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I started this fanfic with zero expectations, just wanted to see what the story is like and where it is going and I can say with certainty that I am here to stay. A very mellow and chill story that you can read and have a good time. Starting with the world it is a mixed bag of a multiple stories together so kind of like fusion cuisine, where its like new and not new at the same time. But I will say the author made it simple and easy to follow with a good base for the story to go on. Occasionally the flashbacks confused me, as I can’t understand how many previous lives the mc had before the current one(as of chapter 90, I am still not sure). Writing quality is great with easy to follow and understandable sentences, not many errors in terms of spelling and grammar. But I think the author made a few mistakes with the timeline getting mixed up or even forgetting that certain character was already introduced to a character but then got introduced again to the same character. I will let it pass since juggling between multiple characters from different stories and different timelines can be quite difficult and one might get lost easily. Story, as of chapter 90 it is still not clear where the story is headed, what’s the goal? It seems like the author is going day to day and this is where I feel like the entire structure is not there…yet. Which leads me to my next point, the plot progression is really slow(which the author already warned about before I started the story) but I still I can’t help but feel that the story is slow and it kind of degrades the experience of reading this beautiful story. Like I loved it so far, read like 90 chapters in a day, and noticed that plot progression is like 30 or 40 chapters. So I hope the author-san notches up the pace a bit. Characters, the star of the show! I thoroughly enjoyed most of the characters. They didn’t feel like blank pieces in a story, most of them felt alive and likable. It is a fanfic so the characters are not original but I did notice the minor spices that author added to some of the characters. I also noticed other reviews calling the mc, beta-simp and pushover which is mostly not true. The mc is a very emotionless character but that doesn’t mean he is cold and selfish. He goes along with his companions wishes because he is just a caring character and many readers found it simp like behavior or pushover, which I personally didn’t think so. But at the same time I felt like the author just made him so agreeable to his companions wishes or whims just for the sake of tropes or plots, and thus it can make the mc seem off character a bit. Overall the characters were gem in this story. Last but not least stability of updates, I noticed author took like an 8 month break after publishing 60 or so chapters and then returned to the story. I just hope he publishes the story regularly from now and I will be an avid reader of this story. Please keep on updating author-san, I will be looking forward to more of your story.
I am currently engrossed in the enthralling world of "Didn't Ask for This," a slice of life fanfiction interspersed with adventure, and action that has me thoroughly captivated. The author's masterful handling of character interactions and dialogue is truly remarkable, drawing the reader in and making them feel like a part of the story. The way they expertly weave together relatable characters and immersive storytelling is simply breathtaking. What truly sets this work apart, however, is its ability to explore complex themes of love, loss, and personal growth with unmatched realism through the characters' conversations. I cannot recommend this fanfiction enough to anyone seeking a thought-provoking and emotionally resonant journey. Never give up author, you have my support!
Everything is great except for the Mc. mean what is the difference between his behavior and a salted fish.
Beta , simp , cringe and stupid mc, I don’t recommend it to anyone who has any self-esteem .
A mentally traumatised emotionless mc dies after a long life of struggle and battle and when he thinks he can have some peace in death, he transmigrates in this mix anime world, main world being "I got cheat in other world..." So, now he just feels apathy to everything, feels lazy and doesn't react much. A couple of female character gets introduced and they show affection towards him and it does look like he isn't dense, just ignoring their affection and running away from his past trauma. However, as the story progresses (even in 100+) nothing much changes, no emotional development, no character development, nothing. Whole story progression is slow, romance developments are most one girl building up fantasy inside her head. Mc feels like a good looking stone beside the road that loves sweets, that's all. A lot of events in the fanfic also resembles pretty close to canon events with minor changes Anyway, this fanfic feels dead already, so no point in writing all that much. writing - was bad at the start improved quite a bit around 70 chap story dev - slower than snail character design - bland. it's understandable with the character backstory, but it doesn't make mc less bland. world building - it's a fanfic
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very good, but there are too many heroines, I think Grayfia and Marin are enough, especially the elf queen, I think she reacted a little too much and update please, you haven't updated in 8 months
¡¡¡La mejor historia que he leido hasta ahora!!. Lastima que esta en pausa. Un muy buen protagonista. 👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻(.Relleno.)
For someone who stated in the summary that he had no feelings to begin with, he has more feelings than I do. It's amazing how rudely you wrote that MC has no feelings 😂💔 You made me excited for the story. Well, I will continue reading, but unfortunately the beginning is different from what I expected.... Well, I copied this comment from the third chapter and put it in the review, but yes, I could almost swear that the hero is a contradiction. I won't waste it on this thing and suddenly waste it on the same thing isn't it wonderful 😂 And the strange thing is, is it an all-consuming excuse for the curse of this body that works everywhere? Let's be honest, no one has ever experienced a different body, but being afraid and trembling due to killing intent after living in war, isn't that funny? In general, honestly the soul isn't affected by the body that much, which is why in all the reincarnation stories, or the majority, I can't help but see MC as a lolicon. Overall, this is a critical review, but the story is good so far, and I will continue reading. I don't know by how much, but surprisingly it's better than many reincarnation stories.
