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The plot is enjoyable. So far it looks like the mc has a rosy path ahead of him but a plot that doesn't stress you with twists and turns is nice every once in a while. Gonna be honest, the 18+ scenes are a turn-off when you'te constantly reminded that they're 13-14 years old so I just skip them altogether. apart from that, it's been great. Love the faceslapping
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Povestea este interesanta nu știu dacă este originala începutul captivant și îmi place un ideea margaery tyrell sa fie soție da ar face asta
Povestea este interesanta cu un complot original nu e perfect dar merită citit la începuturile povești nu știam dacă să continui său nu dar am decis săi dau o șansă
I didn't read it all. I got to the chapter where the twins start kissing, which wasn't really my cup of tea. The story is written well, however, and the pacing is good.
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Great story , I liked ot very much looking forward to see more dragons... I wanted to ask will there be more chapters after chapter 74
author ruined a decent story to add a second wife. im always for harem but this got me annoyed lol dany hated the idea and mc even had a chance to get what he wanted without marrying her but he still chose to put his wife through sharing her lover. story was legit ok but author couldn't help himself and ruined it
It's a harem, and with every harem BS story, things got really stupid really fast. I'm out
In some places the author writes outright nonsense! The author stretches the distances that dragons must fly in a day or two over weeks! The Spider was unable, with the help of his network of spies, to find out where the army of thousands was moving and inform the MC about it... Tywin was magically able to capture and plunder the sunspear, something that even the Targaryens and Dragons could not do in the past!
good story I can only advise you to read it and make up your own mind................................................................................
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This and most of the author's novels are really good but they barely get one book half way through before they get bored or whatever and start another and the other books suffer for it. I hope this author reads this and picks a book to finish.
{My Previous review(deleted): Overhyped. When I saw 4.9+ rating and read some reviews saying it is one of the best GOT fics, I was very eager to read it. But it turned out to be a disappointment. Poorly written, too cringy. Character designing was bad.} Now that I've overcome my disappointment, I think I can give a better review than 'poorly written'. It was a decent enough fic, I suppose; I just had a lot of expectations about its quality and plot (again coz it has a 4.9+ rating for ~30 users rating it). The story seems to be written by an amateur author with some admittedly good ideas. The scenes are written forcefully emotional. The MC doesn't act as smart as he seems to think he is. I didn't like how the author dealt with MC and Daenerys' relationship. The author should have taken more time to establish their relationship instead of using the Dreams to force the issue upon them and make Daenerys act on it immediately, pushing it on an uncomfortable MC within just a few hrs of their meeting. I can understand she has been harbouring feelings for him for a long time and is emotionally taxed by the previous events; still, it is too cringy and poorly executed. I don't even know what to say about their brilliant idea to actively try for a second kid (the first was an accident, that's fine, I suppose) when they were obviously preparing for war. So, yeah... I wasn't motivated to go further after reading the family's poorly written meeting with Robb Stark and the Blackfish at Riverrun(Ch.27 ig). This just isn't the story for me.
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Excellent Book, all round, great story line so far very binge worthy [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Harém: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
It's alright the characters are a not really there for me, the origin story of the mc is iffy and the whole thing feels more like a summary of a story.
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It’s good fanfiction but i don’t like how he burn all bravos even if i can understand ——————————-__————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Thanks for the chapter and i cant wait for more! ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ...................................
Historia del OC bastante interesante, desarrollo de la historia rapido pero sin dejar detalles al azar, me gusta que no complegisen los capitulos con iformacion abusurda que funcione como relleno. A la espera de nuevas actualizaciones para ver como continua esta historia.
perfect, I wish there were more episodes (would you write a fiction like the first son of the house of Lannister after this story ends? it would be much more interesting than the stark ones
One of the best GOT stories I have read so far. It's taking a completely different angle into the world but working it's way back into the original plot sort of. Keep up the great work Author!
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have not read just want to ask if this follows the books or the show i watched the show all the way through and i am reading the books I'm on clash of king amost done i just want to know cause i dont want to get spoiled
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second review here! to show how much I love this wonderful book. also I have a picture to suggest for Raenon's armor
Enjoy the new Fanfiction that I'm starting up. It's taking the place of The Libertas Dive and will be updated every Friday weekly on Webnovel. Like all my other books, if you wish to read ahead. Head to the P-a-t-r-e-o-n. And yes, my works on P-a-t-r-e-o-n get updated more than Webnovel.
