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Still in doubt about this story. It honestly have a great potential but the whole story with the mc have been too dark. Plus the system was like not helping him at all. I remember that it's supposed to be the norm Ai but I expected it to somehow answer the host in some ways like how Google or Siri answer. The focus of the story is kinda just the cover. And didn't show the content, the reactions or how they did it. Honestly have big expectations but oh well it's fine. Keep up the good work! Hoping for some upgrade (?)
5 Stars just because it's a game making system. The plot feels quite forced and you dont really get any idea on how well hi games are doing.
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had high hopes but alas its another system slave. i don't like when the systems has more power over u then u are in control of it. like it was given to serve not the other way around
keep going author!! very nice novel! word count word count word count word count word count word count word count
mediocre work at best. mc is super weak. both in character and physical strength. also the system is at most a decorations so mostly tagged systems should be removed.
Es muy buena la historia ojala el desarrollo del personaje termine convirtiendo al MC en villano o antihéroe ----------------------------------
No focus on game creation. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
The plot feels forced and the game development isn't great doesn't show how successful the game he upload doesn't even have an statistic on how many played the game he upload he and it's super focus on the character development... very disappointed
There's pretty much no game design, just overly dramatic and forced plot and it's kinda cringe to be honest. And from the looks of it, the story only gets updated 3 times a month with short-ish chapters, and nothing really interesting has happened.
Honestly this story although it has the appearance of a fanfic focusing on the creation of games, in fact it focuses more on the development of the MC, the drama and tragedy than the games that the mc creates and abandons soon after, very disappointed
sigh* another one who doesn't know how good of a potential the story is, to just drop it in the end and not update again. 🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟
The novel is fine, but it is true that you have some points that detract from its quality. First of all, the games are made so that the next chapter is abandoned, it does not teach the repercussions, updates of the game, reaction of the players, nothing. It is simply done so that in the next chapter you may say something else and pad the next game. Otherwise it's fine. Although I must say that the scene in which the police were going to arrest the MC and put him in prison, when this is a MINOR who defended himself from a murderer who was going to kill him with his gun. I look very fake and not very credible and more coming from Gordon who is a pretty fair cop.
I read every single game design fanfic on this site and I watched them get dropped I'm hoping this won't be like the others eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Author Please Add #Dark and #Tragedy Tag. Cauz. Seriously other then Fic. Cover this novel seems like some fresh novel where you will see some people reaction on games and all(Competetives maybe), Not some mentally-broken-depressed guy with tragedy back story(before reincarnation) and still living tragedy life(after reincarnatiom) where even god will sympthise with his back story while still giving him broke-system and New dark-life where all clichès will happen just for making it more depressing plot.
Cool........WHAT THE THERE ARE..........................................................................................................DOTS
Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this...
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Hopefully this one doesn't get dropped like the others. I mean it's the dc world this time i hope that it means it will do good. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . Never gonna give you up never gonna let you down never gonna run around and desert you
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what he said above.................................................... ............................................ ...... ..... ...........................................
maybe DC will break the curse of being dropped that haunts game making novels onWebnovel....................................................
This is a constructive criticism and I assure you, you need it: 1. Inconsistent updates. If you are dead, RIP. If you are alive, just say it is dropped or put on 1 chapter why. 2. No game development whatsoever. No marketing. Not even livestreaming as the bread and butter of an game creator fic. 3. Useless system. It may also killed you as it was too restricting and doesn't even give rewards. Time dilation? What about outside? A metahuman without any fighting skills is useless. The MC should go to a Parallel World instead, not DC. 4. Too much games on a short time even irl is a bad marketing. 5. The MC is too weak-minded. His notes got even stolen by an "hero", and doesn't even care about it?! This is a letdown 1 star. I recommend rewriting it.
Reveal Spoiler Still in doubt about this story. It honestly have a great potential but the whole story with the mc have been too dark. Plus the system was like not helping him at all. I remember that it's supposed to be the norm Ai but I expected it to somehow answer the host in some ways like how Google or Siri answer. The focus of the story is kinda just the cover. And didn't show the content, the reactions or how they did it. Honestly have big expectations but oh well it's fine. Keep up the good work! Hoping for some upgrade (?)
