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I'm on chapter 316 as I write this. The translation quality is average/high. In this fic the protagonist is very strong from the beginning (to the level of destroying planets), the premise is good and it's worth reading. The only problem is that the character "Im" in this novel is stupidly weak and nerfed. Other than that I would give it a 7/10.
the entire five hundred chapters are one story with different kind of list that doesnt make sense in the latest chapter this is the worse one piece fic I ever read
I finished reading the novel. Although it was kinda messy at least it was readable. MC is kinda the mastermind bigboss(Dojo Master)of the One Piece world with multiversal powers(training to be) /in use and minions(disciples) who dealt with worldly matters and even situational events(plot). Overall, a good read to pass time but not a nice time to understand the story. Thank you for this chapter and the previous ones too and for the work in translating it. Thank you! 🤛🏼😃👍🏼
I love this story and also the first one, I can not wait for the 3 story to come out
Честно говоря, до прочтения этой истории я не думала, что она мне действительно понравится. Я читал истории об учителях и учениках, и они меня очень раздражали. Ну, история, которую я однажды прочитал, была историей китайского совершенствования, поэтому, конечно, произошло много неприятных вещей. Вот почему, когда я увидел эту историю, и она имеет ту же тему: MC, который является учителем и у которого есть ученики, которых нужно обучать, я просто подумал, что могу бросить эту историю менее чем через 20 глав. но история превзошла мои ожидания, я прочитал ее до последней главы и жду новостей
Очень завышена оценка поэтому я поставил 1 звезду. История средняя "под пивас сойдёт", но капец как несбалансировна(на моменте когда нами которая училась фехтованию всего 2 года побеждает шанкса потому что она "превозмогает" я бросил). Кому нравится когда куча девочек учеников нагибает весь мир тому советую читать. Остальные лучше обойдите стороной или приготовьтесь выключать мозги и здравый смысл при прочтении
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This is a good One Piece AU fanfic, it has a very interesting concept and plot. Just the translation leaves much to be desired, and although one can still understand what's going on, it's not all that great, so take that into consideration if you want to read this fanfic. Now, the thing that frustrated me the most in this fanfic is the fact that the Gold List system never gave the MC something he used to enhance his own strength except once. Till chapter 432 (that is where I stopped reading) although he received many things, but he only actually used one thing to enhance his own strength, everything else he gave to his students... (While many others received and used many things from the system to enhance their strength). Personally for me, it was very frustrating to see everyone getting a whole lot stronger with the system and the MC stay at the same place. Sometimes it even felt like he wasn't the MC in this fanfic... 🤷 Also the MC is sometimes an idiot and acts illogically when doing things. (For instance, he used a resurrection card to revive a random person from his life at the cost of losing a level of his strength, why the hell he did something like?? Reviving a stranger while losing strength?? Even though at the end he didn't lose a part of his strength, he didn't know that before... You can only see stupid action like that in Chinese Fanfics...) There are no major plot holes that I could spot. So all in all, I will give this fanfic 4 stars in everything except its translation which get 2. (Although in my opinion the author made the Five Elders do many stupid things, their decision is very illogical sometimes. I know that in the anime they are very arrogant, but you can't say they are stupid...) Anyway, from what I could tell there are powers form many anime shows, I will list those I could spot but I'm sure I've missed some so if someone can complete the list it would be great. One Piece. Naruto. Bleach. Fate/Zero. Demon Slayer. Jojo bizarre adventure. Saint Seiya: Knights of the Zodiac. Dragon Ball Z. Digimon. Akame ga kill. Fairy tail. Avengers / MCU.
The One Piece arc was perfect in my opinion and I felt like there weren't many holes in the story so I really liked it. He left everyone's story pretty closed. Thank you for this work.
It's bad, for starters, the idea that the main character can't move around the world is nonsense. This is one piece! The essence of the world is adventures by sea. Yes, and this is a betrayal of girls, why all the girls are girls, and with a romantic bent. Is the author a preoccupied schoolboy? The exercises are becoming too strong and too easy.
