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I have finally caught up to the recent chapter available that isn't privileged (814), and I have to say I'm pretty hooked and excited about what will happen next. The pacing is fairly even despite it being 800 chapters. The author is obviously taking their time with the story, and the lore and world-building are slowly coming together nicely. I can't help but wait for the next release of the chapter!Our cast of characters has also grown exponentially! I really love how they handled the development of each one of them throughout the story despite it already being an extremely long journey. Big ups to the author.Other than that, I can't wait to see more! I love this story. It's made me love fantasy and levelling systems even more. It shows that there is more that we can do with the genre when handled correctly with its pacing, world-building, character development, and power scaling. It's honestly inspiring, and I hope for more to come in the future. Thank you for making an amazing story yet again!!!
Nice I love the story, especially sylphy and aquarina relationship both looks so cute and adorable together.
Very interesting book. I don't like Yuri normally. it has an awesome story and lots action.
unique style well development of characters have enjoyed the reading so far . An interesting view of morals waiting for the advancement of characters.
Hello author I have a question could you make the art design for the sub characters ? want to see mist design and the others if possible [img=recommend]
Hello I want to express my gratitude to you, PancakesWitch author, for creating such a fantastic narrative with a well-written main character. I love your novel Epic Caterpillar, but I have a question for you: will SYLPHY be able to a boyfriend in later chapters? I think SYLPHY can have both a boyfriend and a girlfriend because I want SYLPHY to be able to start a family and having kids, just like in the famous Caterpillar book. I don't really mind yuri, especially Aquarina.
i love this book. it is among my favorites which is only counted on one hand.i wish there was a discord i could join
This story is one of my favorite, it very relaxing book where I alway enjoy reading it new chapter. So I encourage you to do the same and read it👍
I loved the author's way of writing, as well as how the characters are as a whole and the background of the world. Simply loving the story, please author don't let the work fall. Note: English is not my first language.
The novel is fantastic. The system, Alice, is very unique and different from the other system novels which I have seen hundreds of. This is definitely on my favorite top 5. My favorite of all the novels he/she have written. All of the characters are fantastic. The quality of this novel is top. You should try it out and see if you like it. This is all I have to say because I'm not good with words. I also like the newly picture there.
It's a very amazing novel. I'm on chapter 372 and I suddenly thought of something. Is our Mc mom's baby the reincarnated person that the reincarnation god sent to the world that also sent our mc by mistake? I had that thought because I was thinking about Mc mom when I thought about the baby which had death, shadow or darkness, and blood affinities, The baby also had a strong soul which then made me thing about how the god was supposed to send someone else there. Also, elves were supposed to take a long time to make a baby. Having our Mc was a miracle. Then having another soon after has to make you start thinking. What if our mc mother was supposed to not have any baby's but did to them reincarnated into her as baby's. The god said that he has to spend a lot of energy to send the one that was supposed to be sent, but our mc system took a large junk of his energy which delay it by a couple of years. Please answer anyone and I guess I used supposed too much.
Like the novel. Your work has been stolen however for this novel. If has been posted on Kindle Unlimited under the name Reincarnation With The Strongest Leveling System by an author Cassi Cisco. Don’t want your hard work to earn someone else money.
really interesting Story and world with Reincarnation but Not a human from earth but a kid from a world with Magic that dragicially died
Haven't read it. ...........................................................................................................
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I love this book. The author has my support. Keep it going. 😊👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Writing Quality: Typos and basic word mistakes. Updates: Regular Updates Story Development: Aside from a skip of years at times the story is progressing smoothly without any jarring parts. Character Design: The MC personality seems overly concerned with the state of the world despite what appears to be her personality. World Background: Solid world building and magic design. The overall writing style is simple and easy to understand. Typical Demon Lord plot with a twist. The storytelling is easy going and doesn't get you attached to the MC early on but it seems to work. Sometimes the chapters have several paragraphs from previous chapter I guess to make their word count which lost a lot of points with me personally. Will be looking forward to seeing how this story progresses. Good work author san.
I had come here for the yuri, but gotten a lot more instead. I had reached the paid chapters (75) and despite there being little to no yuri, (prob cuz they are 4yrs old right now) when I read this story, everything was done so well and so interesting that I didn't even have time to look for mistakes. The only thing I can remember is that the word real was missing the -l in one sentence, I had no qualms about the writing quality, the SOU, the Story Development, not the Character Design. Let me not forget, the World Background was an amazing piece of work as well. This review is kind of biased since I do love Pancakes (author), but it shouldn't be far from the truth, I encourage you all to read this wonderful story, you will like it, and if you don't, keep reading and then you will like it; yes, I am saying your only option is to like it because you will like it.....
