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tried reading multiple times. the story feels like it just keeps jumping around, and the mc is just not it.
Give you a bad review cause youre clickbaiting with the bleach art when the story doesnt even involve the bleach world (from what was said in description).
This is one of the worst stories I've ever read, It starts out interesting, but the character mostly gets lost along the way and becomes simply idiotic, stupid and doesn't match his initial personality, MC studied more than 5/6 years of his life in a military camp, but he has no discipline at all and is just a stupid person. He himself said that he only lost the military games 3 times and it was only when all the students at the military camp got together against him, but he was beaten by a simple Bully from a normal school. I tried a lot to read this story as the idea is very good, but it doesn't work, I dropped it
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What do you expect from a thief. This is a stolen work that was GOOGLE translated from spanish from here, wâttpâd côm/story/210912151-esto-no-es-marvel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The plot doesn't exist every new chapter or more like every 5 paragraph a new character is introduced. I don't know y he isn't working hard to get stronger instead he is chasing girls
Fanfic marvel... DC... 🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
lol sorry bro but I don't like how the MC is a dog-liking fool for heroes and follows Spider-Man like it's his duty... not only that he's way too passive and submissive towards his girls. he should have moved out of Aunt May's place as soon as he started bringing home girls to avoid May being an influencer in his relationships.
The idea is great, but the grammar is horrible. The Mc development is the worst, as he only kisses girls and doesnt have a bit of respect for himself. No logic in romance, and hole story focus on how mc goes around finding beautiful girls to to kiss.
I need to be honest. It Could've been a good novel if only the grammar is fixed i tried reading up to 40+ chapters and I can say it was good but the only problem is the grammar which kept messing up the genders and how the monologues are somehow mixed up.
mc is already being beaten with the intent to kill but he still doesn't fight with the same intensity of cruelty... it's annoying he looks like a pushover
I'm sorry this was a headache that was unnecessary. Too many simple spelling errors that could be fixed with a simple read over. Really let's keep changing the pronouns for more than half of the characters while misspelling Pete to pet.
is this even your book? because I think I have read this from wolfate and the Portuguese title is esto no es marvel? bro that is not so ethical if is not yours.
Don't fall for other review this is sh**, it is only slightly above really really bad Chinese one.
The story is good but the writing quality is not, author you should work on your grammar and try to improve this fanfic writing quality, and I guarantee that this story will become more entertaining.
after seeing a lot and i mean a lot of people complaining in the reviews section of this novels supposedly horrendous grammar, i just really cant help but asking the truly BIG question in the room........ Does the author improve on his grammar or not? cause if not then i'm sorry but this really isn't gonna be easy on us, i'm saying all this because unlike MTLs this isn't just some translated novel no, this is a web novel fanfic which means IT CAN IMPROVE=better grammar. guys i know that its pretty annoying to make sense of everything but if the story is good and the only issue is grammar then there really shouldn't be much of a problem here right? oh and before i leave i kinda forgot to mention how i haven't read the story yet so you probably shouldn't listen to what i just said. sorry for wasting your time and i am not sorry at all bye suckers[img=recommend]
The biggest problem I always have with this type of novel is the crossover of universes, the story always ends badly because they don't know how to include characters and the more characters appear, the more difficult it is to give a good introduction/story to that character, and how complicated it is. It becomes the planet of history even for the author himself, it is difficult to make these stories just indulge in one universe and then make another novel from the other universe that you had in mind to include.
Meh.death to all systems😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
The review section is on fire. But the quality of this work is ash. Even the edited part of the work is ashen waste. I can confirm all the criticism is true. Author cannot handle the truth. He either lashes out or be hyper defensive. One time he flat-out said something like if the reviewer did not like his work then, they should not read it. BTW is this author ashamed to a Chinese? Why he set his location in India?Anyhow WQ, SD, CD and World background are all 1 star. Update Stability is 4 star.
its so bad that i cant get past ch 5. i am regretting for even trying to read this.
The grammar is horrible the pacing is ok very little world building inconsistent spelling overall not worth the read
the story had readable Grammer it wasn't terrible but every conversation or interaction with other characters felt to easy you can tell this writer is either new or doesn't write that much. it's a great story idea love that but the way it's being implemented is just not for me
character has too much hero complex that it hinders most of his development and story plot doest make senses its all jungle up, and when he got a third life he still has that hero complex and just being idiot by taking all slow when his life in the lime
story doesn't flow terrible grammar even after the rewrite and almost everyone is totally idiotic
Eu estava gostando aí chegou o arco de RWBY e ficou incrivelmente massante e chato, perdi aquela alegria quando lia os capítulos antes........................................
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tried reading multiple times. the story feels like it just keeps jumping around, and the mc is just not it.