More pleaseI love the story, characters and the pacingi just hope you continue it
I love the story and how it progresses, overall the current story is enthralling and makes me want to read more. There is only the sad reality of a hiatus but hopefully it doesn’t get dropped
Actually so boring. The author just has the MC monologuing to himself every other chapter until he fills the entire chapter up with monologuing only, trying to make the MC seen philosophical and smart. So annoying.
I've read till chapter 100, but we're the reader still didn't know the backstory of the MC. The reason why the MC dead inside? You put the romance tag but there is no romance at all. MC character like zombie, dead.
Writing quality is really good but man after 100 chapters no romantic development it's annoying
I really like this novel but the progress of the story is slow but stable I think that the character of the hero and the side characters should develop instead of love in every conversation
literally garbage, is this a wish fulfillment story? nothing makes sense in this fanfic
This novel is pure filler, it does not advance, the protagonist is a stone and repels the other characters, in addition to leaving out the protagonists on which this fic is based.
Has I said before this is a good story, and I realy like the other ones. But is realy geting bored. Pls do something about the #harem tag I'm looking froward on this novel.
story was somewhat nice but kept going in random directions that i had no idea about and confusing me. idk what else to say exept that my dislikes in the story happend more often than the thinks i liked
Actually I found this fanfic randomly. And just like any fanfic I had low expectations at first. As the story progressed I realized why it got this attention which this fanfic totally deserves. And the things get fired up when Grayfia entered in the story. Although I haven't watched Highschool DXD fully yet. I know it's hype from my friends. Which I am saving for later. And I didn't know a thing about her. But I found her character was pretty good. As for writing quality there's still room for development. But one thing's sure. This is above average. Which I can't complain at all. As for story development, I am waiting for him to go to the fantasy world after that happened as that part is one of the five light novels I have read. So I am patiently waiting for it. And I am very happy to see my favorite character Kiyotaka there. And the new characters are also well written. And I like the back story. And I have no problems with the update schedule. As I am also an writer and I understand how it is to manage things. And also I really enjoy the slice of life moments with other characters. Also I love many scenes in the story. Like how the MC destroys a certain someone who was bribed to force MC out of school. And Marin's imaginations. And there are many others too. So all I want to say is Please complete it till the end. And this fanfic is best for you if you like comedy too btw.
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I feel like there really hasn't been many chapter updates since my last review but author wants reviews, I'm not really a good reviewer and this is probably gonna be copied on the other stories, I like the story enough right now, anything that may be annoying isn't annoying enough to remember that long so isn't that bad, I guess something that seems to be a problem with this and the other stories is that sometimes it feels like nothing really advanced at all, like it feels like the chapter was just one space where conversations happened and then the end either to continue on next chapter and move to a new place. or already starting in a new place, sometimes
saya cuma mau bilang ini bukan novel 18+ yang saya inginkan. lebih baik tag di hilangkan, karna novel normal dengan mc dingin dan penuh cerita hidup. jadi bintang 3 karna saya netral
This book is slow, enjoyable, and a very nice read. The only problems I have are that the chapters are a bit short and that Yuuya has not done anything with the women around him. Now I understand he has trauma from the last and just wants to live a quiet and mundane life, but at some point he need to sort out his feelings and respond to the girls who are clearly head over heels for him. With all that being said, I do recommend this for anybody looking for an OPMC slice-of-life story with fun characters.
Very good story love rhe overpoweredness would qanr more of him romancing the gir ls though i know thats his charachter
Read my other review (If the author hasn't deleted it) It got much, much, worse. . . . . . . . . . . ............................................
Heh, review number 69. Nice. Anyways, I’m because author threatened going on break if there’s no review.
in my opinion, overall it's good. the things that make me leave is the MC. sure, the mc have lived for 250 years in his past life and maybe he has some kind of trauma. but he got a second chance to live his new life in another world. so, i just kinda hope that he start anew or something like that. also, for a man that has lived for 250 years just kinda hope he is not that dense.
"I Got a Cheat Skill in Another World and Became Unrivaled in The Real World, Too" is my first lightnovel read so it is really hard to forget how interesting the plot is. I am thankful for you author to make this story involving my lightnovel read.
