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Hello! Author here, but you can just call my Kydul. This is my original novel, made on my old account, but I’m transferring it to this account. I hope you all like it, it is my best work. At least I think. But I would like to here what you think, so leave comments and reviews telling me what I can improve on or do better. Also, if there are any questions, I will be happy to answer them. Please enjoy! Kydul
I really wanna keep reading this but I don't wanna be stupid if I did that most of the characters are more beta shonen that you don't wanna watch it don't even to read it , the power of the mc is op but he is too stupid to use it or the author don't have an imagination and most of the characters like that, even the gods that they suppose to be smarter because they at less they lived over a millions year but the get anger from just a word of a Weak human, and even when they knew he has potentials they want to kill him because they think he could be dangerous on the future, and the emotions of the characters like they don't even know what suppose to feel it, and back to the MC he talks to beings that they could kill him with blink like he is untouchable, and doesn't even make me talk about his dreams like someone had lived on room and watch anime without having any enemies, when the reason of the reason for his death, his father after he killed his girlfriend this novel could never be famous without rewrite it
Hello! Author here, but you can just call my Kydul. This is my original novel, made on my old account, but I’m transferring it to this account. I hope you all like it, it is my best work. At least I think. But I would like to here what you think, so leave comments and reviews telling me what I can improve on or do better. Also, if there are any questions, I will be happy to answer them. Please enjoy! Kydul
I really wanna keep reading this but I don't wanna be stupid if I did that most of the characters are more beta shonen that you don't wanna watch it don't even to read it , the power of the mc is op but he is too stupid to use it or the author don't have an imagination and most of the characters like that, even the gods that they suppose to be smarter because they at less they lived over a millions year but the get anger from just a word of a Weak human, and even when they knew he has potentials they want to kill him because they think he could be dangerous on the future, and the emotions of the characters like they don't even know what suppose to feel it, and back to the MC he talks to beings that they could kill him with blink like he is untouchable, and doesn't even make me talk about his dreams like someone had lived on room and watch anime without having any enemies, when the reason of the reason for his death, his father after he killed his girlfriend this novel could never be famous without rewrite it