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ABSOLUTELY magnificent, a new take on the monster and super power ridden novels, the new way the author uses the system is refreshing. Can’t wait for more !
Unrealistic responses to every situation. Basic world building, but not immersive. Tough to stay interested when the main character switches so easily from childish to "mature." Author can't seem to decide what they want him to be.
i give this a five in writing because i don't see much mistakes four in updating because the updates aren't daily and story develop a 2 because i don't really see any development and the character design a 3 three because the mc is kinda unique but other then that the story is generic i cant really find anything unique about this i can find about more five stories like this its to generic for my taste so i cant really read but decent story thro and its a good read for those new to web novel but for veteran's i don't recommend
I would say it's a worst copy of solo leveling,BUT it is still nice to read nonetheless and the fact that Adam and the bully turned out to be good friends and etc was kinda weird,like it just didn't feel too well planned out it was like too rushed like first second hate next second they become my little pony friends so yeh but nonethess epic
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i havent read it yet but i like the title so im gonna give it a five star ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
well quite good plot line though quite cliche , I think making the story more immersive and detailing the character's and event would make the novel better
Absolutely absorbed in every chapter I have read so far. Super interesting twist on the world/system setup. I'm interested to see how the mc will be developed. Can't wait to see where it goes, loving it so far. I definitely recommend![img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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It's not every day you stumble upon an amazing novel. But today was. I was hooked within the first four chapters and cant wait for more chapters to come out.
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Good book but bland MC, He's got a high strength but low intelligence, make it higher cause you cant fight only with strength, sometimes you need to use your brain to think fast.
I recommend this novel! It's very sweet and systematic as it should be. The perfect backstory aka motivation for a great character in the works, and I should say I really enjoyed reading, I liked the grammar, it really flows well! Keep going!
The writing is a strong point. Descriptions are well done, and the first chapter does a good job of setting the scene. Future chapters are needed to fully see how good the story and characters will develop, but a very good start.
Amazing work from the author. They took something pretty basic and added some spices to it I can't wait to see how this will turn out.
I'm in love with the premise!! A boy with a system living in NYC is something I never heard of before. The author really surprised me with the amount of realistic aspects in this fantasy story. Please keep writing this one
Despite being at only three chapters, it's clear to see that there is a lot to love here. There is instant intrigue set with the very first section of the very first chapter, so don't worry about waiting very long to get into the story. It quickly sets the world up that you'll be exploring from each chapter beyond in its own unique enviroment.
It's a really good plot and this story will shine and keep doing the good work I am super excited for new chapters to keep going, my friend
Exciting Premise, although it is only two chapters right now, it's fascinating, especially after seeing his status. I'm looking forward to Adam's adventure. I wish there were more chapters; I'm hungry for more. I have collected it and can't wait.
Long chapters is what everyone loves! obviously I'm included in that... As for the story..so far so good! I won't say much because only 2 chapters are released and we have alot to discover I think this will be a great story!! Keep up the good work author!! oh BTW I joined the contest too lol
Rating this with a 5.0 Overall because despite this chapter having only 2 chapters it really does attract readers and for that I'm happy to say I saved this book in my library and will read whenever I get time keep it up and update the next chapter keep it up !!!oh I almost forgot I love the characters too.
The story so far is exactly what I was looking for a refreshingly down to earth Litrpg. The MC has to worry about very human concerns and a system that doesn't understand or care about the human experience. In my opinion its an excellent start.
Although in the early chapters, it shows great promise. Can't wait to see what the author has planned for the future. Please keep writing and good luck.
So far, so good. Very impressed by the writing and plot. I can really walkthrough the events of the character very clearly. Don’t stop writing!
Hello readers! I was hoping to hear your thoughts and answer all questions that you may have about the novel so far. Things you should know first; 1) I encourage all opinions. I will do my best to acknowledge your opinions and answer your questions. 2) This novel is still in the initial chapters and I will reveal more details about the world as the story progresses. 3) Every volume will contain 20 chapters. 4) The current uploading schedule will change with the beginning of volume 2. 5) There is absolutely no Harem in this story. 6) The MC's character will continuously grow with the story, so don't expect a perfect MC from the beginning. Hope you're having a good day and thank you for continuing to support my novel! -Yoroshee
ABSOLUTELY magnificent, a new take on the monster and super power ridden novels, the new way the author uses the system is refreshing. Can’t wait for more !