Give you a bad review cause youre clickbaiting with the bleach art when the story doesnt even involve the bleach world (from what was said in description).
This is one of the worst stories I've ever read, It starts out interesting, but the character mostly gets lost along the way and becomes simply idiotic, stupid and doesn't match his initial personality, MC studied more than 5/6 years of his life in a military camp, but he has no discipline at all and is just a stupid person. He himself said that he only lost the military games 3 times and it was only when all the students at the military camp got together against him, but he was beaten by a simple Bully from a normal school. I tried a lot to read this story as the idea is very good, but it doesn't work, I dropped it
Reveal Spoiler What do you expect from a thief. This is a stolen work that was GOOGLE translated from spanish from here, wâttpâd côm/story/210912151-esto-no-es-marvel [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
The plot doesn't exist every new chapter or more like every 5 paragraph a new character is introduced. I don't know y he isn't working hard to get stronger instead he is chasing girls
Fanfic marvel... DC... 🤮 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
lol sorry bro but I don't like how the MC is a dog-liking fool for heroes and follows Spider-Man like it's his duty... not only that he's way too passive and submissive towards his girls. he should have moved out of Aunt May's place as soon as he started bringing home girls to avoid May being an influencer in his relationships.
The idea is great, but the grammar is horrible. The Mc development is the worst, as he only kisses girls and doesnt have a bit of respect for himself. No logic in romance, and hole story focus on how mc goes around finding beautiful girls to to kiss.
I need to be honest. It Could've been a good novel if only the grammar is fixed i tried reading up to 40+ chapters and I can say it was good but the only problem is the grammar which kept messing up the genders and how the monologues are somehow mixed up.
mc is already being beaten with the intent to kill but he still doesn't fight with the same intensity of cruelty... it's annoying he looks like a pushover
I'm sorry this was a headache that was unnecessary. Too many simple spelling errors that could be fixed with a simple read over. Really let's keep changing the pronouns for more than half of the characters while misspelling Pete to pet.
is this even your book? because I think I have read this from wolfate and the Portuguese title is esto no es marvel? bro that is not so ethical if is not yours.
Don't fall for other review this is sh**, it is only slightly above really really bad Chinese one.
The story is good but the writing quality is not, author you should work on your grammar and try to improve this fanfic writing quality, and I guarantee that this story will become more entertaining.
after seeing a lot and i mean a lot of people complaining in the reviews section of this novels supposedly horrendous grammar, i just really cant help but asking the truly BIG question in the room........ Does the author improve on his grammar or not? cause if not then i'm sorry but this really isn't gonna be easy on us, i'm saying all this because unlike MTLs this isn't just some translated novel no, this is a web novel fanfic which means IT CAN IMPROVE=better grammar. guys i know that its pretty annoying to make sense of everything but if the story is good and the only issue is grammar then there really shouldn't be much of a problem here right? oh and before i leave i kinda forgot to mention how i haven't read the story yet so you probably shouldn't listen to what i just said. sorry for wasting your time and i am not sorry at all bye suckers[img=recommend]
The biggest problem I always have with this type of novel is the crossover of universes, the story always ends badly because they don't know how to include characters and the more characters appear, the more difficult it is to give a good introduction/story to that character, and how complicated it is. It becomes the planet of history even for the author himself, it is difficult to make these stories just indulge in one universe and then make another novel from the other universe that you had in mind to include.
Meh.death to all systems😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒😒
The review section is on fire. But the quality of this work is ash. Even the edited part of the work is ashen waste. I can confirm all the criticism is true. Author cannot handle the truth. He either lashes out or be hyper defensive. One time he flat-out said something like if the reviewer did not like his work then, they should not read it. BTW is this author ashamed to a Chinese? Why he set his location in India?Anyhow WQ, SD, CD and World background are all 1 star. Update Stability is 4 star.
its so bad that i cant get past ch 5. i am regretting for even trying to read this.
The grammar is horrible the pacing is ok very little world building inconsistent spelling overall not worth the read
the story had readable Grammer it wasn't terrible but every conversation or interaction with other characters felt to easy you can tell this writer is either new or doesn't write that much. it's a great story idea love that but the way it's being implemented is just not for me
character has too much hero complex that it hinders most of his development and story plot doest make senses its all jungle up, and when he got a third life he still has that hero complex and just being idiot by taking all slow when his life in the lime
story doesn't flow terrible grammar even after the rewrite and almost everyone is totally idiotic
Eu estava gostando aí chegou o arco de RWBY e ficou incrivelmente massante e chato, perdi aquela alegria quando lia os capítulos antes........................................
bro no one cares about peter parker and you making him seem all that stupid idea