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Write a reviewI just started with the story and will later update the Review so take everything with a grain of Salt. The writing as a whole is okay it just has many cases where you use 2 or 3 adjectives for a single word or where the tenses of the words switch midsentence and get confused. I would guess that it gets fixed somewhere within the novel, but the first 100 Chapters will probably need a rework or Edit to fix it. A simple solution would be the usage of a program to just quickly edit the Text. Something like Grammarly would do. I don't know if that is also the reason why sometimes the Characters just sound and feel like they are just teens even though its stated that they are Adults and sometimes even in their forties. That would be the reason for 3/5 for Writing Quality. The Story as a whole is quite good and the Character and World Design so far was nice as well. If the Quality of the writing improves I'm fairly certain that this novel will more or less force you to binge read it which I really like and enjoy. So Overall a really nice Novel that could go well with a little editing
los personajes y el mundo en general están muy bien construidos , espero que continúe con la historia hasta el final.
this is the kind of novel I've been searching for. I love this author. ALL HAIL GOD KING PANCAKES WITCH. GREATEST AUTHOR OF ALL TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So I do really enjoy the story, its good and its fun to read and I plan to read all of it but there is a big con that people should know before going in. Its inconsistent, things in the story change a lot, many things become not canon anymore or changed, it could really use a big edit to fix it. So enjoy but don't take anything too seriously like the backstory or how things work in the game.
BEST CONCEPT I EVER KNEW! The customization of the world and mc is just so lovely. This gives me the satisfaction I always get from typical LN but it also gives me a sense of refreshment with the uniqueness of the mc. I recently discovered her other works which are super good(tho this is still my fave). Pancakes Witch is now my favorite writer T-T
Quite rare for me to see female protagonists here and that’s one of the reasons that I like this story. Can someone recommend novels like this with female mc please? Aside from the author ’s stories because I already read those🥺🥺
I love the storyline, growth, and system designs. if you like stories with good growth mechanics, this one ticks a lot of the boxes and love to read. I only have two problems: Main item is the female characters all feel the same. Yea they have their own quirks, but when you get to their ‘personal’ moments, they become the same as all the other girls. Second item is the timeline. the book makes it clear that weeks, maybe a month has passed, but suddenly mentions how it is months and months down the road. There was no time skip, it just suddenly all the things that took weeks changed to months. I still love the story, but those were my quips
\•~•~•~•~•~•~•/ Nice, not kidding any story from Pancakes is masterpieces tbh. ✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿
Speaking of agricultural tools, it is believed that the women used the nunchakus or sosetsukon, to throw them at the trees and detach the ripe fruits. They were also used by the mayal peasants to hit the rice bushes and separate the grain from the chaff.
Best Videogame based novel read in a while. The balance between the real world and in-game world is amazing 😍.
I'm writing this second review after catching up to the latest chapter of 404. And my opinion on this series has improved! The slice of life elements are less overdone now and actually feel like they contribute to the character development rather than just being there for the sake of being cute or filler. I also appreciate that the main character and most of the side characters are pure good as a opposed to the chaotic good of most other Pancakeswitch protagonists. This also means that unlike most of them, the evolutions of the main characters of this novel are far more positive and good for the world and less demon lord/cosmic horror/eldritch abomination type evolutions and skills. There's nothing wrong oth that, we've just seen it done a lot in Pancakeswitch novels. It's a nice and welcome change of pace in my opinion. Also, despite the fact that this is one of those novels where the game eventually merges with reality, it doesn't go the typical route you've seen many times before. It's a gradual process and there's a lot of mystery as to why it is happening at all. Definitely check this one out!
I'm writing this review as of chapter 93. As a big fan of PancakesWitch, having read most of her novels, I was naturally excited to read this one as well. And if you're like me and have read her other novels like Epic of Caterpillar, Demon Queen Rebirth, Vampire Overlord System, and so on, the comparatively much slower pace that this novel goes at may turn you off a bit. This series has a mix of action and slice of life, but this series has divides it at roughly 60/40 for each while something like Epic of Caterpillar divides it at roughly 90/10 give or take. And the slice of life isn't bad by itself, but it has an overeliance on cooking. I found myself skimming through these sections after a while. On the positive side, the action and system is as good as any other series! It has a good trait where it only introduces nee abilities as needed so that the audience can understand what each character has and how each ability interacts with each other ability. Only after that do they level up the skills or get new ones. The system does seem a bit more restrained as compared to others done before. Maybe those limits can be broken later on through the story or something. That could be interesting. Also, there should probably be a title section in the status that shows which title is currently equipped for better understanding. Overall, I'd say I mostly enjoy it. It is slower paced, so that might be a dealbreaker for some, but I'm sticking with it for now, and I think you should give it a chance as well.
