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will clarify some things that may generate some doubts or misconceptions in this review (besides shamelessly giving me 5 stars). 1) It's the first time I write an original story, so the plot structure may seem messy sometimes (I'm not referring to the plot itself) but in how it generates rising action, I'm still learning but I'm constantly improving and I think that can be seen in more recent chapters. 2) My MC is a somewhat manipulative character and at first it may seem that he doesn't really love his harem like a second generation villain in a cultivation novel, but that's where the character development comes in, where I will also clarify something. Don't expect a super OP MC from the beginning, if so where would be the tension in his actions? 3) The lemons, yes there will be this type scenes, as you can see in the tag, but these will start by chapter 40+ being an approximation, it can be more or less. That would be basically all, if you have any other questions feel free to write in this review, I will answer as best I can.
author, did you drop this story? i hope not, because i loved it, i hope you write more chapters. it's rare to find this kind of stories
The mc is a b lol wth why did u think creating such a personality for the mc was good?
MC is pathetic and an idiot, he "knows" the story but somehow conviently "forgets" huge plot points of the story, and allows himself to be manipulated. Why would anyone want to read about such a trashy worthless MC.
It is a very good novel, with great potential. Only 2 things lower it. one The update frequency. and two I feel like the system is lacking. Apparently skills can't be earned through training, they can only be bought. I mean skills like cooking, boxing and others that he should have from his past life. and others of this life as art with daggers and noble etiquette. After faking so much he should have some acting skills, even if he's a novice. Another thing that you should take into account when giving abilities is the world he is in, for example when giving him martial arts it should be mainly those of the world he is in. Martial arts that use magic. Apart from the fact that certain explanations of the world are missing, for example the lineage and more details of the world. Something that you could do mini shorts with one of his magic and sword "teachers", who should have arrived when the mc was 10 years old but never arrived. PS: you should have dragged out Aria's infatuation phase a bit longer
It's a wonderful novel with an amazing setting but would love atleast a chapter weekly
This novel is good, its just on chapter 24 rather frustrated me so i will drop it for a while. From what i look that will be starting for MC changes to be the true MC who doesn't underestimate the world he lives in. Sometimes i don't like time skip because there will be times that we don't know how our MC build their character how much the naivety will shed or how much emotion that he will achieve. Overall this will be great novel so you all better donate your PS so this novel can have more chapters
The protagonist is pathetic he lets himself be manipulated by the female protagonist even though I know she is manipulating him like if she were the main protagonist I would even let it go. But who is the main protagonist is he and not her that's what makes me uncomfortable right this webnovel
This is a breath of fresh air from the subpar novels that plague this site. It is interesting with next to no grammar problems compared to the other novels here. If you like yanderes this is definetely for you
I love this novel and how twisted it is but it’s so funny I hope you can update it soon!!!
Loved the first few chapters it seemed like a breath of fresh air with a cold and calculation MC and FL but then MC just goes retard mode, risks both his and his sister's life for no reason, MC casually forgets an important event in the novel (Since it was a duke attacking one of the romance target's family, same with the dude trying to kill his shadow assassin), then randomly gets mad at how the shadow assassin clan works when they're meant to be expendable (They somewhat brainwash them but they're still people considering MC can raise his Shadow assassin's love for him) hate to see such a good potential novel go down the drain, considering permanently dropping it with how things were played out we just went from a smart and calculating MC to an absolute angry and stupid MC. Might read it later in the future perhaps and if I do and it gets better I'll update my review
The novel is ok i have not noticed a siNgle grammer mistake. the main problem of the Novel is the MC. I was enjoying the novel at first but the mc became so dumb that it became hard to read. He acts like a child and ingnores the advise of others even tho he has the mind of a 22 year old. The sister is a well written character and intelligent but the MC often just ingores her for dumb reasons. I dont really see the direction the author is trying to go but ill put the novel on hopd for now and return when there are more chapters.
Thank you AUTHOR-SAN for your Hardworking Story. This Book is Amazing. The Character Development part is good. Characters are good they try to help each other in different Situations. And as I also wanted to write something like this this is way better and Great. Like this Book so much Thank you AUTHOR-SAN for your Hardworking Story.
i feel like i review it but meh its 5/4.8 ======== utfv46nt5kei5 24w2u4w24wuaqar itevgut3yca8c1 js5w 87acqg7qg6d7x2z2w8i stw98cw9zz8a1c7uth
Personally just not in my preference. 🫤 I prefer when the main character is the only one transmigrated, but it was still a pretty good story, so I reviewed it anyway.
author can you please explain on the mc's sister and kind a confused confused about her it's a great story I think I am getting addicted like I was addicted to another story but they kept repeated the chapters after 87 chapter but with a different name and number
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it just totally fit my type, 5/5 thanks for your work, keep it going <3 [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
need more chapter, im addict................................................................................................................................
its good novel i want more chapter and im in chapter 5 is there lemon scene?...................................................................
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Pretty good novel but the rate at which the author is updating, makes me quite concerned.[img=update][img=update] ahhhhh this word limit
IT IS A GOOD NOVEL[img=recomendar][img=recomendar] I HOPE FOR MORE CHAPTERS :) _____________________________________________________________
Your novel is extremely interesting. You have a good world background and the character talks as if they're alive. Can't say if the stability of updates is good but it has an amazing story development.