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I am giving it 5 stars cause I wrote it. I'll write a proper review later because we aren't that far into the story so don't mind it and read
I started this fanfic with zero expectations, just wanted to see what the story is like and where it is going and I can say with certainty that I am here to stay. A very mellow and chill story that you can read and have a good time. Starting with the world it is a mixed bag of a multiple stories together so kind of like fusion cuisine, where its like new and not new at the same time. But I will say the author made it simple and easy to follow with a good base for the story to go on. Occasionally the flashbacks confused me, as I can’t understand how many previous lives the mc had before the current one(as of chapter 90, I am still not sure). Writing quality is great with easy to follow and understandable sentences, not many errors in terms of spelling and grammar. But I think the author made a few mistakes with the timeline getting mixed up or even forgetting that certain character was already introduced to a character but then got introduced again to the same character. I will let it pass since juggling between multiple characters from different stories and different timelines can be quite difficult and one might get lost easily. Story, as of chapter 90 it is still not clear where the story is headed, what’s the goal? It seems like the author is going day to day and this is where I feel like the entire structure is not there…yet. Which leads me to my next point, the plot progression is really slow(which the author already warned about before I started the story) but I still I can’t help but feel that the story is slow and it kind of degrades the experience of reading this beautiful story. Like I loved it so far, read like 90 chapters in a day, and noticed that plot progression is like 30 or 40 chapters. So I hope the author-san notches up the pace a bit. Characters, the star of the show! I thoroughly enjoyed most of the characters. They didn’t feel like blank pieces in a story, most of them felt alive and likable. It is a fanfic so the characters are not original but I did notice the minor spices that author added to some of the characters. I also noticed other reviews calling the mc, beta-simp and pushover which is mostly not true. The mc is a very emotionless character but that doesn’t mean he is cold and selfish. He goes along with his companions wishes because he is just a caring character and many readers found it simp like behavior or pushover, which I personally didn’t think so. But at the same time I felt like the author just made him so agreeable to his companions wishes or whims just for the sake of tropes or plots, and thus it can make the mc seem off character a bit. Overall the characters were gem in this story. Last but not least stability of updates, I noticed author took like an 8 month break after publishing 60 or so chapters and then returned to the story. I just hope he publishes the story regularly from now and I will be an avid reader of this story. Please keep on updating author-san, I will be looking forward to more of your story.
I am currently engrossed in the enthralling world of "Didn't Ask for This," a slice of life fanfiction interspersed with adventure, and action that has me thoroughly captivated. The author's masterful handling of character interactions and dialogue is truly remarkable, drawing the reader in and making them feel like a part of the story. The way they expertly weave together relatable characters and immersive storytelling is simply breathtaking. What truly sets this work apart, however, is its ability to explore complex themes of love, loss, and personal growth with unmatched realism through the characters' conversations. I cannot recommend this fanfiction enough to anyone seeking a thought-provoking and emotionally resonant journey. Never give up author, you have my support!
Everything is great except for the Mc. mean what is the difference between his behavior and a salted fish.
Beta , simp , cringe and stupid mc, I don’t recommend it to anyone who has any self-esteem .
A mentally traumatised emotionless mc dies after a long life of struggle and battle and when he thinks he can have some peace in death, he transmigrates in this mix anime world, main world being "I got cheat in other world..." So, now he just feels apathy to everything, feels lazy and doesn't react much. A couple of female character gets introduced and they show affection towards him and it does look like he isn't dense, just ignoring their affection and running away from his past trauma. However, as the story progresses (even in 100+) nothing much changes, no emotional development, no character development, nothing. Whole story progression is slow, romance developments are most one girl building up fantasy inside her head. Mc feels like a good looking stone beside the road that loves sweets, that's all. A lot of events in the fanfic also resembles pretty close to canon events with minor changes Anyway, this fanfic feels dead already, so no point in writing all that much. writing - was bad at the start improved quite a bit around 70 chap story dev - slower than snail character design - bland. it's understandable with the character backstory, but it doesn't make mc less bland. world building - it's a fanfic
Reveal Spoiler very good, but there are too many heroines, I think Grayfia and Marin are enough, especially the elf queen, I think she reacted a little too much and update please, you haven't updated in 8 months
¡¡¡La mejor historia que he leido hasta ahora!!. Lastima que esta en pausa. Un muy buen protagonista. 👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻(.Relleno.)
For someone who stated in the summary that he had no feelings to begin with, he has more feelings than I do. It's amazing how rudely you wrote that MC has no feelings 😂💔 You made me excited for the story. Well, I will continue reading, but unfortunately the beginning is different from what I expected.... Well, I copied this comment from the third chapter and put it in the review, but yes, I could almost swear that the hero is a contradiction. I won't waste it on this thing and suddenly waste it on the same thing isn't it wonderful 😂 And the strange thing is, is it an all-consuming excuse for the curse of this body that works everywhere? Let's be honest, no one has ever experienced a different body, but being afraid and trembling due to killing intent after living in war, isn't that funny? In general, honestly the soul isn't affected by the body that much, which is why in all the reincarnation stories, or the majority, I can't help but see MC as a lolicon. Overall, this is a critical review, but the story is good so far, and I will continue reading. I don't know by how much, but surprisingly it's better than many reincarnation stories.
