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Ron1n
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Good story. I read it from beginning to end. I especially liked that this story was completed. BUT this translation was SO confusing. For those that translated this story…thank you even if there were many errors. I seriously thought everyone were transvestites! Lol All I can say is I enjoyed this story. The ending was too rushed. All the villains were somewhat justified. Too many repetitive information. The main villain had pretty much a really strong plot armor but to end with unfinished and unjustified ending, completely disappointing.

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Alya3099

This book has so many similarities to the book 'Transmigrated as fat young miss', IDK which was posted first and the plot is different but the canteen confrontation is exactly the same with some words modified and competition too. Also she's a sick person, maybe it would be more believable if she took some medicine and exercised a little but from someone who got tired from just running a little (chapter 1) to fighting 3 healthy guys alone and injuring them (chapter 41) with any sort of training is completely unbelievable not to mention impossible.

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Helinita_Mandipol_7780

I'm satisfied with the character but translation a bit off.

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DaoistT7xk6N

I’m on chapter 259 and the fl is still fighting with the copycat who resembles her.I’m tired the story is very stagnant now for 100 choters it started out great butit just feels like filler chapters not to mention the never ending face slapping. So I’m dropping it what a waste of time

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Lau_riz
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Great book. Highly recommend Just hope pronouns and names be more consistent in the later chapters

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Sela_h
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Good book. I enjoyed the different plot line and that the main characters treat each other well Happy ending.

1yr
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DaoistnxVHdV

As is too frequently the case, the translation quality dropped significantly after the free read chapters.

1yr
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Daoist8fEkNg

I wanted to give more but the book was not edited properly, the development was good and the story line was standard young love. It was expensive though. All good

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Kerreymore

FL to kind instead of domineering with her background and tarnished her family reputation, haish...

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Ayleisha

Gender and names some times mixed up, loved it thank you

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Anntam22

some of the translation mix up the male and female terms, which can be confusing.

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Okwa_dat_Igbo_girl

great story. as long as you can ignore gender mix-ups and sometimes name mix-ups, you'll enjoy the book.

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Kimora_Tor

this is a must read book. Thanks to the author for this amazing story.

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Nyatriarch_98

I only managed to get up to chapter 75 and as much as I would enjoy this story the translation is just terrible after awhile. I hope with the fact this story's already completed this can get updated

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A3AJAGBE

Good plot from the beginning to the end.

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MissGahum

it's amazing. the plot is good . you wanted to reveal chapter by chapter.🤩

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XiaoNiLovesTea

This is a fairly stereotypical face-slapping romance, but with a few things that really make it stand out. One major positive is the ML--he is for once about the same age as the main character, and is not possessive or stalkerish but rather supportive and a friend. He and Yan Xi develop a real relationship based on relative equality in most important respects, which often feels rare in the genre. He suffers the same lack of alternative motivations beyond romantic interest in the main character that often challenges these stories, but it's relatively forgivable. The villainess of the story is the one with the cheat system whereas our main character has only her own intelligence and network and has to deal with it--which is honestly refreshing. And also supports some in-story references to the face-slapping web-novel genre in ways that are entertaining. Downsides: the translation (clearly MTL with perhaps some editing, suffers from the his/her he/she confusion); plenty of filler descriptions surrounding school web forums and other minor side activities; and the main character shares the occasional indifference or passivity that leads to length. That said: all in all an enjoyable read, and relatively short compared to many of the thousand plus chapter behemoths in the genre.

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Liw
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The author hast problems with grammar especially the pronouns are switched

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cheerfulEeyore

I've almost completed "reading" 200 chapters of this novel. I've had the opportunity to read this novel for 24 hours. I like the high-level plot - very different approach to a character given a second chance at life (not rebirth but dreamt about what could be) and character given a system (it wasn't the main character). Author was also sensible about romance for high schoolers; no one too overbearing, etc. What is most disappointing though is the quality of translation and editing. It was challenging to determine some of the intent and motivation of some characters because there were some parts that I couldn't understand; but I'm not sure if it's because the original work didn't do a good job depicting or translation was bad. This work has a lot of face slapping which I would have enjoyed more if quality was better. I would recommend if you don't have to spend to read.

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Daoistd4ZCwx

It is a book definitely worth reading, I finished whole story and I loved it. The story really draw me in, I simply couldnt stop reading. The main characters are smart and capable, the antagonists are annoying just enough and the storyline is smooth with not many twists. I definitely recommend this book.

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Readingishealing

Do read this story, you will love it. It is well written and a good time entertainment. I have completed it just today. I am gonna misss everyone

2yr
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Baba03angel

Love this story of rebirth vs system hack. though the so call "Protagonist" didn't deserve the system at all. it was a total waste. I'm so glad Yanyan withstood it all. All the male lead and support character sound so handsome. I want to be like Grandma Xi too, Huo Mingyu, you are my idol! A cool grandma indeed. Sit and watch the hot bod in the exercise room and enjoy the show!! 🥰😚😋😜

2yr
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H3101
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Great book!!! I just wish if there were more chapters in the end like their marriage and what happened after as well, the FL is powerful and smart which I like, and the ML in this book matches the FL perfectly

2yr
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Merje2022

Great read. Although some words were translated wrong, it still did not spoil the meaning

2yr
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Joerel_Tuvalles_3912

I like the storyline.so new and so interesting.i really recommend this to all readers . you must not gonna miss this because for sure, you will gladly like it.

