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Good plot My only problem is me being able to predict what’ going to happen It makes it very boring But everything else was good Good plot My only problem is me being able to predict what’ going to happen It makes it very boring But everything else was good
There is a place to grow, the novel needs to be more mysterious rather than being straightforward which kinda makes it to be predictable. But overall i liked the creative use of words and the picture that was creative and witn that i can give this novel a 4/5
The characters should be explored a bit more. They are a little too 2D for my tastes. Overall the story is going in the right direction but you should dedicate a full chapter to a character's POV
Good plot My only problem is me being able to predict what’ going to happen It makes it very boring But everything else was good Good plot My only problem is me being able to predict what’ going to happen It makes it very boring But everything else was good
There is a place to grow, the novel needs to be more mysterious rather than being straightforward which kinda makes it to be predictable. But overall i liked the creative use of words and the picture that was creative and witn that i can give this novel a 4/5
The characters should be explored a bit more. They are a little too 2D for my tastes. Overall the story is going in the right direction but you should dedicate a full chapter to a character's POV