁⠁⠈⠙⠠⢥⣈⠀⠐⠚⠛⡿⠛⠛⠛⠛⠻⠛⠻⠗⠚⠻⡟⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⡏⠉⢚⡏⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⢠ ⣷⣈⠳⣌⡇⠀⠀⠀⢹⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠠⣄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⣸⠀⠀⡜⠀⠀⢸⠀⢀⡴⣿ ⣿⣿⣷⡈⢻⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⡇⠈⡆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠁⠀⠀⠀⢀⠇⢀⡼⠁⠀⠀⣤⢔⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣷⣶⣆⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢚⠓⠲⠇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⣠⠞⠀⠀⠀⠀⣿⣿⣿⠟⠁ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡄⠀⠘⡆⠀⠀⠀⣇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡏⠀⠀⠀⠀⡞⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣿⠟⠉⠀⠀ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⡀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⢹⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠃⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⠇⠀⠀⠀⢠⠇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣧⠀⢧⠀⠀⠀⢸⢳⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣀⣀⣴⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣼⠀⠀⠀⠀⡸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡸⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡆⢸⠀⠀⠀⠸⡆⠑⣄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⣿⢍⠉⠑⠒⠒⠒⠒⠒⠈⠉⢉⣁⣀⣾⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⠞⡏⠀⠀⠀⢀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⡇⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡜⡆⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⡇⠑⢄⡀⠀⠀⠀⠘⠲⠤⣀⣀⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣁⣉⡤⠼⠛⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⠔⠁⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡼⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣷⠁⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⡇⠀⠀⠙⢦⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠉⠁⠉⠉⠉⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⡴⠋⠀⠀⢀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡎⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⠇⠀⣧⡀⠀⠀⠀ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣇⠀⠀⠀⢀⠀⣇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠉⠢⣀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣀⡴⠚⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⢠⠃⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡜⠀⢀⡲⠙⠢⡀⠀ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡀⠀⠀⢸⠀⡇⠳⡄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠢⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣀⡤⠔⡻⠋⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡞⠀⠀⠀⢸⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢀⠃⠀⢸⡶⠀⠁⠹⢦ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⡇⠀⠀⠸⡄⣧⠀⠈⠢⡀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠲⢄⣀⣤⣤⠒⠊⠉⢀⡠⠞⠁⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⣸⠀⠀⢸⠀⣾⣦⣆⡈ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⠀⠀⠀⡇⣟⣣⠀⠀⠙⢆⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠈⠉⠓⠒⠋⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢰⠃⠀⠀⠀⡇⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⠇⠀⠀⣼⣸⣿⣿⣿⣿ ⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿⣇⠀⠀⢹⣿⣿⣧⡀⠀⠀⠑⢄⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⠀⢠⣿⠀⠀⠀⢀⠇⠀⠀⠀⠀⡜⠀⠀⠀⡇⣿⣿⣿⣿⣿

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that_crazy_bastard

Just wanna ask is this all virtual reality or real reincarnation cause I wann know it's all beautiful or just fake because if it's fake it's gonna hurt my heart

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_Tea_Lover_

Very good novel, my only complaints (40 chapters in) are that the novel will very often switch between first point of view and third, and, even after spending over 10 years in that world, he's still being confused that the things in the "game" he's in would never be put into a game in his original world, although perhaps this has something to do with his previous life and/or the character development the author has planned.

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DragonAmongMen6942

Pretty Good story if you ignore MCs intelligence in starting chapters. .

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TinyBookDragon

I was interested to read about the world the MC chose and the potential of eventually going to the others. The grammar is excellent, the characters are well done and the world seems like it will be interesting. However, the MC runs into so many 'major events' that it feels slightly unrealistic. And this is all just on the way to the main Adventurers Guild location to sign up. Each 'event' lasts so many chapters that I just start skimming or skipping some entirely out of boredom. This will be a story where I wait for a build-up of chapters so that I can skim 50 of them just to get past one fight/arc.

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Oswaldjosue

very good is this author Mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm mmmmmm

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Monke232

Re-review because last time my dog died so I was a bit harsh. Basically a love child between Mushoku Tensei and Cultivation Online, except the MC has a completely unique, but still realistic, personality. There’s really nothing to complain about unless you’re biased like me and don’t think wind is cool.

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Daoistqp

I dont know what the author has planned but it would be pretty cool if he tries to make another novel with the same concept of the world but a different mc that chooses another world. Recommended read btw

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Sagow
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Warning: Small spoiler ahead. Read until chapter 63. The MC is a kind-hearted idiot. He is a complete simp. A girl tried to kill but the MC refused to hurt her because she is a "girl". Then immediately took her out on a date because she was hungry, completely ignoring that she attempted to kill him for some money. I dropped this novel because personally, I hate these types of MC. But if you like these types of MC then this is a GOOD story. The writing quality is good, I didn't see any mistakes. The world is interesting with good characters that feel real and alive.

