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this is really one of the best one piece fanfic LOL fanfic end's PERFECT! love that story <3 MC work hard for his power + no harem ))) + good OC like Oda did in main story!
Good shit man it made me wanna drop it sometimes but at the end I donβt regret it was a fun ride
This story deserves 5 stars, nothing less. Beautifully done. I enjoyed it to filled. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm giving 5 stars because in my opinion, even if their are a couple things that could do better, like the first meeting of the love interest, or maybe a statement here or there that would need extra context to understand completely, the rest of it is actually one of the best I've read. not THE best, but definitely up there. and it's actually reached completion instead of being dropped, or just left unfinished and forgotten. my only complaint is it's only 30 chapters. so I can't enjoy it for longer. my advice for new readers that see my comment, go into this after throwing your bias thoughts out, and Don't project your thoughts and ideals on the characters. just read it and go with the flow. otherwise your gonna do nothing but complain because you aren't rewatching the anime or rereading the manga. the canon is there, but it is forever changed. so don't go into this expecting to see canon events, or canon characters being too important. they show up, they have interactions, and they have conflict, but the story isn't about them, it's about the mc.
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Loved it. Honestly a short but great read. Interesting characters and an interesting twist at the end. Also love how you were able to build your own story out of an existing plot unlike most people that just follow cannon while saying βitβs to protect his future knowledgeβ. My ONLY complaint? Bro this story has some really weird readers, like literal incels who find being with a woman who got wrapped(dunno if the word is censored) is disgusting because she is βusedβ. I was just baffled reading some of the comments. Thanks for the great story, looking forward to more in the future.
Π§Π΅ΡΡ ΠΏΠΎΠ±Π΅ΡΠΈ, ΡΡΠΎ Π±ΡΠ»ΠΎ ΠΏΡΠ΅ΠΊΡΠ°ΡΠ½ΠΎ! Π₯ΠΎΡΡ ΡΡΠΎΡ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊ Π²ΡΡΠ΅Π» Π²Π΅ΡΡΠΌΠ° ΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΡΠΊΠΈΠΌ, Ρ ΠΏΡΠΎΡΡΠ» Π΅Π³ΠΎ Π·Π°Π»ΠΏΠΎΠΌ, Π±ΡΠΊΠ²Π°Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ Π½Π° ΠΎΠ΄Π½ΠΎΠΌ Π΄ΡΡ Π°Π½ΠΈΠΈ. Π―ΡΠΊΠΈΠΉ, Π΄ΠΈΠ½Π°ΠΌΠΈΡΠ½ΡΠΉ, Ρ Π²ΠΏΠΎΠ»Π½Π΅ ΠΏΡΠΈΠ»ΠΈΡΠ½ΡΠΌ ΡΡΠΆΠ΅ΡΠΎΠΌ. ΠΠΎΠ»ΡΡΠΈΠ» ΠΈΡΡΠΈΠ½Π½ΠΎΠ΅ ΡΠ΄ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠ»ΡΡΡΠ²ΠΈΠ΅, ΡΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π²Π°ΠΌ Π·Π° ΡΡΠΎ.
This is quite the pastime. Although the snail paced beginning and rushed ending were the weakest part of the fic for me. The Lycan lore and DF also didn't transition seamlessly. Author could just make him absorb part of a Paramecia and Logia's DF since his final form is a Winged-Wolf cloaked with lightning. Perfect combination of Goro Goro no mi and Feather Feather fruit. There were lots of storyline thrown out the window due to the rushed ending. I do still enjoy this so my final score would be 3.8
A great story, though quite short and sometines not believable with Ina advancing as fast as Lupin even before she got her devil fruit. But overall I enjoyed it a lot
Hello God of Freedom and fellow readers.I just wanted to leave some of my thoughts and emotions after finishing this story.I found you from your other ongoing novel , "The Wanderer." I was truly impressed by your writing style and character development that I decided to see what else you had gifted the Webnovel platform with. I was not disappointed. This is the first of your completed novels that I have read and by no means will be the last. I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. Being a fan of One Piece fanfictions, I admit I went into this novel comparing yours to the rest of them. I was surprised by the different approach you used. It was a perfect balance of a slow approach yet not too slow, an emotional background and basis upon which the MC reacted to events, and a satisfying romance that left nothing to be desired and was justified in various ways throughout the book. I thank you for giving me a wonderful read, and I hope you continue with the amazing writing. I will continue to support your future endeavors on this platform.Cheers!
I've recently been watching one piece and Im' thankful!Thank you author sama for this masterpiece π₯³ππ
A breath of fresh air, in the category of transmigration. Having the tag overpowered, I knew the story should be rushed, and the way it was done was very good. None of usual shenanigans like bad grammar, repeated lines, prolonged fight scenes, ... found. And the way the story was concluded, was splendid. Kudos man! π I wonder why the story is hard to find. It took me a lot of filters to find this one. Thanks, may you have a great day!
