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heheheheheheehe fun very fun a very fun development of the original work, some jumps in the plot but that doesn't get in the way, those who have read the original can see the speed, but those who don't, can still understand the story
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This is good, keep up the good work author. This is the first Martial peak fanfic that I've read. I only hope that you will not drop this😁😁😁
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Solo un consejo, no hagas harem pokemon, ademas no dejes que el mc abandone a la chica para despues conocerla unos 200 capitulos despues y la chica siga arrojandose a los brazos del mc cuando sabe que se fue por otra chica.... Como los mc de akikan que son decepcionantes a pesar de que su idea inicial era buena :/
There are very few martial peak fanfic I hope you don't drop.................................. ....................................................................
Interesting Martial Peak fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I haven't started this novel but since the time Martial Peak ended I started to feel empty.... I really hope you will continue and that you will keep his previous harem and add a few that were forgotten by the author like Hu Mei're and her twin(first world, the pink haired twins), Bi luo(first world Shang Qing Luo maid), An ling'er( Nive heaven holy land saintess), Yang yang (shadowed star and previously, star boundary) or even Smile old ancestor (black ink battlefield) and Zhang Ruoxi (star boundary and black ink battlefield). Also is it possible to keep most of his power like the dragon bloodline (for me it's a must cause it follow Yang Kai during all his adventure and affect him a lot even in the last arc "black ink battlefield", The demon eyes (same as the dragon bloodline), the soul warming lotus(same as the previous and even more(not the dragon bloodline) cause it affect his soul development.
it's always nice to see to see A martial Peak fanfiction. the start is quite interesting and I hope it's stays interesting. though the Grammer May need some editing but it is quite readable and I hope it will improve over time. you are doing a great job Arthur keep going
Good novel, at the beginning the Mc seem to much of a pervert ( Iater it seems that he calm down a bit, and I hope it stay like that), but now I like how the plot of the story is not fast neither slow and that the mc progress slower than the original Yang Kai, ( should be like that, knowing the plot or not, the fact that he is new to a cultivation world without cheats doesn’t change, should be harder for him, unless you give some cheats later on), also mentioning that he had learn martial arts from xia Ning Chan or from the world he came from, would be great, because how he is able to fight with Xia without knowing how to throw a punch.. Also I like how the relationship with Xia Ning Chan is rather slow, because obviously he is know as a weakling without talent, so she should have her reservations, I am pro harem, small or big or massive, doesn’t matter but i like when the relations aren’t rushed and have a meaning, and I hope that the characters can maintain the personalities from the novel, and hoped that you don’t dropped because all the martial peak novels i have read were dropped, and you actually have good grammar and the story seems interesting, be careful with the next asesinations beacuse it is weird that the grand elder doesn’t have safety measures for his grandson, but i like how after the “bad guys” lose their purpose he killed Them, to avoid further trouble. Well the updating stability seems alright till now, i think 1-2 chapter a days? And i would try to give a short review after every chapter as chapter comment, and keep up the good work and i hope you don’t dropped this, just ignore the bad reviews from cringe people, and when a you have 30+ chapter more views are gonna come for sure. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp]
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I do not understand the purpose we end up with an mc who arrives in history court, so people who know the martial peak but who do not know the history very well cannot read it
heheheheheheehe fun very fun a very fun development of the original work, some jumps in the plot but that doesn't get in the way, those who have read the original can see the speed, but those who don't, can still understand the story
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This is good, keep up the good work author. This is the first Martial peak fanfic that I've read. I only hope that you will not drop this😁😁😁
I like the story ......................................................................................................................................
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Solo un consejo, no hagas harem pokemon, ademas no dejes que el mc abandone a la chica para despues conocerla unos 200 capitulos despues y la chica siga arrojandose a los brazos del mc cuando sabe que se fue por otra chica.... Como los mc de akikan que son decepcionantes a pesar de que su idea inicial era buena :/
There are very few martial peak fanfic I hope you don't drop.................................. ....................................................................
Interesting Martial Peak fanfic.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I haven't started this novel but since the time Martial Peak ended I started to feel empty.... I really hope you will continue and that you will keep his previous harem and add a few that were forgotten by the author like Hu Mei're and her twin(first world, the pink haired twins), Bi luo(first world Shang Qing Luo maid), An ling'er( Nive heaven holy land saintess), Yang yang (shadowed star and previously, star boundary) or even Smile old ancestor (black ink battlefield) and Zhang Ruoxi (star boundary and black ink battlefield). Also is it possible to keep most of his power like the dragon bloodline (for me it's a must cause it follow Yang Kai during all his adventure and affect him a lot even in the last arc "black ink battlefield", The demon eyes (same as the dragon bloodline), the soul warming lotus(same as the previous and even more(not the dragon bloodline) cause it affect his soul development.
it's always nice to see to see A martial Peak fanfiction. the start is quite interesting and I hope it's stays interesting. though the Grammer May need some editing but it is quite readable and I hope it will improve over time. you are doing a great job Arthur keep going
Good novel, at the beginning the Mc seem to much of a pervert ( Iater it seems that he calm down a bit, and I hope it stay like that), but now I like how the plot of the story is not fast neither slow and that the mc progress slower than the original Yang Kai, ( should be like that, knowing the plot or not, the fact that he is new to a cultivation world without cheats doesn’t change, should be harder for him, unless you give some cheats later on), also mentioning that he had learn martial arts from xia Ning Chan or from the world he came from, would be great, because how he is able to fight with Xia without knowing how to throw a punch.. Also I like how the relationship with Xia Ning Chan is rather slow, because obviously he is know as a weakling without talent, so she should have her reservations, I am pro harem, small or big or massive, doesn’t matter but i like when the relations aren’t rushed and have a meaning, and I hope that the characters can maintain the personalities from the novel, and hoped that you don’t dropped because all the martial peak novels i have read were dropped, and you actually have good grammar and the story seems interesting, be careful with the next asesinations beacuse it is weird that the grand elder doesn’t have safety measures for his grandson, but i like how after the “bad guys” lose their purpose he killed Them, to avoid further trouble. Well the updating stability seems alright till now, i think 1-2 chapter a days? And i would try to give a short review after every chapter as chapter comment, and keep up the good work and i hope you don’t dropped this, just ignore the bad reviews from cringe people, and when a you have 30+ chapter more views are gonna come for sure. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp]
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Reveal Spoiler
I do not understand the purpose we end up with an mc who arrives in history court, so people who know the martial peak but who do not know the history very well cannot read it