not for fans of action novels,action fight in this novel in my opinion 3.5,the existence of the plot armor really stands out,my brain can't help but question some logic
I really like the story. Like how story switch between the game and real life. It's like 2 different stories in one novel. But I don't really like Mark, something about this matchup that doesn't feel right. I think it's better he remains as a friend of Elayne, he ruins the story for me. Personally, without him, this would be a great novel. I know he's nice but he annoys me so much..
i really liked the theme its just that i cant relate mark being romance candidate or am i like a father that dont want his daughter get married hahahahah but anyways the way i read is that i imagine my self being the mc and my dao heart is only for female if the fmc have male partner ill imagine myself bieng the ml but i cant relate to mark hhha maybe this heavenly test to my dao heart ill persevere i will read this just for the mother and daughter duo!!!!!!!!
It's very good, lots of good storyline, and it has a very unique story starting point. Honestly, I fell like a story where an NPC gets a guide would be a good one.
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It is a very enticing book, not something you usually see. Female lead and a mom! There should have been more free chapters and more development in the outside world.
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a really good book and this time with a change, not a high school student as always seen in isekai novrls
I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion. I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling. I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out. The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel. The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line. Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest. Give the novel a try!
I just started with the story and will later update the Review so take everything with a grain of Salt. The writing as a whole is okay it just has many cases where you use 2 or 3 adjectives for a single word or where the tenses of the words switch midsentence and get confused. I would guess that it gets fixed somewhere within the novel, but the first 100 Chapters will probably need a rework or Edit to fix it. A simple solution would be the usage of a program to just quickly edit the Text. Something like Grammarly would do. I don't know if that is also the reason why sometimes the Characters just sound and feel like they are just teens even though its stated that they are Adults and sometimes even in their forties. That would be the reason for 3/5 for Writing Quality. The Story as a whole is quite good and the Character and World Design so far was nice as well. If the Quality of the writing improves I'm fairly certain that this novel will more or less force you to binge read it which I really like and enjoy. So Overall a really nice Novel that could go well with a little editing
los personajes y el mundo en general están muy bien construidos , espero que continúe con la historia hasta el final.
this is the kind of novel I've been searching for. I love this author. ALL HAIL GOD KING PANCAKES WITCH. GREATEST AUTHOR OF ALL TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
So I do really enjoy the story, its good and its fun to read and I plan to read all of it but there is a big con that people should know before going in. Its inconsistent, things in the story change a lot, many things become not canon anymore or changed, it could really use a big edit to fix it. So enjoy but don't take anything too seriously like the backstory or how things work in the game.
BEST CONCEPT I EVER KNEW! The customization of the world and mc is just so lovely. This gives me the satisfaction I always get from typical LN but it also gives me a sense of refreshment with the uniqueness of the mc. I recently discovered her other works which are super good(tho this is still my fave). Pancakes Witch is now my favorite writer T-T
Quite rare for me to see female protagonists here and that’s one of the reasons that I like this story. Can someone recommend novels like this with female mc please? Aside from the author ’s stories because I already read those🥺🥺
I love the storyline, growth, and system designs. if you like stories with good growth mechanics, this one ticks a lot of the boxes and love to read. I only have two problems: Main item is the female characters all feel the same. Yea they have their own quirks, but when you get to their ‘personal’ moments, they become the same as all the other girls. Second item is the timeline. the book makes it clear that weeks, maybe a month has passed, but suddenly mentions how it is months and months down the road. There was no time skip, it just suddenly all the things that took weeks changed to months. I still love the story, but those were my quips
\•~•~•~•~•~•~•/ Nice, not kidding any story from Pancakes is masterpieces tbh. ✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿✿
Speaking of agricultural tools, it is believed that the women used the nunchakus or sosetsukon, to throw them at the trees and detach the ripe fruits. They were also used by the mayal peasants to hit the rice bushes and separate the grain from the chaff.
Best Videogame based novel read in a while. The balance between the real world and in-game world is amazing 😍.
I'm writing this second review after catching up to the latest chapter of 404. And my opinion on this series has improved! The slice of life elements are less overdone now and actually feel like they contribute to the character development rather than just being there for the sake of being cute or filler. I also appreciate that the main character and most of the side characters are pure good as a opposed to the chaotic good of most other Pancakeswitch protagonists. This also means that unlike most of them, the evolutions of the main characters of this novel are far more positive and good for the world and less demon lord/cosmic horror/eldritch abomination type evolutions and skills. There's nothing wrong oth that, we've just seen it done a lot in Pancakeswitch novels. It's a nice and welcome change of pace in my opinion. Also, despite the fact that this is one of those novels where the game eventually merges with reality, it doesn't go the typical route you've seen many times before. It's a gradual process and there's a lot of mystery as to why it is happening at all. Definitely check this one out!
