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It was a very interesting story. though the team got strong too much that they play blindfolded against Oikawa's team making the story too fictional making it like they are playing games against other team. Ihope the author will balance the team's strength against other team making the story more interesting. First time Review. ๐ ๐ค๐คซ๐คญ
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As long as it's a Haikyuu fanfic, automatically 5โญ As long as it's a Haikyuu fanfic, automatically 5โญ As long as it's a Haikyuu fanfic, automatically 5โญ
I really enjoy the story you present please continue, (โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)
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Never been someone to hate but it was hard to read, borderline unable to read cause of the state it was written in. Loads of useless spaces and when you need spaces they aren't even there. The dialogue is very rough including how it is layed out. Its just simply thrown into the paragraphs. Unfortunately I couldn't bare to read it despite my desire to cause of the anime it is based in. Hopefully, there is more fanfics around Haikyuu!!
The Grammar is so bad, I can't get the important points of this story if I can't read it properly. If you Are a mtl reader, Maybe this is not a problem for you, but for a person who have bad English and need google translate this story is suck.
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it's very rare when there is an author who is willing to write a haikyuu fanfic. I will support you by giving you a 5 star review. Hopefully you will continue to consistently update and the quality of the writing will be improved
ไป้ๆ ผๆฒๅ นๅผๅงๆๆง้ท็ต ็ดฏ็งฏ่ทๅพไธไธไธชๆถ่ ๅฎๅบฆๅ ยทๅจๅฐ้๏ผๆๆฏ่ฎญ็ปๅญฆๅๅงไบบ๏ผๅฝ้ ๅฒ็ฝๆๆฏ่ฎญ็ปๆๅฎๅ่ฃ ๅคไพๅบๅ๏ผ้ๆ ผๆฒๅ นๆๆฏ่ฎญ็ปๅญฆๆๆ๏ผๆข ๆ้ชๅฃซไธ็บงๅ็ซ ่ทๅพ่ ๏ผๅฝ้ ๅทซๅธๅณๆๅคง่ตๅ ๅ๏ผๅทซๅธๅฝ้ ๆๆ็้ปๅทซๅธ่ต้็ไบบ๏ผๅฝ้ ็ผ้ๆฏ็ ็ฉถไธญๅฟๅ่ชไธปๅธญใโโไป็ๅญฆ็ไปฌๆป็ฑ็งฐๅผไปไธบ๏ผโ้ฃไธชๅจ้ๆ ผๆฒๅ น่ฟ่กๅคง้ๆ็ไบบโ๏ผโๆฏๅนด้ฝไผๅจๅญฆๆ ก้ๅไบๆผไน ็ๆๆๆๅฎโโฆโฆโโ่ไป็ไผ ๅฅๆ ไบ๏ผๅฐไป1980ๅนด้ฃไธชไผๅฐ้ญ่ฟๆฒกๆถๅคฑ็ๅคๅคฉๅผๅงใโโๆๅซๅฎๅบฆๅ ๏ผไฝๅจๆๅพท้ๅ ๅฑฑ่ฐทๅซๅข ๅบ๏ผไธๆฝ็๏ผ้ ไนๆฏๆต ๅฐ่พๆญข๏ผไธไผๅๆไธๅฎ่ฆ่ตข่ฟๅซไบบ๏ผไนไธไผๅถ้ ่ฎฉๆๅคด็ผๆๆฏ่ฎฉๆๆไธ็กไธ็ๆไบบใไธ่ฟ๏ผ็่ฆๅจๆ็่ฏ๏ผๆไนไธไผ่พ็ปไปปไฝไบบๅฐฑๆฏไบใ
Stability of updates in good, writing quality, some mistakes here and there but can easily be deciphered, story development, it's a bit rushed and i feel that if the chapters are longer, then it would make the story better, character design, so far mc hasn't really played and he's only coached so far, so i hope he can actually play some time soon and show his OPness, if you make a character op, you may as well show it off. World background, it's Haikyuu, that's all there is to it
Let's start off with, the writing style and skill are almost nonexistent, the MC is boring and is stupid as heck. I guess it's because this author is new or something of that sort because there isn't much thought given to the wishes and their affects. The MC has no real goal in this world, a little spoiler but this MC decided to become the vice assistant or something, the reason being as stupid. The author keeps using capital letters on a usual just like his love for continual clichรฉ plots. That's it, overall, I won't recommend this to anyone.