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A good fanfiction novel in One Piece universe. I kinda enjoyed this story since the plot was good and the MC stayed true to himself without any deviation from his personality throughout the story. Also the grammar was without problems which is something I consider a must when reading... The only thing I find regrettable is that the story is too short and without much interaction with the Renault original characters and the straw hats. All in all I highly recommend this to everyone who likes the gender.
An absolute joy to read even when I had misgivings about its short length I was definitely proven wrong.
This is definitely a good story with good writing and character development, but I just can't handle romance unless it's added to the story at a later date, that way I'm already invested in the story and can ignore it, I always get this feeling in my chest whenever I read romance, it's like something is draining away or making my heart heavy, It's probably because I don't have a love life.
To those who hesitate to read because short chapter, try it. You won't regret it.
TEMPORARY REVIEW Question: Since this only has 30 chapters, are the chapters at least long?
the best one piece fan fiction there is, I hope I can find other ff that can top yours, Thanks for writing this fiction
un pure chef d'oeuvre , je le conseille vivement je sais pas pourquoi un tel chef d'oeuvre est restΓ© cachΓ©e aussi longtemps pour tous les fans de one piece je vous le conseille vivement
At first the story progression is slow, he uses up like 10+ chapters for the first 8 years of the MC's life. So it worried me how the story was going to work out considering the low chapter amount. However, not long after it began to pick up and move forward. Although if you want the full picture of the story you need to pay attention and read all of it, can't skip any of the chapters or you will miss something. Once the story picks up, some interesting changes occur and unlike others that pick the same old love interests, this one has an OC Love and it makes it that much better. There were many times where things happened or the MC's decisions felt very wrong, but it all worked out really well in the end. I will definitely reread this story again. I didn't find this until after it had already been completed, so I can say whether or not the updates had stability, but the grammar overall isn't bad, some grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing egregious enough to make me want to immediately remove it from my library. The overall ending was quite good, compared to many fics that don't even get an ending and some that get endings that you would like to ring the Author's neck for writing, this is by far one of the better ones. I left a lot of shitty comments while I was reading this story, but I wanted to come here after finishing it and leave a review, because even though there were times I disliked very much, it was still a great story. Thanks Author-san for a Great Story.
this is really one of the best one piece fanfic LOL fanfic end's PERFECT! love that story <3 MC work hard for his power + no harem ))) + good OC like Oda did in main story!
Good shit man it made me wanna drop it sometimes but at the end I donβt regret it was a fun ride
This story deserves 5 stars, nothing less. Beautifully done. I enjoyed it to filled. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm giving 5 stars because in my opinion, even if their are a couple things that could do better, like the first meeting of the love interest, or maybe a statement here or there that would need extra context to understand completely, the rest of it is actually one of the best I've read. not THE best, but definitely up there. and it's actually reached completion instead of being dropped, or just left unfinished and forgotten. my only complaint is it's only 30 chapters. so I can't enjoy it for longer. my advice for new readers that see my comment, go into this after throwing your bias thoughts out, and Don't project your thoughts and ideals on the characters. just read it and go with the flow. otherwise your gonna do nothing but complain because you aren't rewatching the anime or rereading the manga. the canon is there, but it is forever changed. so don't go into this expecting to see canon events, or canon characters being too important. they show up, they have interactions, and they have conflict, but the story isn't about them, it's about the mc.
ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππreally love it
Loved it. Honestly a short but great read. Interesting characters and an interesting twist at the end. Also love how you were able to build your own story out of an existing plot unlike most people that just follow cannon while saying βitβs to protect his future knowledgeβ. My ONLY complaint? Bro this story has some really weird readers, like literal incels who find being with a woman who got wrapped(dunno if the word is censored) is disgusting because she is βusedβ. I was just baffled reading some of the comments. Thanks for the great story, looking forward to more in the future.
Π§Π΅ΡΡ ΠΏΠΎΠ±Π΅ΡΠΈ, ΡΡΠΎ Π±ΡΠ»ΠΎ ΠΏΡΠ΅ΠΊΡΠ°ΡΠ½ΠΎ! Π₯ΠΎΡΡ ΡΡΠΎΡ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊ Π²ΡΡΠ΅Π» Π²Π΅ΡΡΠΌΠ° ΠΊΠΎΡΠΎΡΠΊΠΈΠΌ, Ρ ΠΏΡΠΎΡΡΠ» Π΅Π³ΠΎ Π·Π°Π»ΠΏΠΎΠΌ, Π±ΡΠΊΠ²Π°Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ Π½Π° ΠΎΠ΄Π½ΠΎΠΌ Π΄ΡΡ Π°Π½ΠΈΠΈ. Π―ΡΠΊΠΈΠΉ, Π΄ΠΈΠ½Π°ΠΌΠΈΡΠ½ΡΠΉ, Ρ Π²ΠΏΠΎΠ»Π½Π΅ ΠΏΡΠΈΠ»ΠΈΡΠ½ΡΠΌ ΡΡΠΆΠ΅ΡΠΎΠΌ. ΠΠΎΠ»ΡΡΠΈΠ» ΠΈΡΡΠΈΠ½Π½ΠΎΠ΅ ΡΠ΄ΠΎΠ²ΠΎΠ»ΡΡΡΠ²ΠΈΠ΅, ΡΠΏΠ°ΡΠΈΠ±ΠΎ Π²Π°ΠΌ Π·Π° ΡΡΠΎ.
