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ITS INCOMPLETE!!! Where is the ending? Why did you leave us hanging??? It’s been one year!!! Please give us a proper ending! What happened to Lucy and Lucinda????
The story is okay but I don't vibe with the FL that much. There are some grammatical errors but that's fine. It would be nice if the Author stuck to one point of view and would not switch from first to third POV. Overall, the story is okay, kinda.
where is the remaining of the story??? i want to know what happens to the twins!
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Our author here ran away from the ending leaving us in suspense and a trauma of finishing novels hahaha
I really loved this novel! It was very original and the characters had great interaction and back story. We had action, romance, mystery and more. This was a satifying read and I hope we get more side story as I fell in love instantly with this cast of characters!!❤️❤️❤️
The story is very nice, but there was a lot of writing error, the characters were perfect and the story was intriguing. I was captivated throughout the story, but then, is that really the end?
i love it but the end could have been little different it didn't give clear ending as there would be a 2nd part.but the book is good Raphael and hazels story is well told with many twist i loved it.
Captivated by the characters from the start! A great beginning that sucks you in right away and a strong FL gets me everytime. The ML is equally as intriguing. I have yet to put the novel down! A completed story, where o can read nonstop! Another great novel by a special author!! I am hooked.😍😍😍
in the beginning, the story was slow and coming to an end it was completed in a hurry as well as not satisfied with the ending, so it dropped my impression .
hey author ....why u left the book in th middle??u can give proper ending right?please complete it .we are giving time to read your novel and at the end we come to know that novel is not ended properly
you left it just like that!!! ??? the book is not complete!! you ddn't even give a happy ending for the family but only for the empire , for only those normal human,witch and vampire, you gave a good life for anne having a happy family with declan and their children but for rafael and hazel,,, just like that?? is money only matters the most??? , you really hurt me so bad😶😶😶😶😶 , i checked your other books but sadly i'm afraid to read another new stories again not just your books but to other books too,, just because of you😢😢😢 you left me hanging 😭😭😭
The story is good. However, it needs some serious editing, other than that the story is good.
Just love it! Hazel is a brilliant character and you get to know her well but always gives you a surprise. I'm addicted now :c
I really really dislike ml being vampire etc, and readers being fooled into thinking that these horrid creatures can be beautiful and loving yet suck blood or behave in abnormal inhumane ways to stay alive. Yuck 🤮🤮🤮 just too many novels written this way these days.
so far I'm into the book but it does seem super slow for any type of actions. that's the only downfall .
so far so good author keep up the good work [img=Smitten][img=Smitten] I love ur work and am looking forward to reading more of ur work in the future thank you for this great book [img=Smitten][img=Smitten]
the title of thsi book gave me cancer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing story I could literally see the authors point of view, not done yet but the story is to die for I get a feeling that hazel is a witch tho❤️😌keep up the good work
A must read! The story gotvme hooked, but I must say there are some parts you left me confused. The switching POvs and those characters indication only left me clueless as to what happened. But in anyway, the story is exciting. I just started reading it now, and I'm in the 32nd chapter! Kudos to you for writing this.❤️
Badly written. Constantly jumping from 1st Person to 3rd person view and it was very confusing to the readers
The author is specialized in creating strong FLs. I love the way how Hazel’s character is written. She is strong, witty, practical , uses her brain to evaluate and not run into life n death situations…now that is the thing needed instead of pushing urself to have more n more troubles and waiting for help… A must read if you love fantasy and strong, witty FLs.
I love the story, though there's still some errors with the words but that ok the story is great enough for me to continue reading it! Even though I still far from the end/latest chapter, I already love the Protagonist and her mindset, I hope she don't disappoint me as the story progresses. Good Work Author[img=recommend]
Is this a translation from a Korean novel? Because I don't understand why there are so many typos? Pronouns are wrong, the identity of a narrator is inconsistent. I liked the story, but dropped it at chapter 20 when my patience ran out.
I LOVE this story. It is so good😍😍😍 I love how it is SO detailed 🤩🤩🤩🤩 and I guess you could say inspiring in a fiction way 😁😊[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp]
Excellent book. So addicting. Keep it up! Ps: can I know who made the book cover please? I'm a beginner to this app and interested in publishing my own book.
Author I come to drop the comment here to claim the side stories you promised us to drop in 1week after the story posted "Completed" since last year. Please be value your readers who spend times and a lot of coins to read your story but the end just gave us hanging on and disappointed. Come to complete your story please Author!