The plot is enjoyable. So far it looks like the mc has a rosy path ahead of him but a plot that doesn't stress you with twists and turns is nice every once in a while. Gonna be honest, the 18+ scenes are a turn-off when you'te constantly reminded that they're 13-14 years old so I just skip them altogether. apart from that, it's been great. Love the faceslapping
Love it................................................................................................................................................
Povestea este interesanta nu știu dacă este originala începutul captivant și îmi place un ideea margaery tyrell sa fie soție da ar face asta
Povestea este interesanta cu un complot original nu e perfect dar merită citit la începuturile povești nu știam dacă să continui său nu dar am decis săi dau o șansă
I didn't read it all. I got to the chapter where the twins start kissing, which wasn't really my cup of tea. The story is written well, however, and the pacing is good.
Reveal Spoiler Great story , I liked ot very much looking forward to see more dragons... I wanted to ask will there be more chapters after chapter 74
author ruined a decent story to add a second wife. im always for harem but this got me annoyed lol dany hated the idea and mc even had a chance to get what he wanted without marrying her but he still chose to put his wife through sharing her lover. story was legit ok but author couldn't help himself and ruined it
It's a harem, and with every harem BS story, things got really stupid really fast. I'm out
In some places the author writes outright nonsense! The author stretches the distances that dragons must fly in a day or two over weeks! The Spider was unable, with the help of his network of spies, to find out where the army of thousands was moving and inform the MC about it... Tywin was magically able to capture and plunder the sunspear, something that even the Targaryens and Dragons could not do in the past!
good story I can only advise you to read it and make up your own mind................................................................................
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This and most of the author's novels are really good but they barely get one book half way through before they get bored or whatever and start another and the other books suffer for it. I hope this author reads this and picks a book to finish.
{My Previous review(deleted): Overhyped. When I saw 4.9+ rating and read some reviews saying it is one of the best GOT fics, I was very eager to read it. But it turned out to be a disappointment. Poorly written, too cringy. Character designing was bad.} Now that I've overcome my disappointment, I think I can give a better review than 'poorly written'. It was a decent enough fic, I suppose; I just had a lot of expectations about its quality and plot (again coz it has a 4.9+ rating for ~30 users rating it). The story seems to be written by an amateur author with some admittedly good ideas. The scenes are written forcefully emotional. The MC doesn't act as smart as he seems to think he is. I didn't like how the author dealt with MC and Daenerys' relationship. The author should have taken more time to establish their relationship instead of using the Dreams to force the issue upon them and make Daenerys act on it immediately, pushing it on an uncomfortable MC within just a few hrs of their meeting. I can understand she has been harbouring feelings for him for a long time and is emotionally taxed by the previous events; still, it is too cringy and poorly executed. I don't even know what to say about their brilliant idea to actively try for a second kid (the first was an accident, that's fine, I suppose) when they were obviously preparing for war. So, yeah... I wasn't motivated to go further after reading the family's poorly written meeting with Robb Stark and the Blackfish at Riverrun(Ch.27 ig). This just isn't the story for me.
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Reveal Spoiler Excellent Book, all round, great story line so far very binge worthy [img=update][img=update][img=update]
Harém: Daenerys Targaryen, Sansa Stark, Margaery Tyrell. HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
It's alright the characters are a not really there for me, the origin story of the mc is iffy and the whole thing feels more like a summary of a story.
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It’s good fanfiction but i don’t like how he burn all bravos even if i can understand ——————————-__————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————
Thanks for the chapter and i cant wait for more! ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ................................... ...................................
Historia del OC bastante interesante, desarrollo de la historia rapido pero sin dejar detalles al azar, me gusta que no complegisen los capitulos con iformacion abusurda que funcione como relleno. A la espera de nuevas actualizaciones para ver como continua esta historia.
perfect, I wish there were more episodes (would you write a fiction like the first son of the house of Lannister after this story ends? it would be much more interesting than the stark ones
One of the best GOT stories I have read so far. It's taking a completely different angle into the world but working it's way back into the original plot sort of. Keep up the great work Author!
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It’s good but takes forever to update. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx. Xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Reveal Spoiler have not read just want to ask if this follows the books or the show i watched the show all the way through and i am reading the books I'm on clash of king amost done i just want to know cause i dont want to get spoiled
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second review here! to show how much I love this wonderful book. also I have a picture to suggest for Raenon's armor
Enjoy the new Fanfiction that I'm starting up. It's taking the place of The Libertas Dive and will be updated every Friday weekly on Webnovel. Like all my other books, if you wish to read ahead. Head to the P-a-t-r-e-o-n. And yes, my works on P-a-t-r-e-o-n get updated more than Webnovel.