Repeatative and boring... From the first chapter itself, the essence of this novel has been the same with little to no character development on MCs side.... Itsa good timepass read and the novel is also interesting but the novel has no substance
Мені сподобалась ця книга. Не маючи повного уявлення про світ Ван Піс, цю книгу варто прочитати використовуючи Інтернет для пошуку зображення, історії різних героїв. Й з того що я прочитав, можу сказати що історія перестала бути канонічною з появою Ріфана, але все одно має певну подібність з оригіналом, по наповненню. Плюс до цієї книги є те, що головний герой не є незайманим і має якісь почуття до протилежної статі.
It's been a few months when I finish read this book , it's was really a very antersting storie and a new idea (for me) , I don't like write a long reviews so I will stop her , hop you guys enjoyed when you read this book
This is an absolute dumpster fire, so terrible that critiquing it feels impossible; there's simply nothing to critique. It's a power fantasy devoid of originality, motive, or structure. The phrase "made in China" has never resonated with me more than it does now.
No one has done a proper review of the novel, and that's frustrating. It's a book that I really enjoyed reading. I read it until the end. I enjoyed reading it, good or bad, that's enough for me. Normally, I would give this novel a high score, but I gave up giving a high score due to the "translator's note" in chapter 235. (note attached.) My rating for this story is; Writing quality: 2, Stability of Updates: 5, Story Development: 3, Character Design: 2, World Background: 5(one piece). At some point the story starts to repeat itself. Mc makes the female character in a difficult situation his student and makes her the strongest. This situation repeats throughout the series. Thanks to the golden list broadcasting all over the world, MC and his students are always at the forefront. Mc is a hollow character. He is very strong but does not show any emotion. He teaches someone just because the system gives him the power to teach, but we have no idea why he wants to get stronger or why he is in the One Piece world. Anyway, there is no need to extend it. I enjoyed reading it, but I will give it a low grade because of the comment that annoyed me. (((It may have been written out of hatred or it may have been written with genuine consideration. In my opinion, deleting readers' comments by the translator is a disrespectful act.)))
Tbh this ff is good but at chap 234 his disciple mastered ultra instinct in 2 years like bro ultra instinct isnt that easy to master
All that I can say is that the idea is great but grammar is not but the updating stability is on point also at some points in the finfic the grammar gets so bad to the point that you don't now what's happening overall if bad grammar doesn't bother you then this is the finfic for you.
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This is boring, I haven't seen any real ecchi scene in 200 chapters, the reactions are too over the top even by anime standards. There is no story here, just reactions and stale commentary. I'm just done.
This Is definitely one of my favorite One Piece Fan Fic Novels, the only thing I didn't like was the lie of the romance tag. Granted I'm on 300 chapters into the 570 but there's actually zero romance and the only romance is one sided that the mc doesn't reciprocate at all. It makes me feel exhausted reading 300 chapters and feeling like no progress was made besides strength development from disciples. It's only more exhausting when you're expecting romance and even when the females are direct and straight up ask let me be your woman and he just ignores and goes oh look at the golden list, we will probably be on it.
He acquires many disciple but all of them are female. This series would have been the best if it doesn't have a mc, or even if their is one, it would have been great if there is no clear bias
didn't like how unfair the plot was against all the characters that were not associated with the mc
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It's good and all, but kinda sad that the Golden List only lasted for a short while, I mean, Zoro never got the chance to resurrect Kuina.
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this story was a nice chang÷ of pave from others I read. yes the characters become op fast but I feel it works well in the style provided
This is a good novel for spending time, although there's some out of character moment, its acceptable. You should try reading it
To be honest, before reading this story I didn't think that I would really like it. I've read stories about masters and disciples, and they're really annoying. Well the story I once read was a Chinese cultivation story so of course a lot of annoying things happened. that's why when i saw this story and it has the same theme which is MC who is a teacher and has students to train, i just thought that i might drop this story after less than 20 chapters. but the story is beyond my expectation, and i read it till the last chapter and am waiting for update
I'm on chapter 316 as I write this. The translation quality is average/high. In this fic the protagonist is very strong from the beginning (to the level of destroying planets), the premise is good and it's worth reading. The only problem is that the character "Im" in this novel is stupidly weak and nerfed. Other than that I would give it a 7/10.