This is quite the pastime. Although the snail paced beginning and rushed ending were the weakest part of the fic for me. The Lycan lore and DF also didn't transition seamlessly. Author could just make him absorb part of a Paramecia and Logia's DF since his final form is a Winged-Wolf cloaked with lightning. Perfect combination of Goro Goro no mi and Feather Feather fruit. There were lots of storyline thrown out the window due to the rushed ending. I do still enjoy this so my final score would be 3.8
A great story, though quite short and sometines not believable with Ina advancing as fast as Lupin even before she got her devil fruit. But overall I enjoyed it a lot
Hello God of Freedom and fellow readers.I just wanted to leave some of my thoughts and emotions after finishing this story.I found you from your other ongoing novel , "The Wanderer." I was truly impressed by your writing style and character development that I decided to see what else you had gifted the Webnovel platform with. I was not disappointed. This is the first of your completed novels that I have read and by no means will be the last. I thoroughly enjoyed this novel. Being a fan of One Piece fanfictions, I admit I went into this novel comparing yours to the rest of them. I was surprised by the different approach you used. It was a perfect balance of a slow approach yet not too slow, an emotional background and basis upon which the MC reacted to events, and a satisfying romance that left nothing to be desired and was justified in various ways throughout the book. I thank you for giving me a wonderful read, and I hope you continue with the amazing writing. I will continue to support your future endeavors on this platform.Cheers!
I've recently been watching one piece and Im' thankful!Thank you author sama for this masterpiece π₯³ππ
A breath of fresh air, in the category of transmigration. Having the tag overpowered, I knew the story should be rushed, and the way it was done was very good. None of usual shenanigans like bad grammar, repeated lines, prolonged fight scenes, ... found. And the way the story was concluded, was splendid. Kudos man! π I wonder why the story is hard to find. It took me a lot of filters to find this one. Thanks, may you have a great day!
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A good fanfiction novel in One Piece universe. I kinda enjoyed this story since the plot was good and the MC stayed true to himself without any deviation from his personality throughout the story. Also the grammar was without problems which is something I consider a must when reading... The only thing I find regrettable is that the story is too short and without much interaction with the Renault original characters and the straw hats. All in all I highly recommend this to everyone who likes the gender.
An absolute joy to read even when I had misgivings about its short length I was definitely proven wrong.
This is definitely a good story with good writing and character development, but I just can't handle romance unless it's added to the story at a later date, that way I'm already invested in the story and can ignore it, I always get this feeling in my chest whenever I read romance, it's like something is draining away or making my heart heavy, It's probably because I don't have a love life.
To those who hesitate to read because short chapter, try it. You won't regret it.
TEMPORARY REVIEW Question: Since this only has 30 chapters, are the chapters at least long?
the best one piece fan fiction there is, I hope I can find other ff that can top yours, Thanks for writing this fiction
un pure chef d'oeuvre , je le conseille vivement je sais pas pourquoi un tel chef d'oeuvre est restΓ© cachΓ©e aussi longtemps pour tous les fans de one piece je vous le conseille vivement
At first the story progression is slow, he uses up like 10+ chapters for the first 8 years of the MC's life. So it worried me how the story was going to work out considering the low chapter amount. However, not long after it began to pick up and move forward. Although if you want the full picture of the story you need to pay attention and read all of it, can't skip any of the chapters or you will miss something. Once the story picks up, some interesting changes occur and unlike others that pick the same old love interests, this one has an OC Love and it makes it that much better. There were many times where things happened or the MC's decisions felt very wrong, but it all worked out really well in the end. I will definitely reread this story again. I didn't find this until after it had already been completed, so I can say whether or not the updates had stability, but the grammar overall isn't bad, some grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing egregious enough to make me want to immediately remove it from my library. The overall ending was quite good, compared to many fics that don't even get an ending and some that get endings that you would like to ring the Author's neck for writing, this is by far one of the better ones. I left a lot of shitty comments while I was reading this story, but I wanted to come here after finishing it and leave a review, because even though there were times I disliked very much, it was still a great story. Thanks Author-san for a Great Story.