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I think if it had more chapters it would be great! Also, I find the names kind of interesting. This story seems to have a lot of potential and I am totally looking forward to more chapters. I hope the author updates it soon!
I think it Is a wonderful read. the world-building is pretty awesome. I feel like this is a story that carries potential. I also like how the villain 'Kuroi' is not a generic and complete fool like most stories represent. He seems to be an interesting character. I hope that the author will update it as regularly as they can✌
It seems this story will keep me hooked on to it as the writing is really easy to understand and being a beginner it is hard to stick on a story that is complex from the beginning, also the concept looks real interesting and i look forward to reading what comes next... Also i hope the author is regular for the updates.. (~￣³￣)~ Right now I'll give it a 5 star🌼✌️
To me this is one of the stories which have apparent and gigantic potential. The background is easy to digest, interesting synopsis, engaging hooks that let you wanna know more. And most importantly the simple language that helped me gulp two chapters in matter of 2 minutes. I like an easy and engaging read. Recommed to this every one who are into dark dystopian world where mc being tormented both mentally and physically and then rising to the top. I noticed a few word repetition and missing comma-splices but all that ought to get better with further chapter since the author already seem to have good grip over the their writing style and vocabulary. An easy 5 stars to the author.
ohh...this one is pretty good. I like the premise already. I'm definitely digging the world building on this one. I like Kuroi as a character, he could prove himself to be a pretty good villian. The chapter length is short and concise which kept me hooked. dear author please keep the updates stable, i really wanna know what happens next. 💜💜💜
A great beginning to what feels like is going to be a fantastic epic full of amazing characters and depth the potential is there and I'm looking forward to read it more as it gets updated
I think if it had more chapters it would be great! Also, I find the names kind of interesting. This story seems to have a lot of potential and I am totally looking forward to more chapters. I hope the author updates it soon!
I think it Is a wonderful read. the world-building is pretty awesome. I feel like this is a story that carries potential. I also like how the villain 'Kuroi' is not a generic and complete fool like most stories represent. He seems to be an interesting character. I hope that the author will update it as regularly as they can✌
It seems this story will keep me hooked on to it as the writing is really easy to understand and being a beginner it is hard to stick on a story that is complex from the beginning, also the concept looks real interesting and i look forward to reading what comes next... Also i hope the author is regular for the updates.. (~￣³￣)~ Right now I'll give it a 5 star🌼✌️
To me this is one of the stories which have apparent and gigantic potential. The background is easy to digest, interesting synopsis, engaging hooks that let you wanna know more. And most importantly the simple language that helped me gulp two chapters in matter of 2 minutes. I like an easy and engaging read. Recommed to this every one who are into dark dystopian world where mc being tormented both mentally and physically and then rising to the top. I noticed a few word repetition and missing comma-splices but all that ought to get better with further chapter since the author already seem to have good grip over the their writing style and vocabulary. An easy 5 stars to the author.
ohh...this one is pretty good. I like the premise already. I'm definitely digging the world building on this one. I like Kuroi as a character, he could prove himself to be a pretty good villian. The chapter length is short and concise which kept me hooked. dear author please keep the updates stable, i really wanna know what happens next. 💜💜💜
A great beginning to what feels like is going to be a fantastic epic full of amazing characters and depth the potential is there and I'm looking forward to read it more as it gets updated