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I'm writing this review after publishing 5 chapters. I assure you this novel has a well planned plot, with a proper structure. The System won't have plot holes and I accept reader suggestion when writing this story. If you have any questions, feel free to reply to this review and ask ahead. Enjoy reading my story :)
A book that deserves a lot of recognition. Writing of the highest quality, a plot well-thought, a character you root for, and a world neatly created. All within your reach! 5 stars aren't enough :)
First of all, this isn't harem or polygamy. the protagonist wants to remain monogamous while his clones do it in bed with their own lovers. the clones are not in absolute similarity and do not have a real connection of clone with the portagonist so they are considered own characters, that the clones get their own women do not make this novel harem. This such solution of the clones seems to me the most vague solution that I could have chosen from the great diversity that I could have chosen, also the title has harem as well as the labels but which character has a harem really? the portagonist doesn't have it, the clones have their own lovers and I don't think the protagonist will mess with them. It feels like you put up a sign that says you sell melon to give me a couple of lemons instead, the only thing similar is the name, not much more, this novel is something like that. This review was made by reading all the comments I could find and when reading until chapter 11, I do not know what the Author will do in the future but luck. This is not my cup of tea but I see that there are many people who really do not like harem but they liked the novel itself so this would be perfect for them, as for me, it leaves a bad taste in my mouth so I decided to stop at this time after publishing this review so that other people do not think that this is really harem, in any case it would be something like a fake harem. If I am wrong about what I comment I would like you to clarify it with another review or with a response to this review, thank you. The novel is decent and has room for improvement, good luck Author.
This book is what I'm getting addicted to. I love the new Ardor because he is way better than the old one, the way he thinks and does his things are great. I wish it wasn't a harem love so he can concentrate on Jeanne but all the same, it is cool because she is his permanent harem member. I wish them happiness and I will be here with them until the end of their adventure. Author, this is a great book and I'm impressed. Your writing skills, creativity and style are what I admire. I see a lot of potential in this book and I hope it gets sighed. Good luck author and don't stop! šµš¹
Honestly, I havenāt been this hooked on a first chapter before. Iāve seen others come close, but none compared to how immersed into the story I became just from the first chapter. Throughout my reading, I was kept entertained, complementing the quality of the first chapter, and although I donāt typically read harem or romance novels, I came to appreciate the worldbuilding and story of this one. Keep up the good work.
The pacing of the story is overall fine, and has developed well. Individual chapters felt a little long and featured a lot of large paragraphs. Overall the writing was also decent but there were some personal issues with it. It feels like a unique system, so is worth checking out.
my first take is this story is refreshing with an atypical MC. I can't tell much yet because of the pitiful amount of chapters but what I can say for this book: Promising! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Decent story so far. More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps
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Interesting plot. Everything good so far. There are ups and downs. I don't regret reading this. .... ...... ..... ...... .....
Good story so far. The only regret is that Ardor endures too much, but it's finally time to release that from chap 8. Read at least till chapter 8 before forming an opinion about this novel, that's my suggestion.
well harem is not really my type genre... but this novel kept me going. At some point I was angry, about the plot like it just makes me angry (go and read by yourself, I don't wanna spoil ), but it's one of the reasons why I kept reading and wanting to know what happens afterwards. I won't say much, I liked every aspect of this novel. keep up the great work, looking forward to more exciting chapters
I'm a sucker for system novels. You got that harem as well? Great! And magic too? Count me in! Can't wait to see the day mc bombards his enemies with fireballs!
Go go go! You can do this! Just 1000 Chapters to go (lol)! But it was a rational plot till now, excited to see where the story goes. ngl, the world requirement kinda annoys me.
Time for that promised bonus chap! It's already over 20 PS! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap!
Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival!
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One of the more decent novels out there. Good grammar, no mistakes so far. But author takes time in world building, so don't expect to see some super fast paced action here. Tbh, I think its the right speed. You may not agree with me.
Decent harem novel. No plot hole so far. Waiting for more chapters. Decent harem novel. No plot hole so far. Waiting for more chapters. Decent harem novel. No plot hole so far. Waiting for more chapters. Decent harem novel. No plot hole so far. Waiting for more chapters. Stup*d minimum word limit.
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Story is better than the average harem with mc fuc*ing every chick that enters his eyes. I'm slightly upset that he's not ruthless or daring in the beginning chapters. But I guess his transformation from simp to warrior will take some time.
Good novel. Great writing. Leaves me wanting more. Most harem novels at this point would have chicks flock around the mc, but not this time. The author's really paying attention to world building to create an unforgettable experience for us.
A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer!
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Read 6 chaps. I want Ardor to do something about that First Mother! How dare she steal a kiss from him? Violate her! Torture her! Only then the fury in my heart will go away. Or, if you cuck your father, I can agree to it as well.
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The novel is good so far. I've read till chap 6. I think the First Mother is the one who destroyed his talent. Let's see how the author will take care of her. Keep going.
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Good novel...Lol, I think Ardor should just leave the household with Jeanne after all that. But reading the last chapter I think there is some scope to trash with stepmom too. I am waiting for what the author has to present next...
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I really like how the story is going so far. Eager to know what'll happen further and how he'll accomplish his Ultimate Mission. Go Go Go! Give me more chapters!!!
I'm not really into harem-tagged novels, but I would be lying if I said each chapter did not intrigue. I love how every character has a situation to deal with, every character has a story and I, as a reader, am able to feel like I'm there next to them watching their life unfold. So, great start. All the best!
Great job love the plot the Chapters are enjoyable to read I'm pretty sure this book will make it and I know so ,great job author love your work.
