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its painful and pls study the abilities in naruto since its painful how he uses things with the chackra alone should be able to do like bruh
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The fact that he tells every random nobody about his powers and the clans ruined it for me
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Nice story though i find some things annoying i still love Haku and appreciate that someone had actually made a story with him as the Main Character
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I thought i had already voted for this? Guess not anyways is Haku going to have a love interest? If so who will it be? Tsu? Though i prefer Jirou i won't mind other's ......... ......... .........
When is the next update this story is amazing like seriously there should be more stories about Haku in other worlds especially bnha By the way are you planning on making Haku use his Ice-Release? Cause be hasn't used it that much I mostly wanna se him use the Mirrors to trap his enemies and strike them quickly like he did in the anime since they won't be able to detect where he's gonna attack form next
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This would have been a good story if the writer actually explained things properly
its painful and pls study the abilities in naruto since its painful how he uses things with the chackra alone should be able to do like bruh
Reveal Spoiler The fact that he tells every random nobody about his powers and the clans ruined it for me
nicccceeeeeeeee.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Nice story though i find some things annoying i still love Haku and appreciate that someone had actually made a story with him as the Main Character
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I thought i had already voted for this? Guess not anyways is Haku going to have a love interest? If so who will it be? Tsu? Though i prefer Jirou i won't mind other's ......... ......... .........
When is the next update this story is amazing like seriously there should be more stories about Haku in other worlds especially bnha By the way are you planning on making Haku use his Ice-Release? Cause be hasn't used it that much I mostly wanna se him use the Mirrors to trap his enemies and strike them quickly like he did in the anime since they won't be able to detect where he's gonna attack form next
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This would have been a good story if the writer actually explained things properly