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CP_Strats

I read 187 chapters, there was almost no character development, the relationship he was in was so bland and honest a hindrance to the story that it probably should have been a thing. The story was fine, most of the time I had no doubt of failure from the Mc, so no suspense, which it's a fanfic so very few do that anyways. Some parts seemed to drag on way to long. If you are fine with a slow story, with bland undeveloped characters, with useless relationships then give it a read, other than that it was pretty disappointing

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Godof_OMINI

To be honest tgis novel made me want to be a part of Hollywood to be honest I don't have anything to say against this novel, it's good stuff and doesn't focus solely in the system and makes the mc work more with the system giving a helping hand................ its really refreshing read a urban non magical novel that feels magical

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YupThatsNotMe

Why is this not updating, You need to write some chapters. He will be making Pirates of the Caribbean, You can't leave at such a big cliffhanger.

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HopeNotToBe

Need more updates !!![img=faceslap][img=update]

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moonie11355

Another great story from the author. Basically, not the most original, but the story and writing is done well, what more can I ask for. I highly recommend this story as well.

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justjohn

I love the novel so far. Especially the part where he edits the movies and books to either fit in with the world's culture and history or to improve it. I'd like to see more of these edits instead of outright copying these Movies and Books word for word and scene to scene. I love how he edited the Harry Potter series, and I hope this can continue on to other projects, especially Naruto that was teased for the future. I can't wait for Will Evan's into the Anime Market.

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thelightedghost

I am in love with the story. Others on the author's position would have definitely gone down the power route to get rid of flies but the MC doesn't and I am all in for it. But for God's sake please be more chapters. I get upset seeing only 2 or 3 chapters a week though I am sure the author has legitimate reason to do so. Sorry for the rant. Keep up the good work

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Fanficismyheaven

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Shafi_Khan_6872

Man we are waiting for the next chapter of mhs but left like this come on I know you love money like everyone does but you to look after your fans as well who there for you when started from nothing now that you have made it you look at us mhs fans nothing cuz this is a fanfic and you are making that much from power stones so you left it like this very ๐Ÿ˜ž ๐Ÿ˜ž ๐Ÿ˜ž

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cornelius_Rojema

The story is great for movie lovers as we get a lot of reference and liked it a lot but didn't notice that the updates were stopped two months ago, has it been dropped.

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Rajat_Rawat_5896

LOVED the story. As an avid MCU fan , I can't wait for it to come into fruition. Bombard me with as many chapters you can and I will not complain.

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comedy_for_the_end

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Rangga_S

Saya tidak mengerti mengapa banyak yang menyukai novel konyol ini. Apa karna saya yang memiliki selera membaca yang rendah? Apa karna genre hollywood hanya sedikit di webnovel? Jika anda menyukai novel bertema hollywood, cobalah membaca di website lain, di webnovel anda hanya akan membuang buang waktu untuk membaca sampah seperti novel ini.

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SonofVenom

One of the best I've ever read hope to see the Transformer franchise soon

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Gena_Ro
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very well written, what I wonder is whether to continue with this novel, I see that it is no longer updated????? Does anyone know something???

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Kancha_T

This story started out well enough with good potential but slowly went downhill. Especially the later chapters around 170 or so, it feels like the author has given up and just writing for the sake of it. Many wrong choices were made and I observed that the author will ignore fans and viewers opinion. I feel that the main reason behind the downfall of this story is that the author wants to focus and succeed the work he's earning money from. That's not a bad thing. Sure this is a free fanfic. But you had loyal readers for this story as well. And it feels disappointing that a good author will ignore that and then continue experimenting on what he thinks is an inferior story. I don't mean to be so harsh in this review but I was one of the many fans who had high hopes for this story. Unless this gets an edit, this is it. I thank you for your updates and wish you all the luck!

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AuthoriTet

I really loved the story, I was hyped whenever I read a new chapter and stuff, typical novel fan behavior. But then in chapters 185 and above, the novel's quality dropped, and with tons of unnecessary developments, June became a filmmaker because she wants to be a better actor?(IDK how that works, she says it's to get a stable foothold in Hollywood which she can get just by getting better into better films BCS her acting is good(i think)) I highly recommend you read this up to at least chapter 180 then drop it, you'll only be disappointed, the latest chapter has this potential sharing knowledge function which I think is super unnecessary and annoying. It almost has a similar level of annoying to fanfics with 2 isekaid mc's.

