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the mc is the most apparent problem here, the title is misleading since he's very obviously the sin of envy not gluttony. the entire first 3 chapters are spent practically worshipping the sin of pride and we get like one line about what the sin of gluttony is supposed to be. either the author wanted to write about the pride guy or the author just wants to fill a word count so we spend page after page after page on nothingness while he fills it out. if you can handle pages and pages of empty text just to get a few lines about the wrong character in the story then you'll probably love this
This is one of the best novels on this platform. I can say that only after reading 30 chapters. But I'm unhappy with the author as he didn't upload a single chapter for4 months. Common man. Just takes 30 to 40 min to write a thousand words. Go on, at least write some chapters and I will definitely repost my review with 5star
Honestly, this novel has been absolutely amazing, even when I thought somethings were abrupt and just seemed disingenuous, the author managed to feel in the presumed holes in the story... don't jump to conclusion guy, I almost did the same myself... all you would do is simply miss a good story
my reaction: ugh........................ heh............. uhh................................................................................. huh? hmm. -overall this is one of those trash novel. Read it I recommend it.
It could have been a good novel, but it is average for me right now. My biggest problem with novel is it's abrupt shift in power levels and tonality. When mc was on first two floors, he was going through his revenge of previous life, which was okay. after that, abrupt shift in power level comes, where mc has to fight against people much stronger, and still he survives somehow. at that time, mc was also behaving a bit stupidly, underestimating the enemies, which i disliked, and super powerful enemies also died in poor ways. after about 150 chaps, mc recovers his lost memories, and another abrupt shift comes in power levels. But now, some mysteries are answered, and i started liking the novel a bit after 150 chaps. Still waiting for other mysteries to be answered.
really like the book ! I'm on chapter 120 an wondering when the romance tag on the book comes into play cuz there hasn't been any yet
Overall if you looking for the equivalent to fast food, this is fine. There is lots of power fantasy, future knowledge, super strong follower and no mishaps. 21 chapters in, the writing quality pretty decent but marked low by the constant loopholes/plot armor. The MC goes from being a frail/dumb/cowardly character to a untouchable god(due to constant plot armor/who is lead by a slavelike/fanboy demon he got from his gambling system(even though gluttony has nothing to do with gambling/minions).
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! cedit- owner you that read rong
Alright Here I am After reading 189 chapters,I could still read more but yeah I've come to a decision that this is the most optimal state to comment about this novel as it has come to a great change Writing quality:- 5 🌟 the writing quality is pretty good,I can actually feel immersion and realism while reading the novel... The author's ways of describing stuff is really unique and interesting as well. Story Development:- 4🌟 Now this is one of the most shocking thing for me as the story's writing,Tone and almost everything changed drastically... and yeah the change was absolutely awesome,But yeah the reason I gave it four star is because it feels inconsistent to me and I feel the pace of the story should be properly adjusted because other than it's pretty good Character design:- 5 🌟 The character's personality is explained properly and there are times where we can relate to them and sometimes I agree and predict the decisions they make,So yeah it pretty good. The characters are interesting to say the least Updating stability:- Uhh I'm not sure about it since I binge read the whole so yeah let's not talk about this one World background:- 4 🌟 although I understand that too much world background sometimes makes the story boring but in this case It would be better if I could get some details out of the places he visits,Like when he visits different places In a particular floor you only mention it as it's a village,Or there is a place with a waterfall and the triad territory has lots of trees other than that it's pretty good Now my personal opinion,It's a pretty good novel with an interesting story with a bunch of characters and it's fun read
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its alright but bro is OBSESSED with the King of Pride(KOP). like he bases his entire new life, actions and persona around the KOP making sure that he is "above" in anything he does so much that its past cringe ind just pitiful. he hates everyone for not standing up for him when he was dying when he's literally a water boy for the KOP and has nothing besides that. he's nieve and has no talent(basically a bottomfeeder) and even when he gets the system he still didnt mentally change other than edgelord emo boy embrasing the darkness since i was in it for 20some days. overall 2/5 stars
The feeling that the story elicits is bleakness. I think this was the intent, the characters that we meet at least in the first 70ish chapters don’t have any redeeming qualities. The setting is barely touched, a third of the chapters read and I can’t make myself care about anything. The tower trope isn’t great, and again 70ish chapters in, this ain’t good example of the trope.
wow never in my life I couldn't read further from novel a level of stupid in than chapter 27 and having the though of touching grass and praying to God even I'm an atheist
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Frankly, this novel is not for me. The protagonist is brash and idiotic, and is far too insecure for my liking. The writing is also a little hard for me to bear, it's similar to the emphatic showmanship and feigned nonchalance you come to expect from Korean novels. Either way, this writing while suitable for personable children, isn't something I can enjoy.
