Spider-Man: New World

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TM_Orbit

I personally belive you have not projected peters personality well, I am saying that becuase first he would be freaking out way more and how he got transported to a new universe, also on how he standed up to flash I don’t think with the way Peter acts even as a adult will he use agrassion to harm another person even if they deserve it that’s just not how Spider-man is

LV 4

Cosmic_Witcher

Good start need more chapter [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 4

Darkpotter

your awesome bro 😀😀😀😀😀😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😍😍😍😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😁😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😀😆😆😆😆😉😉😁

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G2l

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LV 3

Kal_Thanatos

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So far the book is looking really good. Thanks for the latest update need more chapters fast[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Spider-Man is one of my favorite character and this was a nice start. Please update fast[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 1

Last_Kryptonian

Chapter 1 was good [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]. Need more chapters fast. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]