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SonofVenom

Love this story, highly recommended and hope it updates soon

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Bringing spiderman to life would never be easy.. I applaud you for showing it's greatness expecialy for us fans .... Good work. The love for harry Potter will always be legendary.. make it shine . Tolkien deserves a special touch.. am sure u're up for the challenge

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The story base Has a wonderful setting and the idea behind the aspect of the characters is fascinating.. but I feel it glosses over things too quickly you need to slow down and find your own pace

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Mahmanisnotasimp

Quick and honest review. I honestly love this novel more than the other novel you have which is Rise in Hollywood. The only thing that cut me off is that there's several hint that the Mc would do that would destroy the while novel and that is him saying his system and his reincarnation to June. And I don't like it. My everyday stone is being poured down in here. EVERY STONE!

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Newtherkami

La historia es muy buena para lo que buscaba leer, tengo rato que no encuentro historias con este desarrollo y muy bien estructuradas. En realidad esperaba que el autor se enfocara mas en esta historia que las otras 2 que ya tiene lanzada porque esta es mejor, me leรญ las otras dos pero no me llamaron la atenciรณn, demasiado aburridas para mi. Sin embargo yo mismo se que eso no podrรก ser asรญ y se nota como el autor esta mas enfocado en la de "Versatile Superstar Rise In Hollywood" que en esta, debido a que este tipo de historia solo tiene un final y es SER BLOQUEADA o no tener final (por las cuestiones sensibles de PLAGIO que realiza el MC en la historia), un ejemplo de esto tรญpico es IRAS (Iโ€™m Really a Superstar).

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DaoistcgstbY

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DotComplex

When the author released not one but TWO new books and asked us to support them, we were assured that it would in no way affect the daily updates of MHS. I was doubtful of this politician-like promise as MHS, being a fanfic, earns him nothing, but I was willing to give him the benefit of the doubt. Sure enough, while his other books update regularly MHS has seen 2 updates in 12 days. I could stomach it if the author came forward and admitted to his mistakes, saying that he had overreached - but no, he just neglects his promise and this work in favor of more successful ones as far as I can see. I'm very tempted to go to his other books and one-star spam those with an army of alts, but I'd like to think I'm not THAT petty. Still, I am disappointed to say the least, and I'm sure many of your fans who supported you from day 1 are too.

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Isabel_Krafft

Overall it's very good! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Zero10ne

Writing Quality - Pretty good, not a lot of mistakes that are noticeable and can mostly be ignored. Story - You can expect him to be overpowered and doesn't make the effort to conceal that as he jumps from one project to another. Though I can say that after the initial introduction to the script and pre-production, the author speeds through with the production and postproduction process. For example, actor films this, director dialogue and some scene filming, time skip, release day, people are surprised at box office, MC did it again, rinse and repeat. All of this is about 150 chapters in, so there's a good chance that it might keep this pacing for a while. Although monotonous, I can say it is a relaxing read as you see MC dominates the Hollywood with one success after another. Character Design - Not much to talk about, character in the story after all are based on real life people like Robert Downy Jr, and other prevalent movie stars we see on the big screens. At least there is a guideline of what their personality is like when introduced in the story. MC himself is pretty much like any other MC that got a system, use system get famous, work hard, repeated emphasize on not getting arrogant, and quote "smart, talented, handsome" you get the gist. Romance - Oh boy, I think the author flopped on this one. June feels like a filler character that is in place so that MC be in a relationship for the sake of being a relationship. It is rather uninteresting as June is mentioned when MC is on break and then quickly forgotten. Well, if you want a novel with an MC that plows through everything in his way might be a good option while ignoring the romance.

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Jacob_Barna

Great Book well thoughtout and is one of my favorite genre being the MC gets extremley rich and famous but the growth isnt to slow/quick so its a well balanced mix.

