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I think one of the reasons why female leads in line action stories aren't read as often is because at first she may be cool and strong but the moment the ml is there she becomes stupid and always needs to be saved by him. This is one of the reasons fantasy romances with a female lead scare me of. For some reason they make the fl strong but the ml stronger than her even though she is the mc and went through more struggles. The ml is also always supposed to be cold while the fl like a mary sue. I hope this one isn't the same because they start to frustrate me and asexual ones don't seem to exist here
The book is really amazing, just the first chapter and am lost in it, I love stories about the ancient time. and this is just the best I have read so far, kudos to the author. expecting more update.😍😍
wow wow, I really have to leave another review. this is so amazing, and the updating stability is even more better. thank you so much author you're a life saver. I can't even wait till tomorrow for another interesting chapter. keep it up author
This is one of the best books I have read so so far, I gave it three and a half star because this is an honest review. Trust me, this book is not hundred percent perfect but it is worth your time.
Hi everyone, Author here. a little award for me to be on the review section, but I just had to. Please guys, I want every reader to feel free to give suggestions, or ask questions if he/she might have encountered anything unclear in the story. Do that to encourage your loyal author.
Stories like this are so intriguing to read. You'll want to find out what happens if it truly happened. Thanks for taking me on a wonderful ride filled with a blend of imagination and reality. Please update more
First of all, I love the plot and the characters. The chapters give me an exciting thrill. Not halfway yet but it made me intrigued. Your book has the potential and you do have potential. Good luck and well done author 👌👌👌
A promising read, hopefully it keeps up the momentum established! The setting is definitely something I like and I hope you'll continue pumping out chapters!
First off let me start off by saying something about the writing quality. I think the writing quality has improved significantly as you read more of the book, although there are a few grammatical errors it's nothing that would put you off reading. Now I'm gonna list some pros and cons of the novel. Pro's - 1. The plot flows smoothly and is intriguing making the reader want to know more which is a good thing 2. The characters are designed well and are portrayed in a way which brings to light each of their different personalities. 3. The uniqueness of the mc Zelta, although I'm a Male I was still able to relate to her and sympathise with her as she endures her tough plight. Con's- 1. For one of the characters Zain, I was left confused on whether she was a Male or female until I read the fifth chapter, so I suggest you maybe add something showing that she is a female so readers don't get confused. 2. The length of your paragraphs are too long. Since I read on the app, the paragraphs are like half a page long which is a chore to read, instead breaking them into smaller paragraphs of between four and five lines will help tremendously. 3. This is not a con, but a suggestion. If u don't already have grammarly, the download it as will help you in editing and correcting some of the incorrect spacing in the first few chapters. Overall, this novel has potential, if the author polished a few things then it will become into a really good book. Anyways, good luck author, keep writing and continue the good work!
Writing quality is very good! Impeccable even. It has little to none grammatical mistakes and it’s written beautifully. Character design is also very good! I can easily imagine the scenes in my head. World building is very interesting and unique. It definitely gives sci-di vibes. Overall this is a very good book! I’d definitely recommend to others! I look forward to future updates! 😊
overall I like the story it got me interested...though chapter 1 and 2 didn't sit well with me I like the story as it progresses into a later chapter
Hello and an honest review from me. I've read the first-five chapters and the plot is quite intriguing. The only problem is there are some grammar errors, but that's okay since author can improve slowly so keep it up author👍🏻
This is a beautiful read. I love the way the author weaved around with words. Beautiful piece. I can't stop reading. I'm always on edge for the next chapter!! wowww!!! I'm blown away.
Amazing book. The characters are great and the book is so intriguing and it also has the spice you need. Great job your are doing author. Keep it up.
I think one of the reasons why female leads in line action stories aren't read as often is because at first she may be cool and strong but the moment the ml is there she becomes stupid and always needs to be saved by him. This is one of the reasons fantasy romances with a female lead scare me of. For some reason they make the fl strong but the ml stronger than her even though she is the mc and went through more struggles. The ml is also always supposed to be cold while the fl like a mary sue. I hope this one isn't the same because they start to frustrate me and asexual ones don't seem to exist here
The book is really amazing, just the first chapter and am lost in it, I love stories about the ancient time. and this is just the best I have read so far, kudos to the author. expecting more update.😍😍
wow wow, I really have to leave another review. this is so amazing, and the updating stability is even more better. thank you so much author you're a life saver. I can't even wait till tomorrow for another interesting chapter. keep it up author
This is one of the best books I have read so so far, I gave it three and a half star because this is an honest review. Trust me, this book is not hundred percent perfect but it is worth your time.
Hi everyone, Author here. a little award for me to be on the review section, but I just had to. Please guys, I want every reader to feel free to give suggestions, or ask questions if he/she might have encountered anything unclear in the story. Do that to encourage your loyal author.
Stories like this are so intriguing to read. You'll want to find out what happens if it truly happened. Thanks for taking me on a wonderful ride filled with a blend of imagination and reality. Please update more
First of all, I love the plot and the characters. The chapters give me an exciting thrill. Not halfway yet but it made me intrigued. Your book has the potential and you do have potential. Good luck and well done author 👌👌👌
A promising read, hopefully it keeps up the momentum established! The setting is definitely something I like and I hope you'll continue pumping out chapters!
First off let me start off by saying something about the writing quality. I think the writing quality has improved significantly as you read more of the book, although there are a few grammatical errors it's nothing that would put you off reading. Now I'm gonna list some pros and cons of the novel. Pro's - 1. The plot flows smoothly and is intriguing making the reader want to know more which is a good thing 2. The characters are designed well and are portrayed in a way which brings to light each of their different personalities. 3. The uniqueness of the mc Zelta, although I'm a Male I was still able to relate to her and sympathise with her as she endures her tough plight. Con's- 1. For one of the characters Zain, I was left confused on whether she was a Male or female until I read the fifth chapter, so I suggest you maybe add something showing that she is a female so readers don't get confused. 2. The length of your paragraphs are too long. Since I read on the app, the paragraphs are like half a page long which is a chore to read, instead breaking them into smaller paragraphs of between four and five lines will help tremendously. 3. This is not a con, but a suggestion. If u don't already have grammarly, the download it as will help you in editing and correcting some of the incorrect spacing in the first few chapters. Overall, this novel has potential, if the author polished a few things then it will become into a really good book. Anyways, good luck author, keep writing and continue the good work!
Writing quality is very good! Impeccable even. It has little to none grammatical mistakes and it’s written beautifully. Character design is also very good! I can easily imagine the scenes in my head. World building is very interesting and unique. It definitely gives sci-di vibes. Overall this is a very good book! I’d definitely recommend to others! I look forward to future updates! 😊
overall I like the story it got me interested...though chapter 1 and 2 didn't sit well with me I like the story as it progresses into a later chapter
Hello and an honest review from me. I've read the first-five chapters and the plot is quite intriguing. The only problem is there are some grammar errors, but that's okay since author can improve slowly so keep it up author👍🏻
This is a beautiful read. I love the way the author weaved around with words. Beautiful piece. I can't stop reading. I'm always on edge for the next chapter!! wowww!!! I'm blown away.
Amazing book. The characters are great and the book is so intriguing and it also has the spice you need. Great job your are doing author. Keep it up.
I rate this a hundred and ten over hundred