the entire five hundred chapters are one story with different kind of list that doesnt make sense in the latest chapter this is the worse one piece fic I ever read
I finished reading the novel. Although it was kinda messy at least it was readable. MC is kinda the mastermind bigboss(Dojo Master)of the One Piece world with multiversal powers(training to be) /in use and minions(disciples) who dealt with worldly matters and even situational events(plot). Overall, a good read to pass time but not a nice time to understand the story. Thank you for this chapter and the previous ones too and for the work in translating it. Thank you! 🤛🏼😃👍🏼
I love this story and also the first one, I can not wait for the 3 story to come out
Честно говоря, до прочтения этой истории я не думала, что она мне действительно понравится. Я читал истории об учителях и учениках, и они меня очень раздражали. Ну, история, которую я однажды прочитал, была историей китайского совершенствования, поэтому, конечно, произошло много неприятных вещей. Вот почему, когда я увидел эту историю, и она имеет ту же тему: MC, который является учителем и у которого есть ученики, которых нужно обучать, я просто подумал, что могу бросить эту историю менее чем через 20 глав. но история превзошла мои ожидания, я прочитал ее до последней главы и жду новостей
Очень завышена оценка поэтому я поставил 1 звезду. История средняя "под пивас сойдёт", но капец как несбалансировна(на моменте когда нами которая училась фехтованию всего 2 года побеждает шанкса потому что она "превозмогает" я бросил). Кому нравится когда куча девочек учеников нагибает весь мир тому советую читать. Остальные лучше обойдите стороной или приготовьтесь выключать мозги и здравый смысл при прочтении
Reveal Spoiler This is a good One Piece AU fanfic, it has a very interesting concept and plot. Just the translation leaves much to be desired, and although one can still understand what's going on, it's not all that great, so take that into consideration if you want to read this fanfic. Now, the thing that frustrated me the most in this fanfic is the fact that the Gold List system never gave the MC something he used to enhance his own strength except once. Till chapter 432 (that is where I stopped reading) although he received many things, but he only actually used one thing to enhance his own strength, everything else he gave to his students... (While many others received and used many things from the system to enhance their strength). Personally for me, it was very frustrating to see everyone getting a whole lot stronger with the system and the MC stay at the same place. Sometimes it even felt like he wasn't the MC in this fanfic... 🤷 Also the MC is sometimes an idiot and acts illogically when doing things. (For instance, he used a resurrection card to revive a random person from his life at the cost of losing a level of his strength, why the hell he did something like?? Reviving a stranger while losing strength?? Even though at the end he didn't lose a part of his strength, he didn't know that before... You can only see stupid action like that in Chinese Fanfics...) There are no major plot holes that I could spot. So all in all, I will give this fanfic 4 stars in everything except its translation which get 2. (Although in my opinion the author made the Five Elders do many stupid things, their decision is very illogical sometimes. I know that in the anime they are very arrogant, but you can't say they are stupid...) Anyway, from what I could tell there are powers form many anime shows, I will list those I could spot but I'm sure I've missed some so if someone can complete the list it would be great. One Piece. Naruto. Bleach. Fate/Zero. Demon Slayer. Jojo bizarre adventure. Saint Seiya: Knights of the Zodiac. Dragon Ball Z. Digimon. Akame ga kill. Fairy tail. Avengers / MCU.
The One Piece arc was perfect in my opinion and I felt like there weren't many holes in the story so I really liked it. He left everyone's story pretty closed. Thank you for this work.
It's bad, for starters, the idea that the main character can't move around the world is nonsense. This is one piece! The essence of the world is adventures by sea. Yes, and this is a betrayal of girls, why all the girls are girls, and with a romantic bent. Is the author a preoccupied schoolboy? The exercises are becoming too strong and too easy.
