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After reading 32 chapters i can definitely say it's one of best fanfictions available in the webnovel at this point. Author definitely made a combination world with good background for the fic and its pretty interesting already. It also have an MC who has a better character unlike the edgelords or goodies in the webnovel. There is only negligible mistakes and updating stability is also good. Hope Author will complete the fanfiction and quality of the fic doesn't degraded over time.🙇🙇🙇👍👍🙏🙏
Recommended 4.6 . ... There are basically almost no errors in this..... neither are any grammatical ones.. . ~Mc is smart ~Willing to grind for power ~A.I chip & world merge is new element. ~fun, slice of life, romance and action packed story ~Characters ars almost to the point, which is good for immersion in story. ~Characters themselves have plot & are not one dimensional .. ~Author put in lot of work for power balance .. well done 👍 Review till chapter 36 & mc is still in his first world.....
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good novel good job need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more chapter's
Nice novel and it deserves 5 🌟 . ..........................................................................................................
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Five stars for more chapter please update faster I am loving this fanfic and i need more of it if you could upload daily it would be awesome.Anyway its not just for more chapter the fanfic deserves five stars with great story and excellent writing quality and devlopement
So yea First of all i had to drop the story. Because its just to frustrating. He has a gravity chamber, an AI for erverything (he even got, throught the AI, the best training plan even possible ) and is a Reincarnator Furthermore he is a Sayajin. Till now you would think noice and kinda unique idea with the crosover of Marvel Onepiece, Naruto and DB but then you read the first few chapter and get to know that he could even improve his DNA even better right? But the out of nowhere a 10year training time skip. But that isnt the problem the problem is how the f could one increase ones power lvl only by ~60k With all the above advatages ???? just the f And how are the only 5stars reviews i call bots. So year your decision And thanks for reading my frustration.
I gave five stars because I can also can you maybe have raven as his love interest so you can have a whole arc of him fighting her father. ------------------------
A really good piece of work so far.. I just hope the release frequency stays good... The author has seamlessly merged the worlds.. in a way we could've guessed.. but probably never did,,, Having a hard time waiting for future chapters..
I really enjoyed it so far the power scaling is pretty off in terms of power level but if you look past that it's a pretty fun ff, I hope you continue with it to the end.
Loving it! The storyline built in this amazing novel is just what readers need. You wont often get to read such a nicely detailed collab of shows anywhere. Highly recommend!!
this completely blew my mind and beyond my expectations, so well described with perfect flow of the plots and really looking forward to read more chapters and see how this goes😍🙂
very good so far, I'm hoping that he doesn't do villainous things and don't hurt our poor Zephyr. Seeing that the lived in the planet for such a long time maybe get friends and loved ones. But it's just me being sentimental with characters, seeing the mc manipulate Zephyr is sad for me.
Perfection on another level!! 15 chapters in....and an amalgamation world....its going almost perfect.... the story witha bit of DC and Marvel as background with different powers using a genetically enhanced body of an alien... will say again...Perfection on another level!!
Wonderful piece of work. Worldbuilding ✅ Clever MC ✅ Great Plot ✅ Spoiler! I agree with the author about balancing power levels. In DBZ, Piccolo/master Roshi destroying the moon is outrageous when compared to now, DBS, when most of Goku's enemies have Trillions of power levels. Any random blast, especially from Brolly, who doesn't have much control over his power output, should have the power to completely destroy the earth. And yet, during the battle between Goku and Brolly, it did not happen. Which for me, is saying something. I believe the destructive power of Dragonball universe is too much of a bug. The author's take to balance it here is a very good decision. Especially since it's not only the Dragonball universe. 8.5/10 overall.
After reading 32 chapters i can definitely say it's one of best fanfictions available in the webnovel at this point. Author definitely made a combination world with good background for the fic and its pretty interesting already. It also have an MC who has a better character unlike the edgelords or goodies in the webnovel. There is only negligible mistakes and updating stability is also good. Hope Author will complete the fanfiction and quality of the fic doesn't degraded over time.🙇🙇🙇👍👍🙏🙏
Recommended 4.6 . ... There are basically almost no errors in this..... neither are any grammatical ones.. . ~Mc is smart ~Willing to grind for power ~A.I chip & world merge is new element. ~fun, slice of life, romance and action packed story ~Characters ars almost to the point, which is good for immersion in story. ~Characters themselves have plot & are not one dimensional .. ~Author put in lot of work for power balance .. well done 👍 Review till chapter 36 & mc is still in his first world.....
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good novel good job need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more need more chapter's
Nice novel and it deserves 5 🌟 . ..........................................................................................................
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Five stars for more chapter please update faster I am loving this fanfic and i need more of it if you could upload daily it would be awesome.Anyway its not just for more chapter the fanfic deserves five stars with great story and excellent writing quality and devlopement
So yea First of all i had to drop the story. Because its just to frustrating. He has a gravity chamber, an AI for erverything (he even got, throught the AI, the best training plan even possible ) and is a Reincarnator Furthermore he is a Sayajin. Till now you would think noice and kinda unique idea with the crosover of Marvel Onepiece, Naruto and DB but then you read the first few chapter and get to know that he could even improve his DNA even better right? But the out of nowhere a 10year training time skip. But that isnt the problem the problem is how the f could one increase ones power lvl only by ~60k With all the above advatages ???? just the f And how are the only 5stars reviews i call bots. So year your decision And thanks for reading my frustration.
I gave five stars because I can also can you maybe have raven as his love interest so you can have a whole arc of him fighting her father. ------------------------
A really good piece of work so far.. I just hope the release frequency stays good... The author has seamlessly merged the worlds.. in a way we could've guessed.. but probably never did,,, Having a hard time waiting for future chapters..
I really enjoyed it so far the power scaling is pretty off in terms of power level but if you look past that it's a pretty fun ff, I hope you continue with it to the end.
Loving it! The storyline built in this amazing novel is just what readers need. You wont often get to read such a nicely detailed collab of shows anywhere. Highly recommend!!
this completely blew my mind and beyond my expectations, so well described with perfect flow of the plots and really looking forward to read more chapters and see how this goes😍🙂
very good so far, I'm hoping that he doesn't do villainous things and don't hurt our poor Zephyr. Seeing that the lived in the planet for such a long time maybe get friends and loved ones. But it's just me being sentimental with characters, seeing the mc manipulate Zephyr is sad for me.
Perfection on another level!! 15 chapters in....and an amalgamation world....its going almost perfect.... the story witha bit of DC and Marvel as background with different powers using a genetically enhanced body of an alien... will say again...Perfection on another level!!
Wonderful piece of work. Worldbuilding ✅ Clever MC ✅ Great Plot ✅ Spoiler! I agree with the author about balancing power levels. In DBZ, Piccolo/master Roshi destroying the moon is outrageous when compared to now, DBS, when most of Goku's enemies have Trillions of power levels. Any random blast, especially from Brolly, who doesn't have much control over his power output, should have the power to completely destroy the earth. And yet, during the battle between Goku and Brolly, it did not happen. Which for me, is saying something. I believe the destructive power of Dragonball universe is too much of a bug. The author's take to balance it here is a very good decision. Especially since it's not only the Dragonball universe. 8.5/10 overall.