5 Stars just because it's a game making system. The plot feels quite forced and you dont really get any idea on how well hi games are doing.
ffhkkbgggeiyrkhrydtdkydtdiydjgdjtdjtsutssutstssysymsy.anys gaysutsyagrwyreutwuttdjdjtdjtdiyriyiei5eu5su5sutsutsutsi5sursutsutsiyidiyfoufiydutudutsutsiyidiydutdiydiydiydutdiyidutsutxutdiydiydiydiydiydiydu5dutdiy
Reveal Spoiler had high hopes but alas its another system slave. i don't like when the systems has more power over u then u are in control of it. like it was given to serve not the other way around
keep going author!! very nice novel! word count word count word count word count word count word count word count
mediocre work at best. mc is super weak. both in character and physical strength. also the system is at most a decorations so mostly tagged systems should be removed.
Es muy buena la historia ojala el desarrollo del personaje termine convirtiendo al MC en villano o antihéroe ----------------------------------
No focus on game creation. ........................................................................................................................................................................................
The plot feels forced and the game development isn't great doesn't show how successful the game he upload doesn't even have an statistic on how many played the game he upload he and it's super focus on the character development... very disappointed
There's pretty much no game design, just overly dramatic and forced plot and it's kinda cringe to be honest. And from the looks of it, the story only gets updated 3 times a month with short-ish chapters, and nothing really interesting has happened.
Honestly this story although it has the appearance of a fanfic focusing on the creation of games, in fact it focuses more on the development of the MC, the drama and tragedy than the games that the mc creates and abandons soon after, very disappointed
sigh* another one who doesn't know how good of a potential the story is, to just drop it in the end and not update again. 🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟
The novel is fine, but it is true that you have some points that detract from its quality. First of all, the games are made so that the next chapter is abandoned, it does not teach the repercussions, updates of the game, reaction of the players, nothing. It is simply done so that in the next chapter you may say something else and pad the next game. Otherwise it's fine. Although I must say that the scene in which the police were going to arrest the MC and put him in prison, when this is a MINOR who defended himself from a murderer who was going to kill him with his gun. I look very fake and not very credible and more coming from Gordon who is a pretty fair cop.
I read every single game design fanfic on this site and I watched them get dropped I'm hoping this won't be like the others eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Author Please Add #Dark and #Tragedy Tag. Cauz. Seriously other then Fic. Cover this novel seems like some fresh novel where you will see some people reaction on games and all(Competetives maybe), Not some mentally-broken-depressed guy with tragedy back story(before reincarnation) and still living tragedy life(after reincarnatiom) where even god will sympthise with his back story while still giving him broke-system and New dark-life where all clichès will happen just for making it more depressing plot.
Cool........WHAT THE THERE ARE..........................................................................................................DOTS
Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this... Please don't drop this...
interesting..............................................................................................................................................................................................
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Hopefully this one doesn't get dropped like the others. I mean it's the dc world this time i hope that it means it will do good. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . Never gonna give you up never gonna let you down never gonna run around and desert you
Interesting 🧐 ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
what he said above.................................................... ............................................ ...... ..... ...........................................
maybe DC will break the curse of being dropped that haunts game making novels onWebnovel....................................................
This is a constructive criticism and I assure you, you need it: 1. Inconsistent updates. If you are dead, RIP. If you are alive, just say it is dropped or put on 1 chapter why. 2. No game development whatsoever. No marketing. Not even livestreaming as the bread and butter of an game creator fic. 3. Useless system. It may also killed you as it was too restricting and doesn't even give rewards. Time dilation? What about outside? A metahuman without any fighting skills is useless. The MC should go to a Parallel World instead, not DC. 4. Too much games on a short time even irl is a bad marketing. 5. The MC is too weak-minded. His notes got even stolen by an "hero", and doesn't even care about it?! This is a letdown 1 star. I recommend rewriting it.
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