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Abena_Gyabaah

AHHHHHHH! Why’d it end? I would’ve even read it for 3 years if that’s what it took to finish it. Heck I miss it already

2yr
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Anoscetia

The thing I liked about this is that it's refreshing. What I mean is, usually, when the FL is OP, the ML is usually a CEO. However, this one's ML is almost the same age as the FL. And in terms of intelligence and hidden identities, he doesn't lose to FL. Also, although both of them are genius and can be considered as OP, it is limited. There are things they didn't know, which made it more realistic (at least compared to some stories I've read). Basically, the story revolved around Chen Xiangxiang and her schemes then how Yan Xi counterattack it. Though CXX is like a cockroach that can't be killed, the story's not annoying (probably because I know that CXX isn't worthy as Yan Xi's rival). Also, the translation isn't good. But at least, not to the point of confusion. Just some names are translated in English, then misused pronouns and arrangement of the sentence. But it's still understandable anyway. Lastly, I really hope that there's more. Is it really the end? There's no extra chapters or side stories?

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Aanya_Jain_4663

I love a smart female lead who can play people with her power and intellect, I'm also interested in the story but for some reason, it feels like before the fl comes everybody's IQ is offline and they are just for the fl to play them at the palm of her hand. The fl's cancer medicine that she had to wait for 3 yrs for, is just randomly given by her father to the white lotus' mother, and her brother instantly becomes unfriendly toward the white lotus. Did he not understand before that the medicine was life-saving for the fl?? and her dad is like I'm sorry, she looks like you so I skipped you over to give her mother the cancer medicine. That just did it for me I couldn't continue reading it anymore This was a very refreshing premise and could have been so much better

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Novice_BG

Just finished the novel so here is my review (haven’t slept properly in 2 days so this review will be blunt and short): FL is strong and will stand her ground which I love, ML is very low key in achievements and basically respects and loves FL protection of him. Not much romance scenes between the two Other Characters were nothing new and typical style in this genre. I’m not going to go into the story much cause I deffo will end up slipping out a spoiler loool but it wasn’t a boring story but wasn’t wow either. Author rushed the ending so lowered my score a bit. 7/10⭐️

2yr
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Ron1n
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Good story. I read it from beginning to end. I especially liked that this story was completed. BUT this translation was SO confusing. For those that translated this story…thank you even if there were many errors. I seriously thought everyone were transvestites! Lol All I can say is I enjoyed this story. The ending was too rushed. All the villains were somewhat justified. Too many repetitive information. The main villain had pretty much a really strong plot armor but to end with unfinished and unjustified ending, completely disappointing.

3mth
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Alya3099

This book has so many similarities to the book 'Transmigrated as fat young miss', IDK which was posted first and the plot is different but the canteen confrontation is exactly the same with some words modified and competition too. Also she's a sick person, maybe it would be more believable if she took some medicine and exercised a little but from someone who got tired from just running a little (chapter 1) to fighting 3 healthy guys alone and injuring them (chapter 41) with any sort of training is completely unbelievable not to mention impossible.

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Helinita_Mandipol_7780

I'm satisfied with the character but translation a bit off.

1yr
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DaoistT7xk6N

I’m on chapter 259 and the fl is still fighting with the copycat who resembles her.I’m tired the story is very stagnant now for 100 choters it started out great butit just feels like filler chapters not to mention the never ending face slapping. So I’m dropping it what a waste of time

1yr
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Lau_riz
LV 14 Badge

Great book. Highly recommend Just hope pronouns and names be more consistent in the later chapters

1yr
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Sela_h
LV 15 Badge

Good book. I enjoyed the different plot line and that the main characters treat each other well Happy ending.

1yr
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DaoistnxVHdV

As is too frequently the case, the translation quality dropped significantly after the free read chapters.

1yr
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Daoist8fEkNg

I wanted to give more but the book was not edited properly, the development was good and the story line was standard young love. It was expensive though. All good

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1yr
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Kerreymore

FL to kind instead of domineering with her background and tarnished her family reputation, haish...

1yr
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Ayleisha

Gender and names some times mixed up, loved it thank you

1yr
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Anntam22

some of the translation mix up the male and female terms, which can be confusing.

1yr
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Okwa_dat_Igbo_girl

great story. as long as you can ignore gender mix-ups and sometimes name mix-ups, you'll enjoy the book.

1yr
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Kimora_Tor

this is a must read book. Thanks to the author for this amazing story.

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Nyatriarch_98

I only managed to get up to chapter 75 and as much as I would enjoy this story the translation is just terrible after awhile. I hope with the fact this story's already completed this can get updated

1yr
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A3AJAGBE

Good plot from the beginning to the end.