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Dreamer_25

The story is really great. I can't wait to read the new chapters.pleade upload new chapters as soon as possible. Can't wait to read more chapters

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CP_Strats

I read 187 chapters, there was almost no character development, the relationship he was in was so bland and honest a hindrance to the story that it probably should have been a thing. The story was fine, most of the time I had no doubt of failure from the Mc, so no suspense, which it's a fanfic so very few do that anyways. Some parts seemed to drag on way to long. If you are fine with a slow story, with bland undeveloped characters, with useless relationships then give it a read, other than that it was pretty disappointing

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Godof_OMINI

To be honest tgis novel made me want to be a part of Hollywood to be honest I don't have anything to say against this novel, it's good stuff and doesn't focus solely in the system and makes the mc work more with the system giving a helping hand................ its really refreshing read a urban non magical novel that feels magical

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YupThatsNotMe

Why is this not updating, You need to write some chapters. He will be making Pirates of the Caribbean, You can't leave at such a big cliffhanger.

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HopeNotToBe

Need more updates !!![img=faceslap][img=update]

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moonie11355

Another great story from the author. Basically, not the most original, but the story and writing is done well, what more can I ask for. I highly recommend this story as well.

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justjohn

I love the novel so far. Especially the part where he edits the movies and books to either fit in with the world's culture and history or to improve it. I'd like to see more of these edits instead of outright copying these Movies and Books word for word and scene to scene. I love how he edited the Harry Potter series, and I hope this can continue on to other projects, especially Naruto that was teased for the future. I can't wait for Will Evan's into the Anime Market.

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thelightedghost

I am in love with the story. Others on the author's position would have definitely gone down the power route to get rid of flies but the MC doesn't and I am all in for it. But for God's sake please be more chapters. I get upset seeing only 2 or 3 chapters a week though I am sure the author has legitimate reason to do so. Sorry for the rant. Keep up the good work

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Fanficismyheaven

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Shafi_Khan_6872

Man we are waiting for the next chapter of mhs but left like this come on I know you love money like everyone does but you to look after your fans as well who there for you when started from nothing now that you have made it you look at us mhs fans nothing cuz this is a fanfic and you are making that much from power stones so you left it like this very ๐Ÿ˜ž ๐Ÿ˜ž ๐Ÿ˜ž

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cornelius_Rojema

The story is great for movie lovers as we get a lot of reference and liked it a lot but didn't notice that the updates were stopped two months ago, has it been dropped.

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Rajat_Rawat_5896

LOVED the story. As an avid MCU fan , I can't wait for it to come into fruition. Bombard me with as many chapters you can and I will not complain.

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comedy_for_the_end

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Rangga_S

Saya tidak mengerti mengapa banyak yang menyukai novel konyol ini. Apa karna saya yang memiliki selera membaca yang rendah? Apa karna genre hollywood hanya sedikit di webnovel? Jika anda menyukai novel bertema hollywood, cobalah membaca di website lain, di webnovel anda hanya akan membuang buang waktu untuk membaca sampah seperti novel ini.

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SonofVenom

One of the best I've ever read hope to see the Transformer franchise soon

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Gena_Ro
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very well written, what I wonder is whether to continue with this novel, I see that it is no longer updated????? Does anyone know something???

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Kancha_T

This story started out well enough with good potential but slowly went downhill. Especially the later chapters around 170 or so, it feels like the author has given up and just writing for the sake of it. Many wrong choices were made and I observed that the author will ignore fans and viewers opinion. I feel that the main reason behind the downfall of this story is that the author wants to focus and succeed the work he's earning money from. That's not a bad thing. Sure this is a free fanfic. But you had loyal readers for this story as well. And it feels disappointing that a good author will ignore that and then continue experimenting on what he thinks is an inferior story. I don't mean to be so harsh in this review but I was one of the many fans who had high hopes for this story. Unless this gets an edit, this is it. I thank you for your updates and wish you all the luck!

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AuthoriTet

I really loved the story, I was hyped whenever I read a new chapter and stuff, typical novel fan behavior. But then in chapters 185 and above, the novel's quality dropped, and with tons of unnecessary developments, June became a filmmaker because she wants to be a better actor?(IDK how that works, she says it's to get a stable foothold in Hollywood which she can get just by getting better into better films BCS her acting is good(i think)) I highly recommend you read this up to at least chapter 180 then drop it, you'll only be disappointed, the latest chapter has this potential sharing knowledge function which I think is super unnecessary and annoying. It almost has a similar level of annoying to fanfics with 2 isekaid mc's.

