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Отличный фанфик, должен я заметить. Прочитал все имеющиеся главы на одном дыхании. Спасибо автору за эту работу. Ждём проду с придыханием;.............................................
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Very promising novel, I'm looking forward to reading more.............................................................................................
So far, so good. Keep it up author.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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I think this fanfic is very good. Though I could be biased because it contains all of my favorite HP fanfiction clichés: wrong-boy-who-lived, logical and cold MC, and a marvel crossover
So far it's pretty good (ch 14) I'm happy to say that the dialogue doesn't feel weird and MCS personally matches his actions so far. 4,5/5
Eu nao sei,mais as coisas parecem muito forçada,parace que o autor nao tinha ideia de onde manda a historia,acho que uma reescrita começo seria legal
Aright so it kind of follows a trend that even when James and Lilly survive Harry is always given away while the other twin is kept and they have another child but never bother to check in on him. now it really hasn't been expressed as in how but it seems as though Lilly has had her memories messed with into believing Harry is dead like all other novels and not the simple fact she just threw away her damaged son and had another child to replace him. hopefully this is explored more later the combination of Marvel and HP is awesome love the whole Hydra angle maybe HarryXNatasha
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Отличный фанфик, должен я заметить. Прочитал все имеющиеся главы на одном дыхании. Спасибо автору за эту работу. Ждём проду с придыханием;.............................................
What's the mtl? Comment the link here thank you. ......... ... . ............ .... . ....... ...... .................. ...
Very promising novel, I'm looking forward to reading more.............................................................................................
So far, so good. Keep it up author.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
good and update fast......good and update fastgood and update fast......good and update fastgood and update fast......good and update fastgood and update fast......good and update fast
I think this fanfic is very good. Though I could be biased because it contains all of my favorite HP fanfiction clichés: wrong-boy-who-lived, logical and cold MC, and a marvel crossover
So far it's pretty good (ch 14) I'm happy to say that the dialogue doesn't feel weird and MCS personally matches his actions so far. 4,5/5
Eu nao sei,mais as coisas parecem muito forçada,parace que o autor nao tinha ideia de onde manda a historia,acho que uma reescrita começo seria legal
Aright so it kind of follows a trend that even when James and Lilly survive Harry is always given away while the other twin is kept and they have another child but never bother to check in on him. now it really hasn't been expressed as in how but it seems as though Lilly has had her memories messed with into believing Harry is dead like all other novels and not the simple fact she just threw away her damaged son and had another child to replace him. hopefully this is explored more later the combination of Marvel and HP is awesome love the whole Hydra angle maybe HarryXNatasha
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didn’t like the mc decisions.