I'm writing this review as of chapter 93. As a big fan of PancakesWitch, having read most of her novels, I was naturally excited to read this one as well. And if you're like me and have read her other novels like Epic of Caterpillar, Demon Queen Rebirth, Vampire Overlord System, and so on, the comparatively much slower pace that this novel goes at may turn you off a bit. This series has a mix of action and slice of life, but this series has divides it at roughly 60/40 for each while something like Epic of Caterpillar divides it at roughly 90/10 give or take. And the slice of life isn't bad by itself, but it has an overeliance on cooking. I found myself skimming through these sections after a while. On the positive side, the action and system is as good as any other series! It has a good trait where it only introduces nee abilities as needed so that the audience can understand what each character has and how each ability interacts with each other ability. Only after that do they level up the skills or get new ones. The system does seem a bit more restrained as compared to others done before. Maybe those limits can be broken later on through the story or something. That could be interesting. Also, there should probably be a title section in the status that shows which title is currently equipped for better understanding. Overall, I'd say I mostly enjoy it. It is slower paced, so that might be a dealbreaker for some, but I'm sticking with it for now, and I think you should give it a chance as well.
not for fans of action novels,action fight in this novel in my opinion 3.5,the existence of the plot armor really stands out,my brain can't help but question some logic
I really like the story. Like how story switch between the game and real life. It's like 2 different stories in one novel. But I don't really like Mark, something about this matchup that doesn't feel right. I think it's better he remains as a friend of Elayne, he ruins the story for me. Personally, without him, this would be a great novel. I know he's nice but he annoys me so much..
i really liked the theme its just that i cant relate mark being romance candidate or am i like a father that dont want his daughter get married hahahahah but anyways the way i read is that i imagine my self being the mc and my dao heart is only for female if the fmc have male partner ill imagine myself bieng the ml but i cant relate to mark hhha maybe this heavenly test to my dao heart ill persevere i will read this just for the mother and daughter duo!!!!!!!!
It's very good, lots of good storyline, and it has a very unique story starting point. Honestly, I fell like a story where an NPC gets a guide would be a good one.
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It is a very enticing book, not something you usually see. Female lead and a mom! There should have been more free chapters and more development in the outside world.
I am the EXP of my sword... EXP is my blood... and EXP is my body... I have created over 1000 useless reviews... Unknown to death, nor know to live... I have withstood the pain of creating many more useless reviews... Yet, those hands will never write anything useful... And so I pray... UNLIMITED EXP WORKS
a really good book and this time with a change, not a high school student as always seen in isekai novrls
I’ll start my review of this novel by saying outright that Pancakes is my favorite author on webnovel, and I throughly enjoy their novels, so there may be some inherent bias in my review. And everything written below is personal opinion. I have currently read up to chapter 132, and really enjoy this novel as it differs from Pancakes other works like Epic of Caterpillar, DQR, and World Traveling. I really enjoy the balance of slice of life elements that are vital to the understanding of the MC Elayne and the other supporting characters like her daughter Elena, friend Rika and others. Mixed in with the action elements that occur through the VRMMO that is the key element of this story. The main reason that our MC started to play is quite admirable as she wishes to get closer to her daughter after passing of her husband 5 years ago. None of the characters so far feel one dimensional or flat and each adds a unique aspect to the world building and overall story. While some readers may question certain relations between characters I found overall that the characters are very well thought out. The world building in this novel has been developing at a steady pace throughout, both in elements of the “real world” and BNLO VRMMO world. Pancakes has an extremely firm grasp on mythological and fantasy elements as seen throughout their writing and other novels. The hinted possible fusion of the “game” and “reality” hints to more elements to be revealed about the world and universe at large that Pancakes has constructed in their other novels. While having read the other novels provides more insight into these foreshadowing elements it is not require at all in order to understand and enjoy this novel. The pacing of this story may seem slow to those that enjoy quick paced and action packed stories. The slower pace of this novel really fits the characters and the world in my opinion. As I mentioned earlier the slice of life elements and action come together to form in my opinion a cohesive plot line. Pancakes has great update stability, and in my time as a reader of theirs I cannot remember a time that they missed an update ever. In terms of writing quality grammatical errors are few and quite rare, however my own grammatical knowledge isn’t the greatest. Give the novel a try!