Not too good. I dont like mc, he is not smart and his decisions sometimes make me cringe. Comedy aspect is lacking. I didnt connect to the characeters
here and I give review better compare to 1 star and this is the real review. this story is bad after reading into 1st chapter. the one thing I hate about mc is her personality. even though I read at 1wt chapter I know where the story will went well. Just read at first chapter. And the world background is quite bad because the author did Chinese novel and Korean novel a cultivation world with technology and a tower! it's exactly what you think so yeah ..
I think the MC is an idiot of some kind. Don't judge first read it. I don't know about later but it feels like the MC is a 12 to 13-year-old kid. Too much extra talking, too much drama, No hard work is done here. He has only suffered in the first chapter, there was no mention of him trying to learn anything. He is just lucky for no reason. He is still a kid after suffering, as it is said Maturity comes with suffering too. He was too hasty in his decision-making. I don't get it how can a regressor be an idiot? There is no information on Floor 0 or where the commoners are staying is it Earth or is it that earth is destroyed? Too little information before the boss fight! Thanks for reading the review, I hope you think about it. Have a good day 😄.
This story is great good grammar and the author uploads frequently the only thing that sucks is that I have to pay to read more I’ m broke so sucks to be me
Catch up to chapter 103 as of this review. This hasn’t gotten a lot of attention but it has massive potential. The story setting is TOG tower climb, but it’s a good twist with a lot of mystery. Highly recommend giving it a shot
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BRoo author this is some good shii but wryyyyyy it was free 2 days ago now i have to pay to read the rest of the chapters bro wryyy im broke rn🤧
This novel has a lot of potential and I hope it will not be dropped. The book also has a unique tower + seven sins team with there still being many things to add about the world and Mysteries to be uncovered. It's truly packed with many possibilities.
First of all, I'm not a fan of harem so I'm gonna dropped this when women become stupid after falling in love in the MC and I hate the cliche of hero saves the beauty troupe!!!,and I hope it's not gonna like that cause you know many great novels and especially the novel I like to read get ruined because of it. yeah, I kinda have a prejudice about harem novels, so I'm hoping that it's not gonna be like that because it has the potential to be a great novel for me, and it's pretty unique cause I found it hard to come across a novel with tower setting. feel free to recommend to me a novel with the tower setting! for now, I'm enjoying reading this while skipping some parts where women are mentioned.
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This is an amazing book. Word count below, don't read it. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you (Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
So far, and 80 chapters are not that much, this novel is one of the best on webnovel. Decent to good grammar, a nice world building, good story telling, character progression, and a lot happening but not too much. Nice pace, too. A hidden gem I would say :)
the mc is the most apparent problem here, the title is misleading since he's very obviously the sin of envy not gluttony. the entire first 3 chapters are spent practically worshipping the sin of pride and we get like one line about what the sin of gluttony is supposed to be. either the author wanted to write about the pride guy or the author just wants to fill a word count so we spend page after page after page on nothingness while he fills it out. if you can handle pages and pages of empty text just to get a few lines about the wrong character in the story then you'll probably love this
This is one of the best novels on this platform. I can say that only after reading 30 chapters. But I'm unhappy with the author as he didn't upload a single chapter for4 months. Common man. Just takes 30 to 40 min to write a thousand words. Go on, at least write some chapters and I will definitely repost my review with 5star
Honestly, this novel has been absolutely amazing, even when I thought somethings were abrupt and just seemed disingenuous, the author managed to feel in the presumed holes in the story... don't jump to conclusion guy, I almost did the same myself... all you would do is simply miss a good story
my reaction: ugh........................ heh............. uhh................................................................................. huh? hmm. -overall this is one of those trash novel. Read it I recommend it.
It could have been a good novel, but it is average for me right now. My biggest problem with novel is it's abrupt shift in power levels and tonality. When mc was on first two floors, he was going through his revenge of previous life, which was okay. after that, abrupt shift in power level comes, where mc has to fight against people much stronger, and still he survives somehow. at that time, mc was also behaving a bit stupidly, underestimating the enemies, which i disliked, and super powerful enemies also died in poor ways. after about 150 chaps, mc recovers his lost memories, and another abrupt shift comes in power levels. But now, some mysteries are answered, and i started liking the novel a bit after 150 chaps. Still waiting for other mysteries to be answered.
really like the book ! I'm on chapter 120 an wondering when the romance tag on the book comes into play cuz there hasn't been any yet
Overall if you looking for the equivalent to fast food, this is fine. There is lots of power fantasy, future knowledge, super strong follower and no mishaps. 21 chapters in, the writing quality pretty decent but marked low by the constant loopholes/plot armor. The MC goes from being a frail/dumb/cowardly character to a untouchable god(due to constant plot armor/who is lead by a slavelike/fanboy demon he got from his gambling system(even though gluttony has nothing to do with gambling/minions).
