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Incredible how you were able to add as much detail to each scene as you did. Usually, it seems very pretentious "Literature class" type when a scene is over-explained but your explanations added a lot without anything seeming unnecessary. Great Job!
Novel has potential, but author struggles with grammar, pacing and proper usage of tenses at the time of writing. Paragraphs are very stuck together, many run on sentences or words inserted without a clear flow into them. Protagonist's mental thoughts and emotions at times come off as scattered and not as easy to follow, or the wrong word is being used to describe them. Can be a 5/5 if formatting + wording and tenses are cleaned up, along with more careful touches upon the protagonist and characters themselves.
Incredible how you were able to add as much detail to each scene as you did. Usually, it seems very pretentious "Literature class" type when a scene is over-explained but your explanations added a lot without anything seeming unnecessary. Great Job!
Novel has potential, but author struggles with grammar, pacing and proper usage of tenses at the time of writing. Paragraphs are very stuck together, many run on sentences or words inserted without a clear flow into them. Protagonist's mental thoughts and emotions at times come off as scattered and not as easy to follow, or the wrong word is being used to describe them. Can be a 5/5 if formatting + wording and tenses are cleaned up, along with more careful touches upon the protagonist and characters themselves.