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I like this book a lot I hope it's not dropped. But I am seeing there are a lot of inconsistencies with the character names. Is this a translation from another novel?
This review is based on the free chapters. Most transmigration stories I've read start fairly chill and happy (the process), but that wasn't the case for Su Lun, our MC. Su Lun isn't even the innocent type either. He's got quite an interesting history/background story himself. When I think about alchemy, I first think of FMA with Edward and Alphonse Elric. The concept of alchemy feels similar to it. The story itself is pretty interesting, but don't rely on WN getting the names correct. Some of them have multiple names and one poor guy had more than he could possibly count with both hands.
It starts out with an isekai (meh) and then the rollercoaster blasts off. We slowly learn more an more about MC over the chapters and his adventures in this steam punk world, where he has to survive in a world with different rules and norms.
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Read the original and it was brilliant. Its a great take on alchemy and a steam punk esk background with an underground city as the main area. All in all brilliant!
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Will be one of best trial novel ever............................................. ....... ............. .............................................. ....... ....
The story is interesting but the inconsistencies in character names are giving vibes that the author isn't committed to the story development 😔
I like this book a lot I hope it's not dropped. But I am seeing there are a lot of inconsistencies with the character names. Is this a translation from another novel?
This review is based on the free chapters. Most transmigration stories I've read start fairly chill and happy (the process), but that wasn't the case for Su Lun, our MC. Su Lun isn't even the innocent type either. He's got quite an interesting history/background story himself. When I think about alchemy, I first think of FMA with Edward and Alphonse Elric. The concept of alchemy feels similar to it. The story itself is pretty interesting, but don't rely on WN getting the names correct. Some of them have multiple names and one poor guy had more than he could possibly count with both hands.
It starts out with an isekai (meh) and then the rollercoaster blasts off. We slowly learn more an more about MC over the chapters and his adventures in this steam punk world, where he has to survive in a world with different rules and norms.
Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months
Read the original and it was brilliant. Its a great take on alchemy and a steam punk esk background with an underground city as the main area. All in all brilliant!
Reveal Spoiler Will be one of best trial novel ever............................................. ....... ............. .............................................. ....... ....
The story is interesting but the inconsistencies in character names are giving vibes that the author isn't committed to the story development 😔