39Reviews
4.83
- Writing Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
It is a very well put together story. Honestly there is not many problems at all with it. The only thing I could say is I want more. That is all.
I honestly like your story.... everything is lovely...... overall it's the best intimatcy harem beauties and I like there passionate connection.... The word building is very detailed and easy to understand.✌️💓😎..
It is a refreshing cultivation novel with mixed feelings all about and within the characters. The explicit scenes are well writen, BUT the quirks of each Main-Harem-Member are little too fast discovered, also it is just MY opinion.
I can only say that this novel has me hooked its a super good read and I love that the author is limiting the harem [img=recommend][img=update]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
one was the best on this platform!!! if you haven't read it yet, I highly recommend it.
Well, I deleted my previous review because of two important things. My update schedule will be every day at 20:30 GMT+7 until further notice. The second point is that I didn't give my novel 5 stars and that is blasphemy, Why did you just think I'm shameless? I'm not, I totally didn't feel envious of all the other authors that do the same. Finally, I'm writing this novel for fun (at least currently)! Moreover, it is my first time writing anything. If that was not enough, English is not my first language. But don't worry! I'm using two different grammar correcting software! So, it shouldn't be bad, I hope you don't leave because of this. I hope I didn't forget anything... I actually did! Any questions or suggestions about the novel write below. I will answer all of them unless they are nonsense of course. And please refrain from using swear words. If you don't like something about my novel, tell me normally. I only have the outline of the plot and some stacked chapters so changing things is possible!
The novel is very interesting, you have daily updates, and the grammar have improved during the course of the story. There are barely any grammmatical errors in later chapters. Give it a try I don't think you will regret it!
It is a very well put together story. Honestly there is not many problems at all with it. The only thing I could say is I want more. That is all.
I honestly like your story.... everything is lovely...... overall it's the best intimatcy harem beauties and I like there passionate connection.... The word building is very detailed and easy to understand.✌️💓😎..
It is a refreshing cultivation novel with mixed feelings all about and within the characters. The explicit scenes are well writen, BUT the quirks of each Main-Harem-Member are little too fast discovered, also it is just MY opinion.
I can only say that this novel has me hooked its a super good read and I love that the author is limiting the harem [img=recommend][img=update]
[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
one was the best on this platform!!! if you haven't read it yet, I highly recommend it.
Well, I deleted my previous review because of two important things. My update schedule will be every day at 20:30 GMT+7 until further notice. The second point is that I didn't give my novel 5 stars and that is blasphemy, Why did you just think I'm shameless? I'm not, I totally didn't feel envious of all the other authors that do the same. Finally, I'm writing this novel for fun (at least currently)! Moreover, it is my first time writing anything. If that was not enough, English is not my first language. But don't worry! I'm using two different grammar correcting software! So, it shouldn't be bad, I hope you don't leave because of this. I hope I didn't forget anything... I actually did! Any questions or suggestions about the novel write below. I will answer all of them unless they are nonsense of course. And please refrain from using swear words. If you don't like something about my novel, tell me normally. I only have the outline of the plot and some stacked chapters so changing things is possible!
The novel is very interesting, you have daily updates, and the grammar have improved during the course of the story. There are barely any grammmatical errors in later chapters. Give it a try I don't think you will regret it!