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The author has a fine way of expressing things, I was captivated by the very first chapter and hurried to add the book to my library and so should you, can't wait to see what happens next, please keep updating regularly!
I'm loving the mystery aspect of this story! Readers get to know things only when the FL discovers them, so you never know what will happen. The writing is very detailed, and story is intriguing. Great work, author!
Spectacular work author, I do really love novels like this..That are filled with mystery and excitement.. it really worth reading so so much... I can't just stop reading it😅😅 Keep it up
Wow the suspense really draws readers in and makes them want to know more about the characters. Speaking of which, each character is unique with a myriad of various emotions that shape the plot into something beautifu that makes you not want to put the book down.
Its easy to read. the story is fast paced and a lot is happening all around. There us a sense of mystery and an anticipation of something bad happening to the MC. The narrative is gripping and keeps you from wanting to put the book down. Keep up the good work author 👍
it's a very good book with an interesting plot line however I don't like how you can't tell who is narrating the story at certain times
So much suspence, so many questions! I like it. Really enjoying story, I've just read the first 10 chapters and eant to know more. Keep up the good work! 😊
Unique concept and the characters and world background are well described and interesting plot and writing quality is also good and keep releasing New chapters 👍👍👍👍
Unique story, All the world you have built seems real! I got lost in the book, it's worth reading! Very well-written characters. You have done a great job, I am looking forward to more, keep it up :D
Really this novel has such a good storyline. The characters development...plot development ...all are just way too good. keep going Author 🤗🤗
Whoa!! What a impressive novel i just found. Synopsis is so mysterious. I'm hooked immediately as I read first chapter. I'm rooting for you author. Keep going. 😘🥰
The characters in this novel are nicely developed and easy to relate to. Both the title and the book's cover seem attractive.🤗 I find your synopsis captivating, and I enjoy the way you introduce the setting at the beginning.
Writing quality is good and updates are stable. I love the story development, it's not something you easily encounter these days. Characters are also very life-like. Stop wasting your time and go read this book now!
The story is with so much suspense that it will keep you on your toes throughout. The Fl has such a strong personality unlike usual cliches which makes this more interesting. i highly recommend it.
Great book. It reminded me of the Divergent series and the maze runner series. I really loved how the book started. And I really like how the protagonist is very brave in that she confronts her fears head-on. I have to read more to find out what happens next. Gonna read to slow again and savor the plot again.
This is good, I read a few chapters and it's thrilling every time I read it, it's a pretty good story although the world background is still a little bit confusing, so far so good thor, keep it up!
Your synopsis is intriguing and I kind of like how you set up the world in the beginning. I’m enjoying the story so far and actually want to find out more about the mystery. keep it up!
Such a beautiful story with so many mysteries! The book is written so neatly that makes me want to read and read. And the synopsis, it's so intriguing! Author keep writing, I'll come back someday to read the further chapters. Happy Writing!
[img=update][img=update] Beautiful story, with amazing story line, title and book cover. The end of each chapter leaves me intrigued. From the beginning, I can't put it down. Wonderful!!
A good suspense plot with mysteries and romance added to it. The fact that most of the chapters end at cliffhangers makes you want to read the next chapter to find out exactly what's going on. Great work author🧡
The biggest weaknesses I see so far are just grammar issues. There's some noticeable mistakes with commas and how they interact with parentheses. I also saw some tense changes, where you were phrasing in past tense but I think you meant to be in present tense. I make the same mistakes all the time so that's how I know. That being said, I'm enjoying the setting and mystery of your story so far. Fix up a few of the errors I mentioned in the first couple chapters and that should help it read smoothly. Looking forward to new chapters!
I love this! This story gives me goosebumps. I like how the narrative describes the situation the character is in, and how his feelings are clearly described in that situation. This is really interesting! Great work author!
Eeering, Melancholy, amazing and interesting, that's just what i have for this book, the first chap is intriguing enough to let you read on and get you really hooked, so come into this addiction my friends just like me, hahaha. Jokes aside, the novel is cool.
Amazing! Simply amazing! Suspense romance. so many emotions rolled into once. This is definitely worth the time it takes. Amazing job author!
I must say this novel is awesome. I've been reading it and I found this book to be worth rating. The character design, setting and plot are unique. Keep the book going Author.I would vote and support this book, it's a nice one. No grammatical error or breach. I love it 🎉💕💕
Very mysterious story. It gave me the bone-chilling vibe at the start, given how I am not such a fan of hospitals. But that didn't chase me away as it instead made me anxious about what would happen next. Keep it up author!
Dang this story is interesting. It has it's own cool plot and isn't following any trope. the author's choices of words are amazing which makes you want to continue to read the story. I loved it and I hope the author can keep up the hard work. only if the author updates regularly it'll be a bop
It's already intriguing from the start. Every chapter will leave you more curious to find out how the main character discovers her identity and what's really going on inside the mysterious place she finds herself in. I'm looking forward to reading about how their romance blossoms. Well done!