Repeatative and boring... From the first chapter itself, the essence of this novel has been the same with little to no character development on MCs side.... Itsa good timepass read and the novel is also interesting but the novel has no substance
Мені сподобалась ця книга. Не маючи повного уявлення про світ Ван Піс, цю книгу варто прочитати використовуючи Інтернет для пошуку зображення, історії різних героїв. Й з того що я прочитав, можу сказати що історія перестала бути канонічною з появою Ріфана, але все одно має певну подібність з оригіналом, по наповненню. Плюс до цієї книги є те, що головний герой не є незайманим і має якісь почуття до протилежної статі.
It's been a few months when I finish read this book , it's was really a very antersting storie and a new idea (for me) , I don't like write a long reviews so I will stop her , hop you guys enjoyed when you read this book
This is an absolute dumpster fire, so terrible that critiquing it feels impossible; there's simply nothing to critique. It's a power fantasy devoid of originality, motive, or structure. The phrase "made in China" has never resonated with me more than it does now.
No one has done a proper review of the novel, and that's frustrating. It's a book that I really enjoyed reading. I read it until the end. I enjoyed reading it, good or bad, that's enough for me. Normally, I would give this novel a high score, but I gave up giving a high score due to the "translator's note" in chapter 235. (note attached.) My rating for this story is; Writing quality: 2, Stability of Updates: 5, Story Development: 3, Character Design: 2, World Background: 5(one piece). At some point the story starts to repeat itself. Mc makes the female character in a difficult situation his student and makes her the strongest. This situation repeats throughout the series. Thanks to the golden list broadcasting all over the world, MC and his students are always at the forefront. Mc is a hollow character. He is very strong but does not show any emotion. He teaches someone just because the system gives him the power to teach, but we have no idea why he wants to get stronger or why he is in the One Piece world. Anyway, there is no need to extend it. I enjoyed reading it, but I will give it a low grade because of the comment that annoyed me. (((It may have been written out of hatred or it may have been written with genuine consideration. In my opinion, deleting readers' comments by the translator is a disrespectful act.)))
Tbh this ff is good but at chap 234 his disciple mastered ultra instinct in 2 years like bro ultra instinct isnt that easy to master
All that I can say is that the idea is great but grammar is not but the updating stability is on point also at some points in the finfic the grammar gets so bad to the point that you don't now what's happening overall if bad grammar doesn't bother you then this is the finfic for you.
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This is boring, I haven't seen any real ecchi scene in 200 chapters, the reactions are too over the top even by anime standards. There is no story here, just reactions and stale commentary. I'm just done.
This Is definitely one of my favorite One Piece Fan Fic Novels, the only thing I didn't like was the lie of the romance tag. Granted I'm on 300 chapters into the 570 but there's actually zero romance and the only romance is one sided that the mc doesn't reciprocate at all. It makes me feel exhausted reading 300 chapters and feeling like no progress was made besides strength development from disciples. It's only more exhausting when you're expecting romance and even when the females are direct and straight up ask let me be your woman and he just ignores and goes oh look at the golden list, we will probably be on it.
He acquires many disciple but all of them are female. This series would have been the best if it doesn't have a mc, or even if their is one, it would have been great if there is no clear bias
didn't like how unfair the plot was against all the characters that were not associated with the mc
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It's good and all, but kinda sad that the Golden List only lasted for a short while, I mean, Zoro never got the chance to resurrect Kuina.
Reveal Spoiler this story was a nice chang÷ of pave from others I read. yes the characters become op fast but I feel it works well in the style provided
This is a good novel for spending time, although there's some out of character moment, its acceptable. You should try reading it
To be honest, before reading this story I didn't think that I would really like it. I've read stories about masters and disciples, and they're really annoying. Well the story I once read was a Chinese cultivation story so of course a lot of annoying things happened. that's why when i saw this story and it has the same theme which is MC who is a teacher and has students to train, i just thought that i might drop this story after less than 20 chapters. but the story is beyond my expectation, and i read it till the last chapter and am waiting for update