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crazy_wizard

My Mushoku Tensei chad enjoyers go forth and conquer, this one will definitely suit your tastes. It has a similar but different feel to it, and the world building is simply amazing.

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Scysir
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Everything about this that I've read has been wonderful. The whole story reminds me of mushoku tensei a lot, in a good way. The aging doesn't seemed too forced or too dragged out. The chapters are not short what so ever (at least from what I have reached) it will keep you reading for a while.

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Thesilverderp

Harem or no author? B------------------------------------------------------------------------->~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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ryanisbreathing

[note to self] I'm just not fond of the premise I guess, so can't commit myself to read it. I was looking to read something more MMO-like. But this novel, the game is a one-way ticket. As if uploading your consciousness into the computer/game.

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hydraspare

1. The writing quality is really good. The author makes almost no mistakes in the writing. Most of the time its only small typos and I barely saw any in the 60 chapters I read. The author also fixes them so all I can say is that the writing quality is good. 2. I don’t know about the writing consistency but it seems to be going well. 3. The story development is also good. Story is progressing at a great pace. Not too fast nor too slow. The twists are executed quite well and the story has a goal, I am clearly looking forward for more. 4. The character designs are quite unique and each of them have a unique personality. The MC and his family are quite a funny bunch. 5. For the world background, its still developing so I cannot say for sure but as of now we know the important information and some more, the world also seems to be quite thought of and we know of things that aren’t happening directly to the MC. In my opinion this story is a read well worth. Anywayy, now the system part of the story. As of chapter 55, the system only appeared once. I like the fact that it isn’t the focal point of the story because in most cases, the system ends up dictating every action of the MC which ends up making the story quite boring in my opinion. Finally, the introduction to the VRMMORPG world was a first and I believe that it was a breath pf fresh air compared to most other books lf this type. Tldr : Just read the book.

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darkgoddess1

If you read mushoku tensei you'll like this one. there's a lot twist and turns that differentiate from the work but the fundamentals are pretty much alike and the references are all there. Wich is good and I love it. keep it up. The grammar is good. The story takes a slow pace and the development takes its own time... Also there's a lot of possible ramifications each time I read a chapter and that only shows how well thought and written it was made. Congrats. Hope it doesn't follow too much from the original story because it'll be a bit boring though.

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DaoistKLskQX

does this have lemon scenes?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Korstar26

Not all that into writing reviews, but this is one of the few times I have felt the need to do so honestly. I am loving this novel quite a bit. I only have one request..... Do not abandon this anytime soon please. too many novels 8 have read and truly enjoyed just for them to stop updating out of the blue.

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Cain26
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Honest review The story so far is pretty decent it’s nothing extremely new but it’s not badly done either. I am interested in to seeing what is happening next and the only real downside that I see a little bit in the story so far is this a couple of typos or miss translation

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Arimas_left_nut

It’s been hard trying to find some quality work on this site. So far the book seems pretty good. I need more chapters before I can give it a full fledged review, but I can say it’s definitely worth giving it a read.

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Aegir12

writing quality is great, no complaints there and don't really see grammar mistakes, not any noticeable ones anyway updates are quick story is great, learning with Emilio is fun character design is good, a lot of descriptions are included in the story world is still building up but I like it so far

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Vmprknight

a very unique take on vr and at the same time transmigration. MC is as the title says a "degenerate" but honestly ive seen much more weird mcs than this, he's just a bit pervy I like the parents, its rare to actually have the parents of the mc play a part in the story, but its refreshing

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TheKabow

alright, starting off with the important stuff before the story itself: grammar and quality overall: pretty much perfect. i can speak for most of us when I say finding stories with good grammar on here is difficult, so its always greatly welcome to find one that does. for the story, it's definitely still in the early stages, but its got me curious for more

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WowistZ

Well-written and engrossing so far. It'd only be fair for me to redo this review later down the line when there's more content, but for now, I can safely say this is a certified banger.

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LeadKnight76

[img=update][img=update][img=update] need more, but thats saying a good thing ! anyway good start so far, has me hooked already this start does feel a little slow so i guess watch out for that if thats something that bugs you

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NakamuraGT

story: good so far, interesting premise characters: best part about it grammar/quality: great, nothing to complain about there updates: seems to be coming out daily

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