More pleaseI love the story, characters and the pacingi just hope you continue it
I love the story and how it progresses, overall the current story is enthralling and makes me want to read more. There is only the sad reality of a hiatus but hopefully it doesn’t get dropped
Actually so boring. The author just has the MC monologuing to himself every other chapter until he fills the entire chapter up with monologuing only, trying to make the MC seen philosophical and smart. So annoying.
I've read till chapter 100, but we're the reader still didn't know the backstory of the MC. The reason why the MC dead inside? You put the romance tag but there is no romance at all. MC character like zombie, dead.
Writing quality is really good but man after 100 chapters no romantic development it's annoying
I really like this novel but the progress of the story is slow but stable I think that the character of the hero and the side characters should develop instead of love in every conversation
literally garbage, is this a wish fulfillment story? nothing makes sense in this fanfic
This novel is pure filler, it does not advance, the protagonist is a stone and repels the other characters, in addition to leaving out the protagonists on which this fic is based.
Has I said before this is a good story, and I realy like the other ones. But is realy geting bored. Pls do something about the #harem tag I'm looking froward on this novel.
story was somewhat nice but kept going in random directions that i had no idea about and confusing me. idk what else to say exept that my dislikes in the story happend more often than the thinks i liked
Actually I found this fanfic randomly. And just like any fanfic I had low expectations at first. As the story progressed I realized why it got this attention which this fanfic totally deserves. And the things get fired up when Grayfia entered in the story. Although I haven't watched Highschool DXD fully yet. I know it's hype from my friends. Which I am saving for later. And I didn't know a thing about her. But I found her character was pretty good. As for writing quality there's still room for development. But one thing's sure. This is above average. Which I can't complain at all. As for story development, I am waiting for him to go to the fantasy world after that happened as that part is one of the five light novels I have read. So I am patiently waiting for it. And I am very happy to see my favorite character Kiyotaka there. And the new characters are also well written. And I like the back story. And I have no problems with the update schedule. As I am also an writer and I understand how it is to manage things. And also I really enjoy the slice of life moments with other characters. Also I love many scenes in the story. Like how the MC destroys a certain someone who was bribed to force MC out of school. And Marin's imaginations. And there are many others too. So all I want to say is Please complete it till the end. And this fanfic is best for you if you like comedy too btw.
Reveal Spoiler I feel like there really hasn't been many chapter updates since my last review but author wants reviews, I'm not really a good reviewer and this is probably gonna be copied on the other stories, I like the story enough right now, anything that may be annoying isn't annoying enough to remember that long so isn't that bad, I guess something that seems to be a problem with this and the other stories is that sometimes it feels like nothing really advanced at all, like it feels like the chapter was just one space where conversations happened and then the end either to continue on next chapter and move to a new place. or already starting in a new place, sometimes
saya cuma mau bilang ini bukan novel 18+ yang saya inginkan. lebih baik tag di hilangkan, karna novel normal dengan mc dingin dan penuh cerita hidup. jadi bintang 3 karna saya netral
This book is slow, enjoyable, and a very nice read. The only problems I have are that the chapters are a bit short and that Yuuya has not done anything with the women around him. Now I understand he has trauma from the last and just wants to live a quiet and mundane life, but at some point he need to sort out his feelings and respond to the girls who are clearly head over heels for him. With all that being said, I do recommend this for anybody looking for an OPMC slice-of-life story with fun characters.
Very good story love rhe overpoweredness would qanr more of him romancing the gir ls though i know thats his charachter
Read my other review (If the author hasn't deleted it) It got much, much, worse. . . . . . . . . . . ............................................
Heh, review number 69. Nice. Anyways, I’m because author threatened going on break if there’s no review.
in my opinion, overall it's good. the things that make me leave is the MC. sure, the mc have lived for 250 years in his past life and maybe he has some kind of trauma. but he got a second chance to live his new life in another world. so, i just kinda hope that he start anew or something like that. also, for a man that has lived for 250 years just kinda hope he is not that dense.
"I Got a Cheat Skill in Another World and Became Unrivaled in The Real World, Too" is my first lightnovel read so it is really hard to forget how interesting the plot is. I am thankful for you author to make this story involving my lightnovel read.
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I am giving it 5 stars cause I wrote it. I'll write a proper review later because we aren't that far into the story so don't mind it and read