Great novel, Top Writings quality, truly enjoyed reading that novel, all information are given in time there isn't info dump well at least don't feel like that. When 2 characters speak its fluid. The only thing that haven't been clear wa when the sister say there is 3 capture target. She means close to them there is 3. The only reason I didn't put full 5 star is because of the delay between chapters I know that's due to irl matter and it's completely understandable /normal. I will definitely continue reading that novel many thanks for yours amazing work.
will clarify some things that may generate some doubts or misconceptions in this review (besides shamelessly giving me 5 stars). 1) It's the first time I write an original story, so the plot structure may seem messy sometimes (I'm not referring to the plot itself) but in how it generates rising action, I'm still learning but I'm constantly improving and I think that can be seen in more recent chapters. 2) My MC is a somewhat manipulative character and at first it may seem that he doesn't really love his harem like a second generation villain in a cultivation novel, but that's where the character development comes in, where I will also clarify something. Don't expect a super OP MC from the beginning, if so where would be the tension in his actions? 3) The lemons, yes there will be this type scenes, as you can see in the tag, but these will start by chapter 40+ being an approximation, it can be more or less. That would be basically all, if you have any other questions feel free to write in this review, I will answer as best I can.
author, did you drop this story? i hope not, because i loved it, i hope you write more chapters. it's rare to find this kind of stories
The mc is a b lol wth why did u think creating such a personality for the mc was good?
MC is pathetic and an idiot, he "knows" the story but somehow conviently "forgets" huge plot points of the story, and allows himself to be manipulated. Why would anyone want to read about such a trashy worthless MC.
It is a very good novel, with great potential. Only 2 things lower it. one The update frequency. and two I feel like the system is lacking. Apparently skills can't be earned through training, they can only be bought. I mean skills like cooking, boxing and others that he should have from his past life. and others of this life as art with daggers and noble etiquette. After faking so much he should have some acting skills, even if he's a novice. Another thing that you should take into account when giving abilities is the world he is in, for example when giving him martial arts it should be mainly those of the world he is in. Martial arts that use magic. Apart from the fact that certain explanations of the world are missing, for example the lineage and more details of the world. Something that you could do mini shorts with one of his magic and sword "teachers", who should have arrived when the mc was 10 years old but never arrived. PS: you should have dragged out Aria's infatuation phase a bit longer
It's a wonderful novel with an amazing setting but would love atleast a chapter weekly
This novel is good, its just on chapter 24 rather frustrated me so i will drop it for a while. From what i look that will be starting for MC changes to be the true MC who doesn't underestimate the world he lives in. Sometimes i don't like time skip because there will be times that we don't know how our MC build their character how much the naivety will shed or how much emotion that he will achieve. Overall this will be great novel so you all better donate your PS so this novel can have more chapters
The protagonist is pathetic he lets himself be manipulated by the female protagonist even though I know she is manipulating him like if she were the main protagonist I would even let it go. But who is the main protagonist is he and not her that's what makes me uncomfortable right this webnovel
This is a breath of fresh air from the subpar novels that plague this site. It is interesting with next to no grammar problems compared to the other novels here. If you like yanderes this is definetely for you
I love this novel and how twisted it is but it’s so funny I hope you can update it soon!!!
Loved the first few chapters it seemed like a breath of fresh air with a cold and calculation MC and FL but then MC just goes retard mode, risks both his and his sister's life for no reason, MC casually forgets an important event in the novel (Since it was a duke attacking one of the romance target's family, same with the dude trying to kill his shadow assassin), then randomly gets mad at how the shadow assassin clan works when they're meant to be expendable (They somewhat brainwash them but they're still people considering MC can raise his Shadow assassin's love for him) hate to see such a good potential novel go down the drain, considering permanently dropping it with how things were played out we just went from a smart and calculating MC to an absolute angry and stupid MC. Might read it later in the future perhaps and if I do and it gets better I'll update my review
The novel is ok i have not noticed a siNgle grammer mistake. the main problem of the Novel is the MC. I was enjoying the novel at first but the mc became so dumb that it became hard to read. He acts like a child and ingnores the advise of others even tho he has the mind of a 22 year old. The sister is a well written character and intelligent but the MC often just ingores her for dumb reasons. I dont really see the direction the author is trying to go but ill put the novel on hopd for now and return when there are more chapters.
Thank you AUTHOR-SAN for your Hardworking Story. This Book is Amazing. The Character Development part is good. Characters are good they try to help each other in different Situations. And as I also wanted to write something like this this is way better and Great. Like this Book so much Thank you AUTHOR-SAN for your Hardworking Story.
i feel like i review it but meh its 5/4.8 ======== utfv46nt5kei5 24w2u4w24wuaqar itevgut3yca8c1 js5w 87acqg7qg6d7x2z2w8i stw98cw9zz8a1c7uth
Personally just not in my preference. 🫤 I prefer when the main character is the only one transmigrated, but it was still a pretty good story, so I reviewed it anyway.
author can you please explain on the mc's sister and kind a confused confused about her it's a great story I think I am getting addicted like I was addicted to another story but they kept repeated the chapters after 87 chapter but with a different name and number
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need more chapter, im addict................................................................................................................................
its good novel i want more chapter and im in chapter 5 is there lemon scene?...................................................................
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Pretty good novel but the rate at which the author is updating, makes me quite concerned.[img=update][img=update] ahhhhh this word limit
IT IS A GOOD NOVEL[img=recomendar][img=recomendar] I HOPE FOR MORE CHAPTERS :) _____________________________________________________________
Your novel is extremely interesting. You have a good world background and the character talks as if they're alive. Can't say if the stability of updates is good but it has an amazing story development.
Great novel, Top Writings quality, truly enjoyed reading that novel, all information are given in time there isn't info dump well at least don't feel like that. When 2 characters speak its fluid. The only thing that haven't been clear wa when the sister say there is 3 capture target. She means close to them there is 3. The only reason I didn't put full 5 star is because of the delay between chapters I know that's due to irl matter and it's completely understandable /normal. I will definitely continue reading that novel many thanks for yours amazing work.