I'm writing this review after publishing 5 chapters. I assure you this novel has a well planned plot, with a proper structure. The System won't have plot holes and I accept reader suggestion when writing this story. If you have any questions, feel free to reply to this review and ask ahead. Enjoy reading my story :)
A book that deserves a lot of recognition. Writing of the highest quality, a plot well-thought, a character you root for, and a world neatly created. All within your reach! 5 stars aren't enough :)
First of all, this isn't harem or polygamy. the protagonist wants to remain monogamous while his clones do it in bed with their own lovers. the clones are not in absolute similarity and do not have a real connection of clone with the portagonist so they are considered own characters, that the clones get their own women do not make this novel harem. This such solution of the clones seems to me the most vague solution that I could have chosen from the great diversity that I could have chosen, also the title has harem as well as the labels but which character has a harem really? the portagonist doesn't have it, the clones have their own lovers and I don't think the protagonist will mess with them. It feels like you put up a sign that says you sell melon to give me a couple of lemons instead, the only thing similar is the name, not much more, this novel is something like that. This review was made by reading all the comments I could find and when reading until chapter 11, I do not know what the Author will do in the future but luck. This is not my cup of tea but I see that there are many people who really do not like harem but they liked the novel itself so this would be perfect for them, as for me, it leaves a bad taste in my mouth so I decided to stop at this time after publishing this review so that other people do not think that this is really harem, in any case it would be something like a fake harem. If I am wrong about what I comment I would like you to clarify it with another review or with a response to this review, thank you. The novel is decent and has room for improvement, good luck Author.
This book is what I'm getting addicted to. I love the new Ardor because he is way better than the old one, the way he thinks and does his things are great. I wish it wasn't a harem love so he can concentrate on Jeanne but all the same, it is cool because she is his permanent harem member. I wish them happiness and I will be here with them until the end of their adventure. Author, this is a great book and I'm impressed. Your writing skills, creativity and style are what I admire. I see a lot of potential in this book and I hope it gets sighed. Good luck author and don't stop! šµš¹
Honestly, I havenāt been this hooked on a first chapter before. Iāve seen others come close, but none compared to how immersed into the story I became just from the first chapter. Throughout my reading, I was kept entertained, complementing the quality of the first chapter, and although I donāt typically read harem or romance novels, I came to appreciate the worldbuilding and story of this one. Keep up the good work.
The pacing of the story is overall fine, and has developed well. Individual chapters felt a little long and featured a lot of large paragraphs. Overall the writing was also decent but there were some personal issues with it. It feels like a unique system, so is worth checking out.
my first take is this story is refreshing with an atypical MC. I can't tell much yet because of the pitiful amount of chapters but what I can say for this book: Promising! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Decent story so far. More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps More chaps
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Reveal Spoiler Interesting plot. Everything good so far. There are ups and downs. I don't regret reading this. .... ...... ..... ...... .....
Good story so far. The only regret is that Ardor endures too much, but it's finally time to release that from chap 8. Read at least till chapter 8 before forming an opinion about this novel, that's my suggestion.
well harem is not really my type genre... but this novel kept me going. At some point I was angry, about the plot like it just makes me angry (go and read by yourself, I don't wanna spoil ), but it's one of the reasons why I kept reading and wanting to know what happens afterwards. I won't say much, I liked every aspect of this novel. keep up the great work, looking forward to more exciting chapters
I'm a sucker for system novels. You got that harem as well? Great! And magic too? Count me in! Can't wait to see the day mc bombards his enemies with fireballs!
Go go go! You can do this! Just 1000 Chapters to go (lol)! But it was a rational plot till now, excited to see where the story goes. ngl, the world requirement kinda annoys me.
Time for that promised bonus chap! It's already over 20 PS! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap! Gimme that chap!
Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival! Xp Set Announces its arrival!
Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it. Enjoyed every single bit of it.
Reveal Spoiler One of the more decent novels out there. Good grammar, no mistakes so far. But author takes time in world building, so don't expect to see some super fast paced action here. Tbh, I think its the right speed. You may not agree with me.
Decent harem novel. No plot hole so far. Waiting for more chapters. Decent harem novel. No plot hole so far. Waiting for more chapters. Decent harem novel. No plot hole so far. Waiting for more chapters. Decent harem novel. No plot hole so far. Waiting for more chapters. Stup*d minimum word limit.
Reveal Spoiler Story is better than the average harem with mc fuc*ing every chick that enters his eyes. I'm slightly upset that he's not ruthless or daring in the beginning chapters. But I guess his transformation from simp to warrior will take some time.
Good novel. Great writing. Leaves me wanting more. Most harem novels at this point would have chicks flock around the mc, but not this time. The author's really paying attention to world building to create an unforgettable experience for us.
A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer! A diamond among the trash on this site. I want Isabella to suffer. Make her suffer!
Reveal Spoiler Read 6 chaps. I want Ardor to do something about that First Mother! How dare she steal a kiss from him? Violate her! Torture her! Only then the fury in my heart will go away. Or, if you cuck your father, I can agree to it as well.
Reveal Spoiler The novel is good so far. I've read till chap 6. I think the First Mother is the one who destroyed his talent. Let's see how the author will take care of her. Keep going.
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Reveal Spoiler Good novel...Lol, I think Ardor should just leave the household with Jeanne after all that. But reading the last chapter I think there is some scope to trash with stepmom too. I am waiting for what the author has to present next...
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Reveal Spoiler I really like how the story is going so far. Eager to know what'll happen further and how he'll accomplish his Ultimate Mission. Go Go Go! Give me more chapters!!!
I'm not really into harem-tagged novels, but I would be lying if I said each chapter did not intrigue. I love how every character has a situation to deal with, every character has a story and I, as a reader, am able to feel like I'm there next to them watching their life unfold. So, great start. All the best!
Great job love the plot the Chapters are enjoyable to read I'm pretty sure this book will make it and I know so ,great job author love your work.