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If you have a good idea that you would like to see implemented, do not hesitate to comment wherever you want. The same goes for questions. I'll explain it a little better: If you imagine perchance a spell that you would like to see explained by physics (chemistry/math/biology), such as the spell "Acid Rain", you ought to comment that you want to see it, and I shall bring an expert's (not mine) view on how it could be done (and its limitations). Alternatively, you could say: "It would be cool to see the villain using a spell like 'Binding Rope' on the heroine...", and I can see what I can do for you... If you have doubts about a physics/math/chemistry/biology concept, you can also write anywhere, and I shall try to implement it in the novel with appropriate explanations and into spells (if applicable). For instance, if you say: "I don't understand black holes at, Mr. Author!", I shall try my best to bring you an appropriate explanation, as well as one or more spells connected to that concept. In this case, perhaps the spells "Black Hole" (this one is pretty extreme, a real black hole would completely destroy the planet, most likely), "Singularity", "Space Distortion", "Time Dilation", "Schwarzschild's Compression", "Event Horizon", etc. Furthermore, you could also ask for some more philosophical questions, political questions, historical questions, questions regarding the world of JPM, and I'll answer in the story or through your comment. Keep in mind that whatever you ask for may change the story progression. Thanks for reading, and I hope you learn a lot.
If you have a good idea that you would like to see implemented, do not hesitate to comment wherever you want. The same goes for questions. I'll explain it a little better: If you imagine perchance a spell that you would like to see explained by physics (chemistry/math/biology), such as the spell "Acid Rain", you ought to comment that you want to see it, and I shall bring an expert's (not mine) view on how it could be done (and its limitations). Alternatively, you could say: "It would be cool to see the villain using a spell like 'Binding Rope' on the heroine...", and I can see what I can do for you... If you have doubts about a physics/math/chemistry/biology concept, you can also write anywhere, and I shall try to implement it in the novel with appropriate explanations and into spells (if applicable). For instance, if you say: "I don't understand black holes at, Mr. Author!", I shall try my best to bring you an appropriate explanation, as well as one or more spells connected to that concept. In this case, perhaps the spells "Black Hole" (this one is pretty extreme, a real black hole would completely destroy the planet, most likely), "Singularity", "Space Distortion", "Time Dilation", "Schwarzschild's Compression", "Event Horizon", etc. Furthermore, you could also ask for some more philosophical questions, political questions, historical questions, questions regarding the world of JPM, and I'll answer in the story or through your comment. Keep in mind that whatever you ask for may change the story progression. Thanks for reading, and I hope you learn a lot.