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Loving it so far, while sometimes the plot seems a bit rushed it's easily overshadowed by the interesting events happening. Just wish that the updates are a bit more consistent. Overall would definitely recommend.
Esta historia es muy buena a mi parecer ya que leí muy pocas historias de este tipo en genshin y algunas son clichés, pero esta me tuvo enganchado todo el tiempo, la recomiendo mucho Pd: leeré la historia de nuevo cuando tenga 10 o 5 capítulos más de publicacion
love the story it's handled well but having no clue if it's been dropped or if it's commission only is annoying
Overall, It's a good story, I'm a little disappointed that the mc seems to have completely forgot about using artifacts to make himself stronger and using crystals to make his weapon stronger (literally one of the most IMPORTANT mechanics in genshin) and it's not like it isn't possible for him to use them seeing as he has used them before earlier on in the story.
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the reality about this fic and other works by the author. your stories are good, but if you expect you to start reading and one day you will finish one of your stories forget it, unless you commission all the chapters. author has more than 10 stories in progress and none have concluded, all are on hiatus no commission no stories, I even think it's right for him to charge for his works but at least the author should write original works not fanfic, in the end he charges commission from his character in the stories of others, and not the story itself.
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sounds promising but just got to ask is the hunter a bloodborne hunter or HxH hunter?
I have loved the story thus far, but I am wondering if you'll be continuing this story anymore. I also like how you decided not to follow the story and made it your own. Keep up the great work.
can someone tell me if its going to be full of cannon narration like in the early chapters or story will divulge not just one more mc to add few line
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This story is well written the pacing is really good and nothing in the story feels forced I would really like it if the kurama story(raiden adopted son) got continued as I think it pretty good thank you
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Great all-around just needs consistent updates ............................................................................................................
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Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................
great story, love it, but while i was reading the latest chapter, part of it looks cut off, it says this is the end of part one, please download web novel app to continue, this has never happened to me before, do you know why its happening now and how to fix it?
Overall good setting and story, nice characters and development. The way the main character is integrated into the story fells natural and characters fell right. Hope it's not dropped
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First-It is a requirement this be read, Second- Do all that you can to read this, Third- Have I said this should be read?Fourth- It should be read so go now Fifth- Seriously it's a Genshin fanfic just have a go at it and if you don't like it just keep rereading it until you do... Go Completely forgot to write a review... or it had been deleted but I am here now. So let's get this to 10 reviews and go from there
I love this so far and it’s not a harem from what I can see in the tags. I hope it stays as just Lumine.
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This story is automatically a 5 stars with who the author is. Knowing who the author is ill enjoy this like their other work. So far there have been little to no grammar mistakes. Plot is paced great and doesnt seem rushed. Only problem i have with it is there is not enough chapters for me to read. Story is really great so far would reccomend everyone read this especially if u enjoy genshin, or are just looking for something to read. Hopefully this story doesnt stop or get dropped like other genshin fics.
An amazing story, thus far the best Genshin fanfic I have read, well written (leaving aside Some spelling errors that I find in almost all your fics), good plot and nice MC. .. soo please go on!!! I read it all in like two days and still feel that I need moore
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Loving it so far, while sometimes the plot seems a bit rushed it's easily overshadowed by the interesting events happening. Just wish that the updates are a bit more consistent. Overall would definitely recommend.
Esta historia es muy buena a mi parecer ya que leí muy pocas historias de este tipo en genshin y algunas son clichés, pero esta me tuvo enganchado todo el tiempo, la recomiendo mucho Pd: leeré la historia de nuevo cuando tenga 10 o 5 capítulos más de publicacion
love the story it's handled well but having no clue if it's been dropped or if it's commission only is annoying
Overall, It's a good story, I'm a little disappointed that the mc seems to have completely forgot about using artifacts to make himself stronger and using crystals to make his weapon stronger (literally one of the most IMPORTANT mechanics in genshin) and it's not like it isn't possible for him to use them seeing as he has used them before earlier on in the story.
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the reality about this fic and other works by the author. your stories are good, but if you expect you to start reading and one day you will finish one of your stories forget it, unless you commission all the chapters. author has more than 10 stories in progress and none have concluded, all are on hiatus no commission no stories, I even think it's right for him to charge for his works but at least the author should write original works not fanfic, in the end he charges commission from his character in the stories of others, and not the story itself.
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I have loved the story thus far, but I am wondering if you'll be continuing this story anymore. I also like how you decided not to follow the story and made it your own. Keep up the great work.
can someone tell me if its going to be full of cannon narration like in the early chapters or story will divulge not just one more mc to add few line
Great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍 great fanfiction don't give up on it 👍
This story is well written the pacing is really good and nothing in the story feels forced I would really like it if the kurama story(raiden adopted son) got continued as I think it pretty good thank you
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Can you post this on scribblehub, now computer users can't read any fanfiction on webnovel it seems.........................................
great story, love it, but while i was reading the latest chapter, part of it looks cut off, it says this is the end of part one, please download web novel app to continue, this has never happened to me before, do you know why its happening now and how to fix it?
Overall good setting and story, nice characters and development. The way the main character is integrated into the story fells natural and characters fell right. Hope it's not dropped
Cool😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁
Loving this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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First-It is a requirement this be read, Second- Do all that you can to read this, Third- Have I said this should be read?Fourth- It should be read so go now Fifth- Seriously it's a Genshin fanfic just have a go at it and if you don't like it just keep rereading it until you do... Go Completely forgot to write a review... or it had been deleted but I am here now. So let's get this to 10 reviews and go from there
I love this so far and it’s not a harem from what I can see in the tags. I hope it stays as just Lumine.
Reveal Spoiler This story is automatically a 5 stars with who the author is. Knowing who the author is ill enjoy this like their other work. So far there have been little to no grammar mistakes. Plot is paced great and doesnt seem rushed. Only problem i have with it is there is not enough chapters for me to read. Story is really great so far would reccomend everyone read this especially if u enjoy genshin, or are just looking for something to read. Hopefully this story doesnt stop or get dropped like other genshin fics.
An amazing story, thus far the best Genshin fanfic I have read, well written (leaving aside Some spelling errors that I find in almost all your fics), good plot and nice MC. .. soo please go on!!! I read it all in like two days and still feel that I need moore