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! cedit- owner you that read rong
Alright Here I am After reading 189 chapters,I could still read more but yeah I've come to a decision that this is the most optimal state to comment about this novel as it has come to a great change Writing quality:- 5 🌟 the writing quality is pretty good,I can actually feel immersion and realism while reading the novel... The author's ways of describing stuff is really unique and interesting as well. Story Development:- 4🌟 Now this is one of the most shocking thing for me as the story's writing,Tone and almost everything changed drastically... and yeah the change was absolutely awesome,But yeah the reason I gave it four star is because it feels inconsistent to me and I feel the pace of the story should be properly adjusted because other than it's pretty good Character design:- 5 🌟 The character's personality is explained properly and there are times where we can relate to them and sometimes I agree and predict the decisions they make,So yeah it pretty good. The characters are interesting to say the least Updating stability:- Uhh I'm not sure about it since I binge read the whole so yeah let's not talk about this one World background:- 4 🌟 although I understand that too much world background sometimes makes the story boring but in this case It would be better if I could get some details out of the places he visits,Like when he visits different places In a particular floor you only mention it as it's a village,Or there is a place with a waterfall and the triad territory has lots of trees other than that it's pretty good Now my personal opinion,It's a pretty good novel with an interesting story with a bunch of characters and it's fun read
booba in story, booba supreme, this best story now,good coveerfnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnfffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffffff
its alright but bro is OBSESSED with the King of Pride(KOP). like he bases his entire new life, actions and persona around the KOP making sure that he is "above" in anything he does so much that its past cringe ind just pitiful. he hates everyone for not standing up for him when he was dying when he's literally a water boy for the KOP and has nothing besides that. he's nieve and has no talent(basically a bottomfeeder) and even when he gets the system he still didnt mentally change other than edgelord emo boy embrasing the darkness since i was in it for 20some days. overall 2/5 stars
The feeling that the story elicits is bleakness. I think this was the intent, the characters that we meet at least in the first 70ish chapters don’t have any redeeming qualities. The setting is barely touched, a third of the chapters read and I can’t make myself care about anything. The tower trope isn’t great, and again 70ish chapters in, this ain’t good example of the trope.
wow never in my life I couldn't read further from novel a level of stupid in than chapter 27 and having the though of touching grass and praying to God even I'm an atheist
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Frankly, this novel is not for me. The protagonist is brash and idiotic, and is far too insecure for my liking. The writing is also a little hard for me to bear, it's similar to the emphatic showmanship and feigned nonchalance you come to expect from Korean novels. Either way, this writing while suitable for personable children, isn't something I can enjoy.
Not too good. I dont like mc, he is not smart and his decisions sometimes make me cringe. Comedy aspect is lacking. I didnt connect to the characeters
here and I give review better compare to 1 star and this is the real review. this story is bad after reading into 1st chapter. the one thing I hate about mc is her personality. even though I read at 1wt chapter I know where the story will went well. Just read at first chapter. And the world background is quite bad because the author did Chinese novel and Korean novel a cultivation world with technology and a tower! it's exactly what you think so yeah ..
I think the MC is an idiot of some kind. Don't judge first read it. I don't know about later but it feels like the MC is a 12 to 13-year-old kid. Too much extra talking, too much drama, No hard work is done here. He has only suffered in the first chapter, there was no mention of him trying to learn anything. He is just lucky for no reason. He is still a kid after suffering, as it is said Maturity comes with suffering too. He was too hasty in his decision-making. I don't get it how can a regressor be an idiot? There is no information on Floor 0 or where the commoners are staying is it Earth or is it that earth is destroyed? Too little information before the boss fight! Thanks for reading the review, I hope you think about it. Have a good day 😄.
This story is great good grammar and the author uploads frequently the only thing that sucks is that I have to pay to read more I’ m broke so sucks to be me
Catch up to chapter 103 as of this review. This hasn’t gotten a lot of attention but it has massive potential. The story setting is TOG tower climb, but it’s a good twist with a lot of mystery. Highly recommend giving it a shot
another reader, looks good, congratulations, brasil🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️🇧🇷✌️
BRoo author this is some good shii but wryyyyyy it was free 2 days ago now i have to pay to read the rest of the chapters bro wryyy im broke rn🤧
This novel has a lot of potential and I hope it will not be dropped. The book also has a unique tower + seven sins team with there still being many things to add about the world and Mysteries to be uncovered. It's truly packed with many possibilities.
First of all, I'm not a fan of harem so I'm gonna dropped this when women become stupid after falling in love in the MC and I hate the cliche of hero saves the beauty troupe!!!,and I hope it's not gonna like that cause you know many great novels and especially the novel I like to read get ruined because of it. yeah, I kinda have a prejudice about harem novels, so I'm hoping that it's not gonna be like that because it has the potential to be a great novel for me, and it's pretty unique cause I found it hard to come across a novel with tower setting. feel free to recommend to me a novel with the tower setting! for now, I'm enjoying reading this while skipping some parts where women are mentioned.
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This is an amazing book. Word count below, don't read it. We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you (Ooh, give you up) (Ooh, give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching, but You're too shy to say it Inside, we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you
So far, and 80 chapters are not that much, this novel is one of the best on webnovel. Decent to good grammar, a nice world building, good story telling, character progression, and a lot happening but not too much. Nice pace, too. A hidden gem I would say :)