Unrealistic responses to every situation. Basic world building, but not immersive. Tough to stay interested when the main character switches so easily from childish to "mature." Author can't seem to decide what they want him to be.
i give this a five in writing because i don't see much mistakes four in updating because the updates aren't daily and story develop a 2 because i don't really see any development and the character design a 3 three because the mc is kinda unique but other then that the story is generic i cant really find anything unique about this i can find about more five stories like this its to generic for my taste so i cant really read but decent story thro and its a good read for those new to web novel but for veteran's i don't recommend
I would say it's a worst copy of solo leveling,BUT it is still nice to read nonetheless and the fact that Adam and the bully turned out to be good friends and etc was kinda weird,like it just didn't feel too well planned out it was like too rushed like first second hate next second they become my little pony friends so yeh but nonethess epic
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i havent read it yet but i like the title so im gonna give it a five star ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
well quite good plot line though quite cliche , I think making the story more immersive and detailing the character's and event would make the novel better
Absolutely absorbed in every chapter I have read so far. Super interesting twist on the world/system setup. I'm interested to see how the mc will be developed. Can't wait to see where it goes, loving it so far. I definitely recommend![img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update]
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It's not every day you stumble upon an amazing novel. But today was. I was hooked within the first four chapters and cant wait for more chapters to come out.
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Good book but bland MC, He's got a high strength but low intelligence, make it higher cause you cant fight only with strength, sometimes you need to use your brain to think fast.
I recommend this novel! It's very sweet and systematic as it should be. The perfect backstory aka motivation for a great character in the works, and I should say I really enjoyed reading, I liked the grammar, it really flows well! Keep going!
The writing is a strong point. Descriptions are well done, and the first chapter does a good job of setting the scene. Future chapters are needed to fully see how good the story and characters will develop, but a very good start.
Amazing work from the author. They took something pretty basic and added some spices to it I can't wait to see how this will turn out.
I'm in love with the premise!! A boy with a system living in NYC is something I never heard of before. The author really surprised me with the amount of realistic aspects in this fantasy story. Please keep writing this one
Despite being at only three chapters, it's clear to see that there is a lot to love here. There is instant intrigue set with the very first section of the very first chapter, so don't worry about waiting very long to get into the story. It quickly sets the world up that you'll be exploring from each chapter beyond in its own unique enviroment.
It's a really good plot and this story will shine and keep doing the good work I am super excited for new chapters to keep going, my friend
Exciting Premise, although it is only two chapters right now, it's fascinating, especially after seeing his status. I'm looking forward to Adam's adventure. I wish there were more chapters; I'm hungry for more. I have collected it and can't wait.
Long chapters is what everyone loves! obviously I'm included in that... As for the story..so far so good! I won't say much because only 2 chapters are released and we have alot to discover I think this will be a great story!! Keep up the good work author!! oh BTW I joined the contest too lol
Rating this with a 5.0 Overall because despite this chapter having only 2 chapters it really does attract readers and for that I'm happy to say I saved this book in my library and will read whenever I get time keep it up and update the next chapter keep it up !!!oh I almost forgot I love the characters too.
The story so far is exactly what I was looking for a refreshingly down to earth Litrpg. The MC has to worry about very human concerns and a system that doesn't understand or care about the human experience. In my opinion its an excellent start.
Although in the early chapters, it shows great promise. Can't wait to see what the author has planned for the future. Please keep writing and good luck.
So far, so good. Very impressed by the writing and plot. I can really walkthrough the events of the character very clearly. Don’t stop writing!
Hello readers! I was hoping to hear your thoughts and answer all questions that you may have about the novel so far. Things you should know first; 1) I encourage all opinions. I will do my best to acknowledge your opinions and answer your questions. 2) This novel is still in the initial chapters and I will reveal more details about the world as the story progresses. 3) Every volume will contain 20 chapters. 4) The current uploading schedule will change with the beginning of volume 2. 5) There is absolutely no Harem in this story. 6) The MC's character will continuously grow with the story, so don't expect a perfect MC from the beginning. Hope you're having a good day and thank you for continuing to support my novel! -Yoroshee