Overall one of the best web novels I have ever read. I cant wait to get coins to unlock those hidden juciy chapters. I do want to say that on... sibbles (I think thats the site name), that there are chapters avalible for free that are paywalled here ( just saying)
Any specific chronological order for your books so I know where to start? An answer will be much appreciated as I am intrigued about your stories.
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One of the novel I've liked the most since I started reading on this platform. Congrats Author I gave you all the golden tickets and power stone I had. Hope to see more of this amazing work.
you had me at Yuri........,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's a very cute beginning and I hope I can see a lot more cuteness in this novel❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
OK SO LIKE THIS IS MY 1ST BOOK ON THIS AUTHOR BUT IHAVE TO SAME A LOVE TH3 CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND PLOT DEVELOPMENT, AS WELL AS THE BACKGROUND THO I DO FIND IT A BIT CONFUSING DUE TO THE SYSTEM BEING FALUTY? BUT GJVING SUUCH A LARGE BUFF IN THE MC POWERS! SO I BIT MORE BACKGROUND/SUPPORTING INFO THERE BE NICE![img=recommend]
definitely a pancakeswitch novel,need I say more?👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I'm currently all the way caught up at chapter 147 I would first like to congratulate the author of this novel! You've really put effort into creating a work of art that I absolutely love and appreciate. thank you for your efforts. For current and future readers I definitely recommend this book highly. it's honestly not slow passed as there is a nice steady flow to things. there not any huge time jumps as of yet just a few jumps here and there. but I will say it's a tear jerker in a few places but nothing overwhelming or exaggerating. the story really has a very healthy organic feel to it within the scope of the setting given. no part so far has been especially boring and I didn't feel like I needed to skip any parts in length. this is a very enjoyable read and makes you want to invest in the characters as they grow and develop. I'm very happy with my choice of picking this up. I hope others enjoy this novel even more than myself. 😊🥰😊🥰😊
I have finally caught up to the recent chapter available that isn't privileged (814), and I have to say I'm pretty hooked and excited about what will happen next. The pacing is fairly even despite it being 800 chapters. The author is obviously taking their time with the story, and the lore and world-building are slowly coming together nicely. I can't help but wait for the next release of the chapter!Our cast of characters has also grown exponentially! I really love how they handled the development of each one of them throughout the story despite it already being an extremely long journey. Big ups to the author.Other than that, I can't wait to see more! I love this story. It's made me love fantasy and levelling systems even more. It shows that there is more that we can do with the genre when handled correctly with its pacing, world-building, character development, and power scaling. It's honestly inspiring, and I hope for more to come in the future. Thank you for making an amazing story yet again!!!
Nice I love the story, especially sylphy and aquarina relationship both looks so cute and adorable together.
Very interesting book. I don't like Yuri normally. it has an awesome story and lots action.
unique style well development of characters have enjoyed the reading so far . An interesting view of morals waiting for the advancement of characters.
Hello author I have a question could you make the art design for the sub characters ? want to see mist design and the others if possible [img=recommend]
Hello I want to express my gratitude to you, PancakesWitch author, for creating such a fantastic narrative with a well-written main character. I love your novel Epic Caterpillar, but I have a question for you: will SYLPHY be able to a boyfriend in later chapters? I think SYLPHY can have both a boyfriend and a girlfriend because I want SYLPHY to be able to start a family and having kids, just like in the famous Caterpillar book. I don't really mind yuri, especially Aquarina.
i love this book. it is among my favorites which is only counted on one hand.i wish there was a discord i could join
This story is one of my favorite, it very relaxing book where I alway enjoy reading it new chapter. So I encourage you to do the same and read it👍
I loved the author's way of writing, as well as how the characters are as a whole and the background of the world. Simply loving the story, please author don't let the work fall. Note: English is not my first language.
The novel is fantastic. The system, Alice, is very unique and different from the other system novels which I have seen hundreds of. This is definitely on my favorite top 5. My favorite of all the novels he/she have written. All of the characters are fantastic. The quality of this novel is top. You should try it out and see if you like it. This is all I have to say because I'm not good with words. I also like the newly picture there.