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SonofVenom

Love this story, highly recommended and hope it updates soon

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Bringing spiderman to life would never be easy.. I applaud you for showing it's greatness expecialy for us fans .... Good work. The love for harry Potter will always be legendary.. make it shine . Tolkien deserves a special touch.. am sure u're up for the challenge

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The story base Has a wonderful setting and the idea behind the aspect of the characters is fascinating.. but I feel it glosses over things too quickly you need to slow down and find your own pace

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Mahmanisnotasimp

Quick and honest review. I honestly love this novel more than the other novel you have which is Rise in Hollywood. The only thing that cut me off is that there's several hint that the Mc would do that would destroy the while novel and that is him saying his system and his reincarnation to June. And I don't like it. My everyday stone is being poured down in here. EVERY STONE!

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Newtherkami

La historia es muy buena para lo que buscaba leer, tengo rato que no encuentro historias con este desarrollo y muy bien estructuradas. En realidad esperaba que el autor se enfocara mas en esta historia que las otras 2 que ya tiene lanzada porque esta es mejor, me leรญ las otras dos pero no me llamaron la atenciรณn, demasiado aburridas para mi. Sin embargo yo mismo se que eso no podrรก ser asรญ y se nota como el autor esta mas enfocado en la de "Versatile Superstar Rise In Hollywood" que en esta, debido a que este tipo de historia solo tiene un final y es SER BLOQUEADA o no tener final (por las cuestiones sensibles de PLAGIO que realiza el MC en la historia), un ejemplo de esto tรญpico es IRAS (Iโ€™m Really a Superstar).

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DaoistcgstbY

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DotComplex

When the author released not one but TWO new books and asked us to support them, we were assured that it would in no way affect the daily updates of MHS. I was doubtful of this politician-like promise as MHS, being a fanfic, earns him nothing, but I was willing to give him the benefit of the doubt. Sure enough, while his other books update regularly MHS has seen 2 updates in 12 days. I could stomach it if the author came forward and admitted to his mistakes, saying that he had overreached - but no, he just neglects his promise and this work in favor of more successful ones as far as I can see. I'm very tempted to go to his other books and one-star spam those with an army of alts, but I'd like to think I'm not THAT petty. Still, I am disappointed to say the least, and I'm sure many of your fans who supported you from day 1 are too.

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Isabel_Krafft

Overall it's very good! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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Zero10ne

Writing Quality - Pretty good, not a lot of mistakes that are noticeable and can mostly be ignored. Story - You can expect him to be overpowered and doesn't make the effort to conceal that as he jumps from one project to another. Though I can say that after the initial introduction to the script and pre-production, the author speeds through with the production and postproduction process. For example, actor films this, director dialogue and some scene filming, time skip, release day, people are surprised at box office, MC did it again, rinse and repeat. All of this is about 150 chapters in, so there's a good chance that it might keep this pacing for a while. Although monotonous, I can say it is a relaxing read as you see MC dominates the Hollywood with one success after another. Character Design - Not much to talk about, character in the story after all are based on real life people like Robert Downy Jr, and other prevalent movie stars we see on the big screens. At least there is a guideline of what their personality is like when introduced in the story. MC himself is pretty much like any other MC that got a system, use system get famous, work hard, repeated emphasize on not getting arrogant, and quote "smart, talented, handsome" you get the gist. Romance - Oh boy, I think the author flopped on this one. June feels like a filler character that is in place so that MC be in a relationship for the sake of being a relationship. It is rather uninteresting as June is mentioned when MC is on break and then quickly forgotten. Well, if you want a novel with an MC that plows through everything in his way might be a good option while ignoring the romance.

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Jacob_Barna

Great Book well thoughtout and is one of my favorite genre being the MC gets extremley rich and famous but the growth isnt to slow/quick so its a well balanced mix.

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Dreamer_25

The story is really great. I can't wait to read the new chapters.pleade upload new chapters as soon as possible. Can't wait to read more chapters

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