The author has a fine way of expressing things, I was captivated by the very first chapter and hurried to add the book to my library and so should you, can't wait to see what happens next, please keep updating regularly!
I'm loving the mystery aspect of this story! Readers get to know things only when the FL discovers them, so you never know what will happen. The writing is very detailed, and story is intriguing. Great work, author!
Spectacular work author, I do really love novels like this..That are filled with mystery and excitement.. it really worth reading so so much... I can't just stop reading it😅😅 Keep it up
Wow the suspense really draws readers in and makes them want to know more about the characters. Speaking of which, each character is unique with a myriad of various emotions that shape the plot into something beautifu that makes you not want to put the book down.
Its easy to read. the story is fast paced and a lot is happening all around. There us a sense of mystery and an anticipation of something bad happening to the MC. The narrative is gripping and keeps you from wanting to put the book down. Keep up the good work author 👍
it's a very good book with an interesting plot line however I don't like how you can't tell who is narrating the story at certain times
So much suspence, so many questions! I like it. Really enjoying story, I've just read the first 10 chapters and eant to know more. Keep up the good work! 😊
Unique concept and the characters and world background are well described and interesting plot and writing quality is also good and keep releasing New chapters 👍👍👍👍
Unique story, All the world you have built seems real! I got lost in the book, it's worth reading! Very well-written characters. You have done a great job, I am looking forward to more, keep it up :D
Really this novel has such a good storyline. The characters development...plot development ...all are just way too good. keep going Author 🤗🤗
Whoa!! What a impressive novel i just found. Synopsis is so mysterious. I'm hooked immediately as I read first chapter. I'm rooting for you author. Keep going. 😘🥰
The characters in this novel are nicely developed and easy to relate to. Both the title and the book's cover seem attractive.🤗 I find your synopsis captivating, and I enjoy the way you introduce the setting at the beginning.
Writing quality is good and updates are stable. I love the story development, it's not something you easily encounter these days. Characters are also very life-like. Stop wasting your time and go read this book now!
The story is with so much suspense that it will keep you on your toes throughout. The Fl has such a strong personality unlike usual cliches which makes this more interesting. i highly recommend it.
Great book. It reminded me of the Divergent series and the maze runner series. I really loved how the book started. And I really like how the protagonist is very brave in that she confronts her fears head-on. I have to read more to find out what happens next. Gonna read to slow again and savor the plot again.
This is good, I read a few chapters and it's thrilling every time I read it, it's a pretty good story although the world background is still a little bit confusing, so far so good thor, keep it up!
Your synopsis is intriguing and I kind of like how you set up the world in the beginning. I’m enjoying the story so far and actually want to find out more about the mystery. keep it up!
Such a beautiful story with so many mysteries! The book is written so neatly that makes me want to read and read. And the synopsis, it's so intriguing! Author keep writing, I'll come back someday to read the further chapters. Happy Writing!
[img=update][img=update] Beautiful story, with amazing story line, title and book cover. The end of each chapter leaves me intrigued. From the beginning, I can't put it down. Wonderful!!
A good suspense plot with mysteries and romance added to it. The fact that most of the chapters end at cliffhangers makes you want to read the next chapter to find out exactly what's going on. Great work author🧡
The biggest weaknesses I see so far are just grammar issues. There's some noticeable mistakes with commas and how they interact with parentheses. I also saw some tense changes, where you were phrasing in past tense but I think you meant to be in present tense. I make the same mistakes all the time so that's how I know. That being said, I'm enjoying the setting and mystery of your story so far. Fix up a few of the errors I mentioned in the first couple chapters and that should help it read smoothly. Looking forward to new chapters!
I love this! This story gives me goosebumps. I like how the narrative describes the situation the character is in, and how his feelings are clearly described in that situation. This is really interesting! Great work author!
Eeering, Melancholy, amazing and interesting, that's just what i have for this book, the first chap is intriguing enough to let you read on and get you really hooked, so come into this addiction my friends just like me, hahaha. Jokes aside, the novel is cool.
Amazing! Simply amazing! Suspense romance. so many emotions rolled into once. This is definitely worth the time it takes. Amazing job author!
I must say this novel is awesome. I've been reading it and I found this book to be worth rating. The character design, setting and plot are unique. Keep the book going Author.I would vote and support this book, it's a nice one. No grammatical error or breach. I love it 🎉💕💕
Very mysterious story. It gave me the bone-chilling vibe at the start, given how I am not such a fan of hospitals. But that didn't chase me away as it instead made me anxious about what would happen next. Keep it up author!
Dang this story is interesting. It has it's own cool plot and isn't following any trope. the author's choices of words are amazing which makes you want to continue to read the story. I loved it and I hope the author can keep up the hard work. only if the author updates regularly it'll be a bop
It's already intriguing from the start. Every chapter will leave you more curious to find out how the main character discovers her identity and what's really going on inside the mysterious place she finds herself in. I'm looking forward to reading about how their romance blossoms. Well done!