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Another book from favorite author, can see the changes, author came back with a new hit lol. Anyways , the book is good and scenes are intense. check it out! !
Nice start, first chapter was already something with Edward's tragic experience. now I'm wondering what's gonna happen to Fablo and him, I'm nervous lol 😂
Compared to the first work , the author really made a lot of improvements in this book. Hooked already! !
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE 🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲
Great! ! another book from the author that made me come to webnovel ,though I've not been here lately hehe. Anyways , read the book and can see the author has made a lot of improvements compared to the first one. Good job author! !!
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
A work in progress! I know the author will improve more soon. The plot is there, sprinkled with the author's imagination. It will surely get the fame it deserved! But yeah, all novels are not perfect....there are problems I encountered but only normal as the author is still learning her ways of the craft. Kudos for a job well done!
I’m leaving a review after reading one chapter. The story is written well except for a few spelling and punctuation errors. When you read you can already see that the author has a plan for the world-building and the government. The update stability isn’t so great, last update was a year ago. I think my only biggest problem is when the character is dying he gets his heart ripped out, which is an instant death. There shouldn’t be any thinking or adrenaline after that because the heart is the engine of the body. Fix these things and I feel like it’d be a great read.
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Really interesting plot. Character Edward is cool and a little pitiful at same time. It truly shows how a person's attitude changes when they go threw apoclipce kind of thing. I would love to read further chapters.
Another book from favorite author, can see the changes, author came back with a new hit lol. Anyways , the book is good and scenes are intense. check it out! !
Nice start, first chapter was already something with Edward's tragic experience. now I'm wondering what's gonna happen to Fablo and him, I'm nervous lol 😂
Compared to the first work , the author really made a lot of improvements in this book. Hooked already! !
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE 🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲
Great! ! another book from the author that made me come to webnovel ,though I've not been here lately hehe. Anyways , read the book and can see the author has made a lot of improvements compared to the first one. Good job author! !!
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
A work in progress! I know the author will improve more soon. The plot is there, sprinkled with the author's imagination. It will surely get the fame it deserved! But yeah, all novels are not perfect....there are problems I encountered but only normal as the author is still learning her ways of the craft. Kudos for a job well done!
I’m leaving a review after reading one chapter. The story is written well except for a few spelling and punctuation errors. When you read you can already see that the author has a plan for the world-building and the government. The update stability isn’t so great, last update was a year ago. I think my only biggest problem is when the character is dying he gets his heart ripped out, which is an instant death. There shouldn’t be any thinking or adrenaline after that because the heart is the engine of the body. Fix these things and I feel like it’d be a great read.
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Really interesting plot. Character Edward is cool and a little pitiful at same time. It truly shows how a person's attitude changes when they go threw apoclipce kind of thing. I would love to read further chapters.