It was a very interesting story. though the team got strong too much that they play blindfolded against Oikawa's team making the story too fictional making it like they are playing games against other team. Ihope the author will balance the team's strength against other team making the story more interesting. First time Review. ๐ ๐ค๐คซ๐คญ
Reveal Spoiler As long as it's a Haikyuu fanfic, automatically 5โญ As long as it's a Haikyuu fanfic, automatically 5โญ As long as it's a Haikyuu fanfic, automatically 5โญ
I really enjoy the story you present please continue, (โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)(โฟ^โฟ^)
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Never been someone to hate but it was hard to read, borderline unable to read cause of the state it was written in. Loads of useless spaces and when you need spaces they aren't even there. The dialogue is very rough including how it is layed out. Its just simply thrown into the paragraphs. Unfortunately I couldn't bare to read it despite my desire to cause of the anime it is based in. Hopefully, there is more fanfics around Haikyuu!!
The Grammar is so bad, I can't get the important points of this story if I can't read it properly. If you Are a mtl reader, Maybe this is not a problem for you, but for a person who have bad English and need google translate this story is suck.
Reveal Spoiler it's very rare when there is an author who is willing to write a haikyuu fanfic. I will support you by giving you a 5 star review. Hopefully you will continue to consistently update and the quality of the writing will be improved
ไป้ๆ ผๆฒๅ นๅผๅงๆๆง้ท็ต ็ดฏ็งฏ่ทๅพไธไธไธชๆถ่ ๅฎๅบฆๅ ยทๅจๅฐ้๏ผๆๆฏ่ฎญ็ปๅญฆๅๅงไบบ๏ผๅฝ้ ๅฒ็ฝๆๆฏ่ฎญ็ปๆๅฎๅ่ฃ ๅคไพๅบๅ๏ผ้ๆ ผๆฒๅ นๆๆฏ่ฎญ็ปๅญฆๆๆ๏ผๆข ๆ้ชๅฃซไธ็บงๅ็ซ ่ทๅพ่ ๏ผๅฝ้ ๅทซๅธๅณๆๅคง่ตๅ ๅ๏ผๅทซๅธๅฝ้ ๆๆ็้ปๅทซๅธ่ต้็ไบบ๏ผๅฝ้ ็ผ้ๆฏ็ ็ฉถไธญๅฟๅ่ชไธปๅธญใโโไป็ๅญฆ็ไปฌๆป็ฑ็งฐๅผไปไธบ๏ผโ้ฃไธชๅจ้ๆ ผๆฒๅ น่ฟ่กๅคง้ๆ็ไบบโ๏ผโๆฏๅนด้ฝไผๅจๅญฆๆ ก้ๅไบๆผไน ็ๆๆๆๅฎโโฆโฆโโ่ไป็ไผ ๅฅๆ ไบ๏ผๅฐไป1980ๅนด้ฃไธชไผๅฐ้ญ่ฟๆฒกๆถๅคฑ็ๅคๅคฉๅผๅงใโโๆๅซๅฎๅบฆๅ ๏ผไฝๅจๆๅพท้ๅ ๅฑฑ่ฐทๅซๅข ๅบ๏ผไธๆฝ็๏ผ้ ไนๆฏๆต ๅฐ่พๆญข๏ผไธไผๅๆไธๅฎ่ฆ่ตข่ฟๅซไบบ๏ผไนไธไผๅถ้ ่ฎฉๆๅคด็ผๆๆฏ่ฎฉๆๆไธ็กไธ็ๆไบบใไธ่ฟ๏ผ็่ฆๅจๆ็่ฏ๏ผๆไนไธไผ่พ็ปไปปไฝไบบๅฐฑๆฏไบใ
Stability of updates in good, writing quality, some mistakes here and there but can easily be deciphered, story development, it's a bit rushed and i feel that if the chapters are longer, then it would make the story better, character design, so far mc hasn't really played and he's only coached so far, so i hope he can actually play some time soon and show his OPness, if you make a character op, you may as well show it off. World background, it's Haikyuu, that's all there is to it
Let's start off with, the writing style and skill are almost nonexistent, the MC is boring and is stupid as heck. I guess it's because this author is new or something of that sort because there isn't much thought given to the wishes and their affects. The MC has no real goal in this world, a little spoiler but this MC decided to become the vice assistant or something, the reason being as stupid. The author keeps using capital letters on a usual just like his love for continual clichรฉ plots. That's it, overall, I won't recommend this to anyone.