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since i do not know no thing about miku, i will not comment on her. as touya world ark ,, well, it is good as of now. what will be next, then? i will try keeping track your 'vocaloid songs' if i liked it. my score .. 5.0
You already had my curiosity when you used the word 'wholesome' and then i saw from the chapter list that they went to smart phone so now you have my attention.
Hatsune Miku is the True Goddess no scam, no clickbait and specially authentic fr....... Yeah Hatsune Miku for life. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .......................... yes hatsune miku is really a true goddess ngl fr no cap...............
The concept is unique Hatsune Miku very good girl Story is interesting but I don't like the first world oh and behold my stand KILLER BINGUS!
▪︎ Writing Quality..............☆☆☆☆☆ - need more word count. if possible when referring to the fl can you pls shorten the name. rather calling her hatsune miku can you just call her miku. ▪︎ Story Development.......☆☆☆☆○ - a bit slow, need more interaction with the FL. thoe I would preferred if miku is the mc. Well i can't be choosy this is the 2nd ff that I found in webnovel that has miku in it. - fl needs more screen time (I don't know if screen time is the proper use in novels but whatever). truthfully miku is the main attraction in this ff(just saying) and giving her less screen time or any development is a bit boring . ▪︎ Character Design..........☆☆☆☆☆ - Miku is = to 5☆ ▪︎ Updating Stability.........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ World Background........☆☆☆○○ - I'm not a fan of the 1st two worlds. thoe I'm curious for the 3rd world. (I hope the 2nd world can still be changed).
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HOHOHOHO You successfully attracted this no harem devotee ......... .. . . . . . . . . . .. .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .
since i do not know no thing about miku, i will not comment on her. as touya world ark ,, well, it is good as of now. what will be next, then? i will try keeping track your 'vocaloid songs' if i liked it. my score .. 5.0
You already had my curiosity when you used the word 'wholesome' and then i saw from the chapter list that they went to smart phone so now you have my attention.
Hatsune Miku is the True Goddess no scam, no clickbait and specially authentic fr....... Yeah Hatsune Miku for life. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .......................... yes hatsune miku is really a true goddess ngl fr no cap...............
The concept is unique Hatsune Miku very good girl Story is interesting but I don't like the first world oh and behold my stand KILLER BINGUS!
▪︎ Writing Quality..............☆☆☆☆☆ - need more word count. if possible when referring to the fl can you pls shorten the name. rather calling her hatsune miku can you just call her miku. ▪︎ Story Development.......☆☆☆☆○ - a bit slow, need more interaction with the FL. thoe I would preferred if miku is the mc. Well i can't be choosy this is the 2nd ff that I found in webnovel that has miku in it. - fl needs more screen time (I don't know if screen time is the proper use in novels but whatever). truthfully miku is the main attraction in this ff(just saying) and giving her less screen time or any development is a bit boring . ▪︎ Character Design..........☆☆☆☆☆ - Miku is = to 5☆ ▪︎ Updating Stability.........☆☆☆☆☆ ▪︎ World Background........☆☆☆○○ - I'm not a fan of the 1st two worlds. thoe I'm curious for the 3rd world. (I hope the 2nd world can still be changed).
Reveal Spoiler HOHOHOHO You successfully attracted this no harem devotee ......... .. . . . . . . . . . .. .. . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .
5 Star ✨ for no harem .AND don't drop please . Author -san