It's a very amazing novel. I'm on chapter 372 and I suddenly thought of something. Is our Mc mom's baby the reincarnated person that the reincarnation god sent to the world that also sent our mc by mistake? I had that thought because I was thinking about Mc mom when I thought about the baby which had death, shadow or darkness, and blood affinities, The baby also had a strong soul which then made me thing about how the god was supposed to send someone else there. Also, elves were supposed to take a long time to make a baby. Having our Mc was a miracle. Then having another soon after has to make you start thinking. What if our mc mother was supposed to not have any baby's but did to them reincarnated into her as baby's. The god said that he has to spend a lot of energy to send the one that was supposed to be sent, but our mc system took a large junk of his energy which delay it by a couple of years. Please answer anyone and I guess I used supposed too much.
Like the novel. Your work has been stolen however for this novel. If has been posted on Kindle Unlimited under the name Reincarnation With The Strongest Leveling System by an author Cassi Cisco. Don’t want your hard work to earn someone else money.
really interesting Story and world with Reincarnation but Not a human from earth but a kid from a world with Magic that dragicially died
Haven't read it. ...........................................................................................................
Reveal Spoiler I love this book. The author has my support. Keep it going. 😊👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻
Writing Quality: Typos and basic word mistakes. Updates: Regular Updates Story Development: Aside from a skip of years at times the story is progressing smoothly without any jarring parts. Character Design: The MC personality seems overly concerned with the state of the world despite what appears to be her personality. World Background: Solid world building and magic design. The overall writing style is simple and easy to understand. Typical Demon Lord plot with a twist. The storytelling is easy going and doesn't get you attached to the MC early on but it seems to work. Sometimes the chapters have several paragraphs from previous chapter I guess to make their word count which lost a lot of points with me personally. Will be looking forward to seeing how this story progresses. Good work author san.
I had come here for the yuri, but gotten a lot more instead. I had reached the paid chapters (75) and despite there being little to no yuri, (prob cuz they are 4yrs old right now) when I read this story, everything was done so well and so interesting that I didn't even have time to look for mistakes. The only thing I can remember is that the word real was missing the -l in one sentence, I had no qualms about the writing quality, the SOU, the Story Development, not the Character Design. Let me not forget, the World Background was an amazing piece of work as well. This review is kind of biased since I do love Pancakes (author), but it shouldn't be far from the truth, I encourage you all to read this wonderful story, you will like it, and if you don't, keep reading and then you will like it; yes, I am saying your only option is to like it because you will like it.....
Overall one of the best web novels I have ever read. I cant wait to get coins to unlock those hidden juciy chapters. I do want to say that on... sibbles (I think thats the site name), that there are chapters avalible for free that are paywalled here ( just saying)
Any specific chronological order for your books so I know where to start? An answer will be much appreciated as I am intrigued about your stories.
..... .. .. ...................... .. ................................... ................. ................................................
One of the novel I've liked the most since I started reading on this platform. Congrats Author I gave you all the golden tickets and power stone I had. Hope to see more of this amazing work.
you had me at Yuri........,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
It's a very cute beginning and I hope I can see a lot more cuteness in this novel❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
OK SO LIKE THIS IS MY 1ST BOOK ON THIS AUTHOR BUT IHAVE TO SAME A LOVE TH3 CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT AND PLOT DEVELOPMENT, AS WELL AS THE BACKGROUND THO I DO FIND IT A BIT CONFUSING DUE TO THE SYSTEM BEING FALUTY? BUT GJVING SUUCH A LARGE BUFF IN THE MC POWERS! SO I BIT MORE BACKGROUND/SUPPORTING INFO THERE BE NICE![img=recommend]
definitely a pancakeswitch novel,need I say more?👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I'm currently all the way caught up at chapter 147 I would first like to congratulate the author of this novel! You've really put effort into creating a work of art that I absolutely love and appreciate. thank you for your efforts. For current and future readers I definitely recommend this book highly. it's honestly not slow passed as there is a nice steady flow to things. there not any huge time jumps as of yet just a few jumps here and there. but I will say it's a tear jerker in a few places but nothing overwhelming or exaggerating. the story really has a very healthy organic feel to it within the scope of the setting given. no part so far has been especially boring and I didn't feel like I needed to skip any parts in length. this is a very enjoyable read and makes you want to invest in the characters as they grow and develop. I'm very happy with my choice of picking this up. I hope others enjoy this novel even more than myself. 😊🥰😊🥰😊