ITS INCOMPLETE!!! Where is the ending? Why did you leave us hanging??? It’s been one year!!! Please give us a proper ending! What happened to Lucy and Lucinda????
The story is okay but I don't vibe with the FL that much. There are some grammatical errors but that's fine. It would be nice if the Author stuck to one point of view and would not switch from first to third POV. Overall, the story is okay, kinda.
where is the remaining of the story??? i want to know what happens to the twins!
Reveal Spoiler Our author here ran away from the ending leaving us in suspense and a trauma of finishing novels hahaha
I really loved this novel! It was very original and the characters had great interaction and back story. We had action, romance, mystery and more. This was a satifying read and I hope we get more side story as I fell in love instantly with this cast of characters!!❤️❤️❤️
The story is very nice, but there was a lot of writing error, the characters were perfect and the story was intriguing. I was captivated throughout the story, but then, is that really the end?
i love it but the end could have been little different it didn't give clear ending as there would be a 2nd part.but the book is good Raphael and hazels story is well told with many twist i loved it.
Captivated by the characters from the start! A great beginning that sucks you in right away and a strong FL gets me everytime. The ML is equally as intriguing. I have yet to put the novel down! A completed story, where o can read nonstop! Another great novel by a special author!! I am hooked.😍😍😍
in the beginning, the story was slow and coming to an end it was completed in a hurry as well as not satisfied with the ending, so it dropped my impression .
hey author ....why u left the book in th middle??u can give proper ending right?please complete it .we are giving time to read your novel and at the end we come to know that novel is not ended properly
you left it just like that!!! ??? the book is not complete!! you ddn't even give a happy ending for the family but only for the empire , for only those normal human,witch and vampire, you gave a good life for anne having a happy family with declan and their children but for rafael and hazel,,, just like that?? is money only matters the most??? , you really hurt me so bad😶😶😶😶😶 , i checked your other books but sadly i'm afraid to read another new stories again not just your books but to other books too,, just because of you😢😢😢 you left me hanging 😭😭😭
The story is good. However, it needs some serious editing, other than that the story is good.
Just love it! Hazel is a brilliant character and you get to know her well but always gives you a surprise. I'm addicted now :c
I really really dislike ml being vampire etc, and readers being fooled into thinking that these horrid creatures can be beautiful and loving yet suck blood or behave in abnormal inhumane ways to stay alive. Yuck 🤮🤮🤮 just too many novels written this way these days.
so far I'm into the book but it does seem super slow for any type of actions. that's the only downfall .
so far so good author keep up the good work [img=Smitten][img=Smitten] I love ur work and am looking forward to reading more of ur work in the future thank you for this great book [img=Smitten][img=Smitten]
the title of thsi book gave me cancer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Amazing story I could literally see the authors point of view, not done yet but the story is to die for I get a feeling that hazel is a witch tho❤️😌keep up the good work
A must read! The story gotvme hooked, but I must say there are some parts you left me confused. The switching POvs and those characters indication only left me clueless as to what happened. But in anyway, the story is exciting. I just started reading it now, and I'm in the 32nd chapter! Kudos to you for writing this.❤️
Badly written. Constantly jumping from 1st Person to 3rd person view and it was very confusing to the readers
The author is specialized in creating strong FLs. I love the way how Hazel’s character is written. She is strong, witty, practical , uses her brain to evaluate and not run into life n death situations…now that is the thing needed instead of pushing urself to have more n more troubles and waiting for help… A must read if you love fantasy and strong, witty FLs.
I love the story, though there's still some errors with the words but that ok the story is great enough for me to continue reading it! Even though I still far from the end/latest chapter, I already love the Protagonist and her mindset, I hope she don't disappoint me as the story progresses. Good Work Author[img=recommend]
Is this a translation from a Korean novel? Because I don't understand why there are so many typos? Pronouns are wrong, the identity of a narrator is inconsistent. I liked the story, but dropped it at chapter 20 when my patience ran out.
I LOVE this story. It is so good😍😍😍 I love how it is SO detailed 🤩🤩🤩🤩 and I guess you could say inspiring in a fiction way 😁😊[img=update][img=recommend][img=coins][img=exp][img=fp]
Excellent book. So addicting. Keep it up! Ps: can I know who made the book cover please? I'm a beginner to this app and interested in publishing my own book.
Author I come to drop the comment here to claim the side stories you promised us to drop in 1week after the story posted "Completed" since last year. Please be value your readers who spend times and a lot of coins to read your story but the end just gave us hanging on and disappointed. Come to complete your story please Author!