Reviews of Marvel X DC: The Vongola Family by ZaHacker - Webnovel

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ZaHacker

Shameless author review 5 star review. And please point out some of my mistakes and please give some criticism so I can improve the story and my translation skills.

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Spelloyal

The fanfic is not bad, but we have some problems in the translation, mainly in some terms referring to KHR that the translator needs to correct before I give 5 stars. I'm a little used to MTL so I can enjoy reading even with these terms mistranslated, but I must admit that this certainly turns off many readers and would be a much more enjoyable read without this problem. Apart from that, we have other small problems in the translation that are easily acceptable and ignored when considering that it's a fanfic and it's free. I think it's a good place for the translator to hone his skills and I'm not going to drop stars for that. The fanfic itself is very good so far, despite being a Chinese fanfic it's not full of the nasty wuxia and xianxia cliches that these fanfics usually have and that's a big plus point. It's an enjoyable read and I recommend everyone to give it a try.

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Tyki_mikk

My fav book !!!! Seeing Decimo here makes me so happy that I'm finding people who have read and seen hitman reborn anime!!! The story is great !! I love the character interaction it doesn't feel bland!! every character is fleshed out so perfectly!! The background characters have eir own story, their own struggle which we rarely get to see !!! But my only problem is the update schedule the rest is great !! This fanfic is like hidden gem

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Cross_Ryuu

the vongolia are the strongest mafia and it is captured really well in this book

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_Sky_Silver_

I read it in mtl it's good sadly the author already dropped it.

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DarkDream

La peor decisión que ha cometido webnovel, deos casi todos los autores de fanfics se estan llendo a scribblehub o FF. dfghfg

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Knived

Super generic Chinese infested fanfic, Chinese people just dont know how to write good stories it seems they all feels the same no matter what gener. The plot is all over the place and its riddled with holes.

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Jaanu98

Good book entertaining also more chapters and can be made mainstream just don't be eunich Also no r rated stuff and steady development and good mc no spoils nice and good copy

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jcp1207

really very good, it has a lot of potential, of course there are things that need to be improved such as the quality of the writing among other small things. But without a doubt I liked the progression of the story, I will be supporting in future chapters, thanks for the work

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Saiyan_Of_God

Hahahahaha FINALLY someone has created a fanfic about THE MOST POWERFUL MAFIA FAMILY IN ALL OF ANIME, In my opinion only. I have been waiting for a fanfic like this for a loooong time where the VONGOLA FAMILY in Marvel DC universe crossover.#JUSTSAIYAN.

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Hajiko

Great story were one transmigrate to mavel world mixed with DC and gets a System were he needs to create his own vongola Familia only sadd thing is that the Original is on Hitarus after chapter 127

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Its_me_decimo24

I will give this 5 stars cause it's my favorite anime and manga. It's been a while that I found a hitman reborn fanfic.....[img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp][img=coins][img=exp]

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WintyLP

nice

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Jonatan_david

El fanfic no está mal, pero tiene algunos problemas en la traducción, principalmente en términos referentes a khr, pese a todo eso la recomiendo, casi una exelente lectura.

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Henrique_Paiao

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Tennouji_Kotarou

Katekyo Hitman Reborn deserves all the stars possible. The work is using a very interesting KHR system, I'm really looking forward to seeing this amazing series gain more views.

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Futile_Dream

I... loved the title.. that I subconsciously smiled.. I thought maybe... just maybe.. this one is different cause I.. Ive read too much marvel fanfics that I almost forgot the original story... Theres too much.. Naruto, Phantom Kid, Bleach, A Father, His girlfriend is either God king Hela or one of the most famous ones, Transformer combined with the first one, A broadcasting system, And many more.. And if by chance anyone knows a marvel fanfic (cause I know someone must have read more than me).. can you recommend it to me?

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Helios_Sol

so far I've loved it. this story reminds me of a hitman reborn crossover with dxd where the mc end ruling Romania but to my shame I forgot the name of it. so if anyone knows the name of the fanfic I was talking about can you give me a head ups with the name thank. I wish to reread it

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LEGENDARYDRAGON

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Over_Lord_9904

Good book 5/5 hope it’s not racists i am at chapter nineteen and it’s pretty good though watch out for the Rick roll on chapter nineteen though I don’t know if he is going to take it out on a later day

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CookieFighter

One of the few khr ff, so far it’s quite good, hope you can keep up the good work

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Redex933

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ZephyrZero

The pacing is good but the translation of the Reborn items are a bit off. It destroys the immersion because you'll be thinking what the is the mc talking about but, There's few Reborn fanfic so that's something to look forward to. Can't really give a high valuation of the character design and world as this is a fanfic.

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Project_Traveler

just found this novel ........ feeling good about this novel . . . . . . . . . . . .. . .. . .... . . . . . . .. . . . m m m m m . . . ... . . . .... .. . . . ... .... .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

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Viperino

its a great idea, but the writing need improvement. dialogue doesnt really make sense for the characters espcially when u consider age and circumstances, characters also feels shallow. flesh it out more and it'll be great.

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Excavelier

Lez gon! A KHR Fic! jsususudhddhdh,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,.,..,.,.,.,nj,.,j,.,k.,k,.,k,m,kx.,ks zk.,sk.,ks.,kz.,