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Interesting. It’s a nice take on humanity, very philosophical not to mention humanity as a whole being the protagonist. That makes it all the more interesting. A must read.
The writing's got room for improvement (as others here may have noticed), but as of this review's posting, whatever flaws were present don't detract from the content itself too much. Additionally, it may be best to limit allusions to existing works in pop culture to a minimum. I particularly recommend looking up comma splices, run-on sentences and sentence fragments on Google since these are the common mistakes I came across in your work. PS - if you'd like a more detailed go-over, kindly PM me over Discord or something :)
Did an overview seems nice....The story development and all I think it will be a nice read .....keep writing.....wish you all the best for your next enaveduars..
just read the first chapter and I'm already intrigued to continue. the well written development of the environment and the character is really good..
I often didn't read these kinds of things, but this one caught my attention. The way you describe everything is too captivating. I wondered if this all was real.hehe However, it was enjoyable to read
I thought this story is about cyborgs, but not. It is about humans. A great plots with interesting characters, and I am so curious about what would happened to these protagonist humans.
This deserves a lot of attention, I enjoyed reading this and the great pacing of the story. I was able to get a lot from one chapter and wish to see more! Good work!
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Great read, looking forward to more of it, I quite like the interesting storyline and premise the author went with and can't wait to see how it goes.
I love the writer's writing as well as the out of the box thinking when it comes to questions. it is a very intriguing read. I must commend the author on this and I hope the author will continue writing
I'm loving this very much..there is so much in this story. The characters are perfectly designed and the world background is divine. The story line is captive too.......keep it up dear author.
Nice work author you did good work here pls keep it up ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ hoping to read more❤❤ you novel let me speechless 😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
Amazing imagination. I am afraid that such things could really happen in the future. Who knows. The story is great and you get into it really fast. Great work author 😁❤
The vibe this story makes is very interesting, and I really like it. It makes it feel sort of neo-noir, a science fiction type for me. I really like that, I really do.
From the first few chapters it really features our author's great pov about the world and its way of thinking.... But going after 4 to 5 chapter its gonna tell u about avengers..... I guess our author is a big fan of avenger...... Well writting and plot was also awesomely described....
The story is amazing, smoothly unfolding, I've never got hooked to a sci-fi story before, keep it up. Also the scares in the story are very well written, and intriguing❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Average Book............................................ it could be better if it had more chapters ........................................
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I agree with the part of humanity uniting but did the contries just disappeared like in one day is it really possible, thats the point kept me bugging through the story
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The story is seriously good but the only thing confused me in the middle was did the protagonists change but then i remembered the protagonist here is the human civilization not a person.
Reveal Spoiler I have been reading this since it was first pubished, well the story has potential but too many grammatical mistakes, anyway I hope you could improve them as I have liked the idea behind it
Well i am not really into sci fi genre but this book has made a mixture of both, but as i said i cannot really judge it form a sci fi point of view.
Its good.................................................................................................................. ..................... updates pls
Very naive. Written by a child, because I don't suspect an adult of such naivety. Descriptions and lack of details and lack of maturity in descriptions. A story for children, and very naive children at that. Adults will get bored after a few pages. Unfortunately, my rating is low as is the quality of this thing.
Interesting. It’s a nice take on humanity, very philosophical not to mention humanity as a whole being the protagonist. That makes it all the more interesting. A must read.
The writing's got room for improvement (as others here may have noticed), but as of this review's posting, whatever flaws were present don't detract from the content itself too much. Additionally, it may be best to limit allusions to existing works in pop culture to a minimum. I particularly recommend looking up comma splices, run-on sentences and sentence fragments on Google since these are the common mistakes I came across in your work. PS - if you'd like a more detailed go-over, kindly PM me over Discord or something :)
Did an overview seems nice....The story development and all I think it will be a nice read .....keep writing.....wish you all the best for your next enaveduars..
just read the first chapter and I'm already intrigued to continue. the well written development of the environment and the character is really good..
I often didn't read these kinds of things, but this one caught my attention. The way you describe everything is too captivating. I wondered if this all was real.hehe However, it was enjoyable to read
I thought this story is about cyborgs, but not. It is about humans. A great plots with interesting characters, and I am so curious about what would happened to these protagonist humans.
This deserves a lot of attention, I enjoyed reading this and the great pacing of the story. I was able to get a lot from one chapter and wish to see more! Good work!
I give you five stars, because you observed it. Your story and book tittle are so nice. I hope and pray for you to be[img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins][img=coins] success.
Great read, looking forward to more of it, I quite like the interesting storyline and premise the author went with and can't wait to see how it goes.
I love the writer's writing as well as the out of the box thinking when it comes to questions. it is a very intriguing read. I must commend the author on this and I hope the author will continue writing
I'm loving this very much..there is so much in this story. The characters are perfectly designed and the world background is divine. The story line is captive too.......keep it up dear author.
Nice work author you did good work here pls keep it up ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ hoping to read more❤❤ you novel let me speechless 😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌😌
Amazing imagination. I am afraid that such things could really happen in the future. Who knows. The story is great and you get into it really fast. Great work author 😁❤
The vibe this story makes is very interesting, and I really like it. It makes it feel sort of neo-noir, a science fiction type for me. I really like that, I really do.
From the first few chapters it really features our author's great pov about the world and its way of thinking.... But going after 4 to 5 chapter its gonna tell u about avengers..... I guess our author is a big fan of avenger...... Well writting and plot was also awesomely described....
The story is amazing, smoothly unfolding, I've never got hooked to a sci-fi story before, keep it up. Also the scares in the story are very well written, and intriguing❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Average Book............................................ it could be better if it had more chapters ........................................
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I agree with the part of humanity uniting but did the contries just disappeared like in one day is it really possible, thats the point kept me bugging through the story
Reveal Spoiler The story is seriously good but the only thing confused me in the middle was did the protagonists change but then i remembered the protagonist here is the human civilization not a person.
Reveal Spoiler I have been reading this since it was first pubished, well the story has potential but too many grammatical mistakes, anyway I hope you could improve them as I have liked the idea behind it
Well i am not really into sci fi genre but this book has made a mixture of both, but as i said i cannot really judge it form a sci fi point of view.
Its good.................................................................................................................. ..................... updates pls
Very naive. Written by a child, because I don't suspect an adult of such naivety. Descriptions and lack of details and lack of maturity in descriptions. A story for children, and very naive children at that. Adults will get bored after a few pages. Unfortunately, my rating is low as is the quality of this thing.