1yr
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MissGahum

it's amazing. the plot is good . you wanted to reveal chapter by chapter.🤩

1yr
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XiaoNiLovesTea

This is a fairly stereotypical face-slapping romance, but with a few things that really make it stand out. One major positive is the ML--he is for once about the same age as the main character, and is not possessive or stalkerish but rather supportive and a friend. He and Yan Xi develop a real relationship based on relative equality in most important respects, which often feels rare in the genre. He suffers the same lack of alternative motivations beyond romantic interest in the main character that often challenges these stories, but it's relatively forgivable. The villainess of the story is the one with the cheat system whereas our main character has only her own intelligence and network and has to deal with it--which is honestly refreshing. And also supports some in-story references to the face-slapping web-novel genre in ways that are entertaining. Downsides: the translation (clearly MTL with perhaps some editing, suffers from the his/her he/she confusion); plenty of filler descriptions surrounding school web forums and other minor side activities; and the main character shares the occasional indifference or passivity that leads to length. That said: all in all an enjoyable read, and relatively short compared to many of the thousand plus chapter behemoths in the genre.

1yr
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Liw
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The author hast problems with grammar especially the pronouns are switched

1yr
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cheerfulEeyore

I've almost completed "reading" 200 chapters of this novel. I've had the opportunity to read this novel for 24 hours. I like the high-level plot - very different approach to a character given a second chance at life (not rebirth but dreamt about what could be) and character given a system (it wasn't the main character). Author was also sensible about romance for high schoolers; no one too overbearing, etc. What is most disappointing though is the quality of translation and editing. It was challenging to determine some of the intent and motivation of some characters because there were some parts that I couldn't understand; but I'm not sure if it's because the original work didn't do a good job depicting or translation was bad. This work has a lot of face slapping which I would have enjoyed more if quality was better. I would recommend if you don't have to spend to read.

1yr
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Daoistd4ZCwx

It is a book definitely worth reading, I finished whole story and I loved it. The story really draw me in, I simply couldnt stop reading. The main characters are smart and capable, the antagonists are annoying just enough and the storyline is smooth with not many twists. I definitely recommend this book.

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Readingishealing

Do read this story, you will love it. It is well written and a good time entertainment. I have completed it just today. I am gonna misss everyone

2yr
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Baba03angel

Love this story of rebirth vs system hack. though the so call "Protagonist" didn't deserve the system at all. it was a total waste. I'm so glad Yanyan withstood it all. All the male lead and support character sound so handsome. I want to be like Grandma Xi too, Huo Mingyu, you are my idol! A cool grandma indeed. Sit and watch the hot bod in the exercise room and enjoy the show!! 🥰😚😋😜

2yr
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H3101
LV 15 Badge

Great book!!! I just wish if there were more chapters in the end like their marriage and what happened after as well, the FL is powerful and smart which I like, and the ML in this book matches the FL perfectly

2yr
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Merje2022

Great read. Although some words were translated wrong, it still did not spoil the meaning

2yr
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Joerel_Tuvalles_3912

I like the storyline.so new and so interesting.i really recommend this to all readers . you must not gonna miss this because for sure, you will gladly like it.

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Abena_Gyabaah

AHHHHHHH! Why’d it end? I would’ve even read it for 3 years if that’s what it took to finish it. Heck I miss it already

2yr
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Anoscetia

The thing I liked about this is that it's refreshing. What I mean is, usually, when the FL is OP, the ML is usually a CEO. However, this one's ML is almost the same age as the FL. And in terms of intelligence and hidden identities, he doesn't lose to FL. Also, although both of them are genius and can be considered as OP, it is limited. There are things they didn't know, which made it more realistic (at least compared to some stories I've read). Basically, the story revolved around Chen Xiangxiang and her schemes then how Yan Xi counterattack it. Though CXX is like a cockroach that can't be killed, the story's not annoying (probably because I know that CXX isn't worthy as Yan Xi's rival). Also, the translation isn't good. But at least, not to the point of confusion. Just some names are translated in English, then misused pronouns and arrangement of the sentence. But it's still understandable anyway. Lastly, I really hope that there's more. Is it really the end? There's no extra chapters or side stories?

2yr
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Aanya_Jain_4663

I love a smart female lead who can play people with her power and intellect, I'm also interested in the story but for some reason, it feels like before the fl comes everybody's IQ is offline and they are just for the fl to play them at the palm of her hand. The fl's cancer medicine that she had to wait for 3 yrs for, is just randomly given by her father to the white lotus' mother, and her brother instantly becomes unfriendly toward the white lotus. Did he not understand before that the medicine was life-saving for the fl?? and her dad is like I'm sorry, she looks like you so I skipped you over to give her mother the cancer medicine. That just did it for me I couldn't continue reading it anymore This was a very refreshing premise and could have been so much better

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Novice_BG

Just finished the novel so here is my review (haven’t slept properly in 2 days so this review will be blunt and short): FL is strong and will stand her ground which I love, ML is very low key in achievements and basically respects and loves FL protection of him. Not much romance scenes between the two Other Characters were nothing new and typical style in this genre. I’m not going to go into the story much cause I deffo will end up slipping out a spoiler loool but it wasn’t a boring story but wasn’t wow either. Author rushed the ending so lowered my score a bit. 7/10⭐️

2yr
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